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I have 232 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 812054 times and 311 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1498 of my 4,716 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1514 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Age of Empires

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/age-of-empires-mp3 This week marks the anniversary of Putin’s “special military operation”...
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The Edge of Heaven

The Edge of Heaven Someone once told me that love can transcend time and maybe even defeat death itself. I don’t know about that but as the future...
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Eric the Viking

Well here it is, post 150. Never thought I would make it this far. This is a rewritten story. Hopefully, this is tighter. Based on a true story (but...
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A View of the Hudson

A View of the Hudson He drinks a Styrofoam coffee at sunset on the roof of the world, indigo skies turn amber, over tall, grey buildings, Macy’s in...
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The Great and Secret Show

The Great and Secret Show She says let me show you a secret and takes me by the trusting hand, we sweep over upland meadows, mossy dew kissing...
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1498 of my comments have received 1514 Great Feedback votes

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It's always a relief to get a

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

It's always a relief to get a hospital procedure out of the way. So glad you are on the other side now, Jenny. Wishing you are a speedy recovery and I'm sure it will all have been worth it. Write again when you are ready. We will all be waiting...

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Posted in Hip Op The Second

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I guess with the oppressive

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

I guess with the oppressive regime in Afghanistan and the anti-abortion lobby in the US scorching the earth it's exceptionally tough for women in parts of the world. The word 'freedom' has never had more relevance. Well said, Maxine.

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Posted in LAWS.

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'All of them I said..." Well,

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

'All of them I said..." Well, yes!

That's a wonderfully beguiling poem

 

[Should there be just one 'her' in the line....."the sun pixelating her her hair"?]

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Posted in A different way to measure time

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Ach...Alfred will always come

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024

Ach...Alfred will always come out on top regardless. He's a talented fella and can't be put down for long.

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Posted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins

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Not sure I've ever been to

Posted on Sun, 10 Nov 2024

Not sure I've ever been to Sheffield. It sounds like most cities. When I go back to Birmingham the centre has changed again with a never ending 'road improvement scheme'.

Maybe Di's right....a metaphor for life :)

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Posted in Running the Gauntlet : Paranoid and Harrassed In The City Of His Birth! By Alfred N.Muggins

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"What began it, or what

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

"What began it, or what atavistic

thing we are atoning for forever, unknown."

I had to look up 'atavistic'.

Love this poem. So evocative with sound echoes from history.

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Posted in East Coast Scotland (Reflection)

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This flows better than the

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024

This flows better than the version posted last year (I've just re-read it) so well done on this revision. Your poem captures the essense of this time of year including its religious connotations and associations.

I enjoyed this.

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Posted in Al Hallows Eve

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I feel like I need to see Bow

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024

I feel like I need to see Bow-Fiddle Rock now.

That's a charming tale well told with its Hallowe’en trickster-dixstering.

Really enjoyed this.

Happy Halloween!

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Posted in Bus Pass on a Secret Trail

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I like the pervasiveness of

Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024

I like the pervasiveness of magic throughout and how its significance is offset against the importance of human emotions and feelings. Magic isn't all-encompassing and the plot emphasises that through the interaction of your characters. It's a...

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21

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"Dark days, wet days, grey

Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2024

"Dark days, wet days, grey days,
downpour-drenching.."

I like the juxtaposition of dark days and bright days. This poem is awash with colour and sound. Fitting for that most wonderful of seasons - autumn!

Lovely stuff,...

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Posted in Tumultuous Autumn

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