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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 970443 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1550 of my 4,867 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1569 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Eric the Viking

Well here it is, post 150. Never thought I would make it this far. This is a rewritten story. Hopefully, this is tighter. Based on a true story (but...
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Cherry

A View of the Hudson

A View of the Hudson He drinks a Styrofoam coffee at sunset on the roof of the world, indigo skies turn amber, over tall, grey buildings, Macy’s in...
Gold cherry

The Great and Secret Show

The Great and Secret Show She says let me show you a secret and takes me by the trusting hand, we sweep over upland meadows, mossy dew kissing...
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Cherry

Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

Some believe that love can transcend time Why does it always rain in graveyards? Why does it always rain in graveyards? Of course, the reality is...
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Cherry

Resolution

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/resolution-mp3 (re-recorded inadvertently with a clock ticking in the background. Decided to...
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1550 of my comments have received 1569 Great Feedback votes

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The uninhibited voice that

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2024

The uninhibited voice that blurts out inner thoughts is such fertile ground for comedy and drama. Much more to come from this story, I'm sure.

The dialogue is credible and the pacing works well.

Keep going!

Merry Christmas...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 44

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A happy ending and a right

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2024

A happy ending and a right palava by the sounds of it. It's as though fate intervened to help when you noticed those plane tickets going. [Lullaby by the Cure is about a nightmare involving a spider trying to eat Robert Smith. Hmmmmm]

I...

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Posted in The Day of the Drone - Luton to the Rescue

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Reading this made me think of

Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2024

Reading this made me think of "Planes, Trains and Automobiles" - a movie I adore. I have you down as the Bulgarian Steve Martin. There are many wonderful, altruistic people in the world and some appear in your story. Coming to the rescue of a...

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Posted in The Day of the Drone - Gatwick Misery

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That's a joyful update, Jenny

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024

That's a joyful update, Jenny.

So glad you have made it out of that tunnel.

Bright times ahead for you.

Keep smiling and hoping you are having a wonderful Yuletide :)

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Posted in Bright Side Of Life

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Three Wise Men....hard to

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

Three Wise Men....hard to come by, these days. Clever adaptation paralleling events of today. Nicely done, Alfred.

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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Beautifully paced.

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2024

Beautifully paced.

It takes patience to keep going for so long and maintain a high standard.

The searching online for answers certainly resonates with me. It's funny how quickly you go from thinking that it's only you that's ever...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 43

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That's an emotive piece

Posted on Mon, 16 Dec 2024

That's an emotive piece written with such compassion.

I didn't know Julia but can touch and feel how special she was through your words.

I guess that can be the gift of writing - a release, a way to remember, a monument to someone...

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Posted in Velvet Goldmine

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I like the way the poem moves

Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2024

I like the way the poem moves from grey and brooding to insular and snug.

A season in a nutshell.

Beautifully done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Where’s your snug?

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I enjoy Alfred digressing. It

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

I enjoy Alfred digressing. It's always an interesting read. Definitely don't side with Putin and his cronies. We have the lesser of the evils in the West. Just about.

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Posted in Caring For All The Animals (Including Humans!) and Avoiding World War 3! By Alfred N.Muggins

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Well you certainly brought

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

Well you certainly brought that very special bird to life in verse, Jenny.

Adriotly done with vivid imagery.

Lovely stuff :)

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Posted in The Bower Flame Bird

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