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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1283893 times and 360 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1680 of my 5,224 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1717 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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'Twas the Night Before Christmas

‘Twas the Night before Christmas The last rays of apricot-hued sunshine fade to dusk over Abington Street, an urban thoroughfare where disparate...
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Colours of Christmas

It’s December 1 st ….I’m declaring it Christmas… Colours of Christmas Dreams made of cinnamon, nights of ice, tree-light dancing on frosted panes...
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A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence) Clouds billow like gathering coal dust, telegraph-wire lined, feathers and bone watch dusk descend. Monochrome...
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Those We Leave Behind

Those We Leave Behind It feels like I have been standing in this field all my life. From here I can see the edge of town where trees and rivers...
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Eastern Sky

Eastern Sky Fractured skies. White lightening Lights up buildings. And for a moment We are blinded. Everything is shrouded. Cordite… Monochrome...
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1680 of my comments have received 1717 Great Feedback votes

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The USA - the land of

Posted on Sun, 28 Sep 2025

The USA - the land of conspiracy theories. I don't suppose we'll ever get to the truth of a lot of things. Whilst Alfred could lay low, I suspect the lure of investigative roving reporting will be too strong for him!

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Posted in Is America Coming Here? (Sleepwalkers?) by rogue reporter Alfred N.Muggins

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An enigma posed adriotly.

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2025

An enigma posed adriotly.

I don't know the answer but I'm sure someone will be along shortly to solve it.

Nicely done, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Who am I?

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You often explore the dark

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

You often explore the dark underbelly of the corporate jungle with insight and cynicism, Mark. The fragments you describe are familiar especially the verbal waterboarding that goes on around missed sales targets and weak pipelines. 

[Where...

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Posted in Kettle Violation

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Ah yes...children will make

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

Ah yes...children will make games out of anything.

That's a lovely, warm story told in poetic form.

Charming and engaging, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Appropriate!

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All caught up.

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

All caught up.

Alternate universes/the multi-verse. My favourite theories but I could be off-beam. I often am :)

It's an intriguing premise. "Through The Goo-Hole". 

 

 

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 2)

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Memories are all we are left

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

Memories are all we are left with when loved ones leave us. In that way they live on.

I enjoyed this reminiscence, especially the bit about W-s-M. 

Thank you for sharing this, Jenny. 

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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"Their hands cannot reach

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

"Their hands cannot reach around the world."

Where's there's life, there's hope. And ragu an apt metaphor.

Imagistic and profound. Adriotly done, Lena.

 

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Posted in Seasoned

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"He had lost count of how

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2025

"He had lost count of how many tables had gone to their after life thanks to the continual and frequent machinations of his wife Mrs Muggins, a lady most obsessed with tables"

I'm with Insert - what's going on with those tables?! :)

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Posted in Birthday Blues by Alfred Muggins

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‘I’m off now, meeting my bird

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025

‘I’m off now, meeting my bird,’ Eesh...I remember saying stuff like that once. 

Yes, I like the idea of a doggy guardian of the lift. I can just imagine that.

Looking forward to reading the next part already. 

 

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 7

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Supply chains are inter

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2025

Supply chains are inter-connected and often span the Globe. The Law of Unintended Consequences very much in play when applying artifical changes to an established economic model. Trump's tariffs have been declared illegal again in court. What a...

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Posted in The Archmoron Himself by Alfred N.Muggins

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