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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 344584 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1217 of my 4,044 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1231 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Star-Crossed Swans of Newport Pagnell

An urban adaptation of the fairy-tale that the ballet “Swan Lake” is based on. The Star-Crossed Swans of Newport Pagnell It is a grey, overcast day...
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Cherry

Saint Valentine

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/saint-valentine-mp3 Saint Valentine On a day of hearts and roses, San Valentino loved all,...
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Florida (1987)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/florida-1987-mp3?si=2c3f333ebb2a4a0... Florida (1987) Rays of sunlight glint through blinds,...
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The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft Part One at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/enchantress-avalon-part-one-two The...
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The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two) It’s only now that I can remember things clearly...
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1217 of my comments have received 1231 Great Feedback votes

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"Little fly that flits around

Posted on Mon, 11 Sep 2023

"Little fly that flits around
bumps into a web and bound.."

Spider's webs are a marvel of nature, aren't they? Remarkably strong. I enjoyed this, Rhiannon. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in How does the spider catch its fly?

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"..so calm...sanctuary

Posted on Tue, 12 Sep 2023

"..so calm...sanctuary

meandering with

enchantment;"

 

Moments of calm and beauty. Nicely done, Jenny (and a lovely photo) :)

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Posted in Carefree Days

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I love the sound of rain. You

Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023

I love the sound of rain. You have conjured wonderful imagery here, Rhiannon. A lovely IP response. Paul :) 

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Posted in The sounds of rain

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"...a distant chapel bell, 

Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023

"...a distant chapel bell, 

a moth that trembles to a light.."

 

A beautiful, enigmatic operetta of a poem. A pleasure to read, of  course :)

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Posted in The First Sorrow

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Nicely done, Rhiannon. It

Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023

Nicely done, Rhiannon. It took me a few goes but I can see what it says now. A lovely photo as well. Paul :)

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Posted in A riddle?

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A moment captured so

Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023

A moment captured so eloquently. Maybe the guardian of the storm heard. Let's hope the bird's spirit took flight after all. Another lovely diary entry, Jenny. Paul

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Posted in Feathers Without Hope

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Yes, I like the way the plot

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

Yes, I like the way the plot strands are coming together. It's definitely gone up a few notches in terms of tension. Looking forward to reading more, Penny. Paul

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy" 12

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"Then I really couldn’t take

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

"Then I really couldn’t take no more, ‘cause I’d been spotted by the vicar.."
A timely, Heavenly intervention by the sounds of things. I had this image of you singing this with a guitar in hand. Might be one for the next reading! A very...

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Posted in Hot Cross Bun Blues

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Yes, beautiful photos and a

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

Yes, beautiful photos and a wonderful adaptation of a beloved hymn, Rhiannon. I could hear the tune in my head as I read along. The first four lines are gorgeous, in particular. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in Wow! and How?

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I don't think Alfred had much

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

I don't think Alfred had much option but to leave. Clearly no complaint resolution system as such so frustrated customers would just reappear on the line ever more angry making the call centre operator's job impossible. Onwards to better things,...

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Posted in Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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