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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1010713 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1552 of my 4,873 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1571 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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The Artist of Swanage Downs

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-artist-of-swanage-downs-audio The Artist of Swanage Downs Torchlight flashes across dark...
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Gold cherry

St Audrey's Bay Waterfall

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/st-audreys-bay-waterfall-mp3 St Audrey’s Bay Waterfall Blue skies harbour cumulous clouds,...
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Cherry

The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)

You can read part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/miracle-maldon-part-one-three You can read part two at: https://www.abctales.com/...
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Gold cherry

The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/miracle-maldon-part-one-three The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three) Mr King jiggled a key...
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Cherry

The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

Draft for a 3-part story. The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three) The moon hung low in a blue sky, an intruder on a twilight horizon. The day was...
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1552 of my comments have received 1571 Great Feedback votes

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"There is an earthy romance

Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024

"There is an earthy romance of song in early autumn’s golden hour.."

What a wonderful opening line. Blends beautifully into a haunting tale. The poem lingers long after being read. Immaculate, Lena.

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"… What’s a “holiday”?’"

Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2024

"… What’s a “holiday”?’"

Oof...that's a powerful last line leaving all kinds of issues in the reader's mind. Of course, we often take holidays for granted but many don't get them for lots of reasons. Maybe it's the child's first holiday....

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Posted in ‘What’s up??’

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That's an interesting analogy

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

That's an interesting analogy - slaying the far-right dragon. Maybe although we tend to over simplify with labels and terms. Social unrest only really goes away when the root cause for the issues are resolved or at least seen to be given time and...

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Posted in The New King Arthur Slays His First Dragon! By Alfred N.Muggins

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"..when trees flecked with

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

"..when trees flecked with fireflies in magical lightshow,

flickering rhythm encountered as lightening flashes.."

That's a highly visual, magical sequence of images. Just gorgeous, Jenny.

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Posted in Enchanted insects

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This wonderfully evocative

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

This wonderfully evocative poem drawn from another time and place is a joy to read. That's why it's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

I have added a picture to promote your work on social media. Please let me know if you...

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Posted in Before Maps Were Made

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It's another irrestible mix

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

It's another irrestible mix of magic and intrigue. Looking forward to reading more :)

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There's a sense of euphoria

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

There's a sense of euphoria at the story's climax. Yet still the frailties of the human condition shine through. As ever, you lead the reader through a tale that reads like a modern fable. Enjoyed as always.

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"I’m learning how to shear

Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024

"I’m learning how to shear alpacas.." That's exactly the kind of thing my daughter would do!

The family dynamics are done so well, Jane. Vanessa's relationship with her quirky offspring and the nuances of how this contrasts with the...

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Posted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34

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That's a big twist and the

Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2024

That's a big twist for the Muggins time-travel saga. Waves of immigration from the past! I can't wait to read what happens next. Can Henry VIII re-take his kingdom in another time? Read on. And I will!

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.7 by Alfred Muggins (himself) The Real Henry VIII Finds His Feet In 21st Century England! Ch.7 Part 1

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"..bring peace in some

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

"..bring peace in some measure where there’s fighting now.." Wise words, Rhiannon. And more relevant than ever with the conflicts currently ongoing.

I so hope that "..love will flow earthwide.."

Beautifully expressed words.

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