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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1306407 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1695 of my 5,266 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1738 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Diner

Diner Outside the diner at 385 Sixth Avenue, humanity ebbed and flowed. It would often take a brief pause to eat then continue on in its mysterious...
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Gold cherry

Blagdon Lake in Winter

For Louise Glück Blagdon Lake in Winter Silver skies. Ephemeral light glints on Blagdon Lake. The geese are gone now. I hear echoes of wind chimes...
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Cherry

The Other Side of Paradise

The Other Side of Paradise I can still remember standing at the side of a dirt track, a sodium-coloured sun high in the sky. The heat made the air...
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This England

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/this-england This England Ancient land of myths and legend where a man once pulled a mighty...
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Cherry

Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate-part-two-...
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1695 of my comments have received 1738 Great Feedback votes

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"Their hands cannot reach

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

"Their hands cannot reach around the world."

Where's there's life, there's hope. And ragu an apt metaphor.

Imagistic and profound. Adriotly done, Lena.

 

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Posted in Seasoned

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"He had lost count of how

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2025

"He had lost count of how many tables had gone to their after life thanks to the continual and frequent machinations of his wife Mrs Muggins, a lady most obsessed with tables"

I'm with Insert - what's going on with those tables?! :)

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Posted in Birthday Blues by Alfred Muggins

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‘I’m off now, meeting my bird

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025

‘I’m off now, meeting my bird,’ Eesh...I remember saying stuff like that once. 

Yes, I like the idea of a doggy guardian of the lift. I can just imagine that.

Looking forward to reading the next part already. 

 

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 7

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Supply chains are inter

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2025

Supply chains are inter-connected and often span the Globe. The Law of Unintended Consequences very much in play when applying artifical changes to an established economic model. Trump's tariffs have been declared illegal again in court. What a...

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Posted in The Archmoron Himself by Alfred N.Muggins

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Lots of rain around at the

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Lots of rain around at the moment.

Life is about moments and they can catch us when we least expect them.

You have an eye for capturing what many would miss, Jenny.

Keep distilling them into poetry for us :)

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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Still gripping, still

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

Still gripping, still engaging, still classy.

[Teeny typo: Jade opened the door. “Diner is served.” Thomas waved at the table..Should that read 'dinner is served?']

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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"..settling like

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

"..settling like

faerie folk, colours on pallet create

summer blooms.."

A lack of motivation and/or inspiration comes to us all in the end. Writing at sites like this makes such a difference as you encounter people that take...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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"Turn on the lights – they

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2025

"Turn on the lights – they saw
drifting plankton, bioluminescent  creatures glowing.."

I like the way the poem pivots around the lights coming on. It makes it highly visual. I can only imagine the biodiversity at the bottom of the...

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Posted in From the Chinese Bathyscaphe, Striver

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I can see Alfred Muggins as

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I can see Alfred Muggins as the next President. Why not? Literally anything is possible in the USA!

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Posted in Elected!: Alfred Muggins Considers Entering American Politics!

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That's great. Thank you!

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2025

That's great. Thank you!

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Posted in A Tale Of Four Stones

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