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I have 260 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1223065 times and 351 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1631 of my 5,082 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1668 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Dragon Gate

Dragon Gate They came during the spring near banks of oriental ochre, an amalgam of golden scales, amassed; mighty Yellow River. A brazen sun called...
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Castell Coch (Red Castle)

Castell Coch (Red Castle) The sun shifted on its summer throne as our guide gathered us like sheep, onwards through park, path and trails, pink-...
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Ley Lines

The truth is out there Ley Lines “Alfred Watkins was right, you know.” In hindsight, that’s how it started; my neighbour Joshua Smith and his crazy...
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A Cat, A Leaf and Fresh Fish

Rewritten story A Cat, A Leaf and Fresh Fish The early hours are invariably punctuated by nocturnal sounds; rodent-like scurrying amongst bins,...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-siren-titan-story-part-one... Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-...
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1631 of my comments have received 1668 Great Feedback votes

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Thanks for reading insert

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

Thanks for reading insert (and the cherries)

This is the wip I mentioned a while ago. It's my first attempt at a novel so this is the first draft opening. I started this in April 2024. Per Drew's expert advice, I've left it so I...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)

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A fair analogy. So much irony

Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025

A fair analogy. So much irony in who the persecuted were in the 40s and who the persecutors are today. Learn the lessons of history. Not everyone does, it seems.

So much angst, so eloquently expressed.

One of your finest, T. 

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Posted in Fifty-One Empty Places at the Dinner Table

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Thanks for reading, Jenny.

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2025

Thanks for reading, Jenny. Maybe the poem wouldn't have been written if I had got a pic. Who knows? What I do know is that image of them gambolling up the street together will stay with me always :) 

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Posted in The Fox and the Siamese

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This continues to be

Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2025

This continues to be compelling and engrossing.

It's today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in Dead Man: 5

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That's a poignant footnote -

Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025

That's a poignant footnote - we all suffer from the ravages of time and the change it brings with it.

A reflective mix of past and present adrioitly done. 

Great stuff, Jenny :)

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Posted in When Time Has Elapsed

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Read both parts.

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2025

Read both parts.

One of your more bitter sweet entries but, as always, thoroughly engaging and genuinely interesting.

So sorry for your feline loss and hoping you recover from your own malady. The former is always very tough to deal...

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Posted in Aura Urziceanu’s Lullaby Effect

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"..Artificial Intelligence

Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025

"..Artificial Intelligence uprising.."

Sensory overload and angst.

That's a powerful poem, Jenny.

A chord struck for many.

An absorbing poem very relevant with so much going on in the world.

Well deserved...

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Posted in Perverse Future

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“When our cat’s away,

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2025

“When our cat’s away,
where does he go?

A question many of us cat-owners ponder!

 

Lovely rhyme, rhythm and narrative that appeals to both children and adults.

Adroitly done, Rhiannon :)

 

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Posted in Little boy ponders …

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Julius Trumpenceasar. An

Posted on Sun, 08 Jun 2025

Julius Trumpenceasar. An interesting parallel. Will Musk be caught holding the dagger?

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Posted in Trumpenstein on the Ides of March (an unbidden Historical Fantasy) by Alfred N.Muggins

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That might be one of the

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025

That might be one of the longest bracketed entries I've ever read.

Always interesting to catch up on Alfred's latest thoughts.

Trumplicon still courting most headlines. He's a busy bee. 

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Posted in Chronicles of Trumpenstein : Suspicions of a Modern Coup! By (As Distant As Possible!) Armchair Commentator Alfred N.Muggins

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