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I have 186 stories published in 23 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 280058 times and 240 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1085 of my 3,697 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1097 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton. I love to write but get distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought. My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

I think that everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have short stories published in a horror anthology by @thealienbuddha, anthology Vol.IV by @LoftPublishing and flash fiction at @paragraphplanet.

Poems of mine have been published by @thealienbuddha (The Alien Buddha Gets Rejected) and @blackboughpoems (Winter-Christmas Anthology 2023).

I have new stories published in 2023 by @darkwinterlit and @thealienbuddha (Halloween anthology and ABZ55 at ABP) along with appearing in an anthology by @LoftPublishing (Anthology Vol V).

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

New Amsterdam

Our electric train glided to a stop, humanity spilled onto waiting platforms, worn stairs signposted sidewalk Heaven, steam rose from polluted Subway...
Cherry

Forgotten Souls

I see you late at night, as daylight’s candle flickers out, empyrean canvas painted black, stars of alabaster speak in hushed tones. Moonlight beams...
Cherry

Corinne of the School Disco

Steve “Stevo” Mason looked at his watch. He was always checking the time like it might go faster through the power of his gaze. He knew the bell was...

The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

I live in a mansion in the country. This is no ordinary mansion; it’s an M&S mansion. Well, it’s not actually but it does house a library of...

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...

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1085 of my comments have received 1097 Great Feedback votes

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It was lovely to hear you

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

It was lovely to hear you read live, Rhiannon. Enjoyed reading the written versions just now (the link to your second story is broken).

 

Wishing you a peaceful, Good Friday :) 

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That must have been tough

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

That must have been tough listening to Daphne's ravings. It sounds like she has been through such a lot. 78 week waiting list for neurology?! That's horrendous but probably where the NHS is as a whole. Good on your daughter for being so...

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Good to see you so active

Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023

Good to see you so active with these recent rambles, Rhiannon. Another enjoyable walk with you. I like the images of the kites gliding and the sheepdogs at work. Happy Easter to you. Paul 

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Eesh....sounds like you have

Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023

Eesh....sounds like you have been through the mill. I hope the mop up surgery goes well. It always amazes me how well you write these accounts considering what you have gone through. There will be people reading who are going/have gone/will go...

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Looks like the weather Gods

Posted on Wed, 05 Apr 2023

Looks like the weather Gods were against you at the start of this adventure. Crick's not far from me! Looking forward to reading more.. 

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I think Paris is meant to be

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

I think Paris is meant to be designed in a way that everything is accessible within a few minutes, regardless of where you live. Interesting concept. Nicely done again [Should that say "villages within cities"?] Paul 

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"limbs of trees blue-tits and

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

"limbs of trees blue-tits and sparrows chorus..."

 

A beautiful, summer meditation. Enjoyed, Jenny :) 

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Nicely done, Rhiannon. Yes,

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

Nicely done, Rhiannon. Yes, green spaces are invaluable but you put forward some balance re drawbacks of living out in the countryside. As always, great rhythm and rhyming. Keep well. Paul 

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Thanks for reading, CM.

Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2023

Thanks for reading, CM. Gutted not to hear your story in full. I will be front and centre, ready to buy your latest novel when it gets published. 

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I agree with Jenny. If feels

Posted on Sun, 02 Apr 2023

I agree with Jenny. If feels like you have fun with this plot whilst keeping the standard high. The dialogue fizzes as ever. Keep 'em coming :)

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