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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 889081 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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A View of the Hudson

A View of the Hudson He drinks a Styrofoam coffee at sunset on the roof of the world, indigo skies turn amber, over tall, grey buildings, Macy’s in...
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The Great and Secret Show

The Great and Secret Show She says let me show you a secret and takes me by the trusting hand, we sweep over upland meadows, mossy dew kissing...
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Cherry

Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

Some believe that love can transcend time Why does it always rain in graveyards? Why does it always rain in graveyards? Of course, the reality is...
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Cherry

Resolution

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/resolution-mp3 (re-recorded inadvertently with a clock ticking in the background. Decided to...
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Cherry

In-between Days

In-between Days Those days between Christmas and New Year are lost somewhere in the mists of time. Endless, with no apparent rhyme or reason, people...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"Fading into night, stars

Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024

"Fading into night, stars

intrinsic to space and time

twinkle.."

There's a tale of passion, Jenny. Adriotly crafted and poetically narrated.

I love the imagery, as ever.

Of course...I'm left wondering if it's...

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Posted in Stormy Night Of Passion

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Free markets economics v

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024

Free markets economics v state controlled. Neither works in their purest form. The solution lies in an appropriate mix. In the meantime, we all just try and do the best we can to get through it.

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Posted in Party Election Leaflets : Delivering Economic Stability? By Alfred N.Muggins

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A belated happy birthday.

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024

A belated happy birthday.

Yes, I enjoyed looking at those photos as I have on Instagram. You have a keen eye for an interesting shot.

Your love of Europe..and Bulgaria shines through (the rain).

Another insightful, accessible...

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Posted in A Tale of Two Balkan Cities

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Read both parts. Really

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Read both parts. Really enjoyed. You have left it in a way that it could be added to.

Of course, an important underlying message about the environment but delivered in a way that avoids sledgehammer lack of subtlety. Let the reader absorb...

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Posted in The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 2

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Gloriously surreal with an

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2024

Gloriously surreal with an important underlying message. You write in first person so well. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The fickleness of new daylight

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A deftly crafted elegy of

Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024

A deftly crafted elegy of sorts. I imagine this was a real person?

There's a lot going on between these lines underpinned by your trademark humour. I could touch and feel the conflicting emotions largely driven by religious undertones....

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Posted in Kathleen’s Secret

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Loved the ending, Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Loved the ending, Jenny.

A message for our time. Environment over greed.

If everyone followed this mantra, the world would be a much better place!

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Posted in John's Conscience

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"What a gift to the country,

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2024

"What a gift to the country,
what a gift to our world
the little beetle’s waste management
cleaning up our environment!"

I enjoyed the pulsing rhythm and rhyme of this.

It really is an interesting story and very...

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Posted in Pasture-Cleaners

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It's a curious one isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 25 Nov 2024

It's a curious one isn't it? Back to the old rhetoric of trade tariffs and deporting migrants. The world gets ever stranger.

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Posted in Liberal Disaster! by Alfred N.Muggins

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"...robin flaunts red breast

Posted on Sat, 23 Nov 2024

"...robin flaunts red breast in

display, showing authority

this chilly day...."

 

That's a beautiful seasonal poem full of vivid imagery.

Love the pen picture of possibly my favourite bird of all. I adore robins...

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Posted in Winter Dreams

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