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I have 246 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1112406 times and 332 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1583 of my 4,966 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1608 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-siren-titan-story-part-one... Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-siren-titan-story-part-one... Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three) “No...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)

Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three) Crows perch in a line along a telegraph poll. They seem to be either staring at me or peering...
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Ranthambore

Ranthambore Morning humidity with rising haze, sub-continental sun, indigo skies, arcane land-ship of silent voyeurs, clicking cameras and stoical...
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Angel Light

When you close your eyes…do you see angels? Angel Light Glistening echoes of celestial beings, shards of light shimmer - backlit skies draped in...
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1583 of my comments have received 1608 Great Feedback votes

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"..stay silent – watchful

Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025

"..stay silent – watchful through seasons,

pride in your senescent:: Worthy Majesty."

That's a big finish, Jenny. Trees are the best of us.

A wonderful poem, right there!

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Posted in Mighty Ancient Oak

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"...about to emigrate to

Posted on Tue, 15 Apr 2025

"...about to emigrate to Australia
– facing about six weeks in the steamship?"

Imagine that, SIX WEEKS!

That's an evocative poem and fascinating historical context.

Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Gaffe!

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Nicely done, Ed. There's a

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025

Nicely done, Ed. There's a lilting flow to it that draws the reader in. 

Part 35 seems like strong progress. 

Good luck with the rest of it.

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Posted in New Directions (35)

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Read both parts so looking

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025

Read both parts so looking forward to more. 

You capture the sights, sounds and smells so well and, as ever, your eye for small detail is second to none. There's a latent empathy that you write with that makes stories like this so...

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Posted in Taking Tea - Kavinda and Me

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Thanks, Di. I've managed to

Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025

Thanks, Di. I've managed to rinse this concept for 5 years now. I really must come up wth an original idea again. Soon :)

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Posted in Boris and the Art of the Deal

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[Yes.....but....it's only

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

[Yes.....but....it's only half time. The youngsters of PSG will be quaking in their boots when 40,000+ Brummies are screaming at them at VP. Well....I can dream for a bit longer...can't I? Mighty Leeds top with 5 games to go. C'mon you whites! In...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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A rivetting read and an

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2025

A rivetting read and an engrossing story emerging. That's why this is the Facebook, X/Twitter & BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I've added a pic to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to use something else....

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Posted in Steelie 16

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That's a wonderful tale of

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

That's a wonderful tale of finding inspiration in the seemingly mundane. It's the small details that bring the story to life. I was absolutely there with you taking shelter and going on a journey long sought and now found. It's life affirming to...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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All this and still time for

Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2025

All this and still time for the Orange One to destroy the Global economy as well. He works fast. I'm sure the movie franchise "The Omen" must have had him in mind when they came up with the story!

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Posted in Pantomime President Furthers the Downfall of the Western Alliance :World War 3 Develops! : The Man Who Sold the World (turns out it was fated to be Trump all along!) by Alfred N.(not Maga!) Muggins (no relation thankfully!)

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Great dialogue and compelling

Posted on Wed, 26 Mar 2025

Great dialogue and compelling writing. 

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Good luck with the rest of the book.

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Posted in The Book: Chapter 44

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