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I have 232 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 806782 times and 311 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1492 of my 4,705 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1508 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Raven Returned

An homage to my favourite poem “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-raven-returned-mp3 The Raven...
Gold cherry

Anniversary

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/anniversary-mp3 When we promise to remember Anniversary Time slipping away like sands, ground...
Gold cherry

Back In Kansas

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/back-in-kansas-mp3 Back in Kansas Lightening zags across a cobalt horizon, splintered,...
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Cherry

In a Land of Magicians

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/in-a-land-of-magicians-mp3 If you believe in something enough, can it become real? In a Land...
Cherry

An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

This is an adaptation of the story of the Pied Piper of Hamlin which is also a Grimm’s fairy tale Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-...
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1492 of my comments have received 1508 Great Feedback votes

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"A causeway of slimy stones

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

"A causeway of slimy stones

As green as beer bottles

Shattered and scattered.."
 

That an evocative poem with pen pictures drawn so distinctly.

Took me to another time and place.

Fine work indeed.

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Posted in Tang Hall Beck

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"A family of bears had a nice

Posted on Sat, 20 Jul 2024

"A family of bears had a nice little cottage,
Mother Bear made them their breakfast porridge.."

That's an inventive take on the classic story.

Very enjoyable, Rhiannon.

And a lovely picture :)

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I always though mum went to

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

I always thought mum went to Iceland. Hmmm....maybe that was an ad...

That's a very creative poem about Eric/Iceland. It's actually very clever the way you have interwoven the theme of country and store, blending humour with dry...

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Posted in Eric’s War

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Was talking about Putin only

Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024

Was talking about Putin only yesterday. History has a habit of repeating itself so I wondered whether he would be airbrushed from history in the same way Stalin was in Russia after his death. I'm sure they would make good soul brothers if they...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"Vanessa suddenly remembered

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

"Vanessa suddenly remembered what Cher sounded like with autotune.." Made me laugh...I think I know the song you are referring to.

You have built up to this latest set-piece so well. I can only imagine how Spencer will get on at a festival...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 29

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Well at least Masoud

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

Well at least Masoud Pezeshkian won the run-off to become the President in Iran. A relative moderate, he now needs to dial down the influence of the Theocrats. Let's hope it leads to better relations with the West and other countries in that...

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Posted in An Easter Message Of Confusion from Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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Another wonderful instalment.

Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024

Another wonderful instalment.

It's a privilege being able to follow your latest work-in-progress, Sean.

This is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

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Posted in The Left-Handed Son

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"..don’t bring your sister

Posted on Mon, 15 Jul 2024

"..don’t bring your sister

she’s too Jung to go."

Ah yes, cleverly done and very entertaining to read.

 

I imagine this is intended below in the way the words merge together? You are so creative with your poetry so...

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Posted in An Anarchist Evening at the Magic Theatre

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Nicely paced as always and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Jul 2024

Nicely paced as always and a meaningful finale. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The things we do for love

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Thanks for those links, Di.

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

Thanks for those links, Di.

I guess the shopping list of issues to be resolved will always be weighty. Human beings are a deeply flawed species. On the upside, young people seem to be more aware and in touch with things like environmental...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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