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I have 262 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1238201 times and 353 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1646 of my 5,141 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1683 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Colours of Christmas

It’s December 1 st ….I’m declaring it Christmas… Colours of Christmas Dreams made of cinnamon, nights of ice, tree-light dancing on frosted panes...
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Cherry

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence) Clouds billow like gathering coal dust, telegraph-wire lined, feathers and bone watch dusk descend. Monochrome...
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Cherry

Those We Leave Behind

Those We Leave Behind It feels like I have been standing in this field all my life. From here I can see the edge of town where trees and rivers...
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Cherry

Eastern Sky

Eastern Sky Fractured skies. White lightening Lights up buildings. And for a moment We are blinded. Everything is shrouded. Cordite… Monochrome...
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Gold cherry

The Changing of Seasons

The Changing of Seasons Skies painted silver Rain drifting on breezes. Cumulus roiling in the distance. The sigh of mountains Heaving in silence. A...
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1646 of my comments have received 1683 Great Feedback votes

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"You swim through vast oceans

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

"You swim through vast oceans of sky.."

The scene set in that very first line.

Highly spiritual and a positive affirmation. 

Beautifully done, Jenny.

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Posted in Fragments Of Life

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The story building nicely.

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

The story building nicely. Still Cary-Grantesque.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 4

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Yes, keep tnose views.

Posted on Fri, 08 Aug 2025

Yes, keep those views.

Another enchanting ramble, Rhiannon.

You are so lucky to live somewhere so beautiful.

Enjoyed, of course. And gorgeous pics. 

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Posted in Above, in 10 minutes!

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'We sat beneath great oak

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025

'We sat beneath great oak tree,

told moon and stars of our baby;

five shooting stars we saw that

night..'

A beguiling story and a charming narration.

Nicely done, Jenny. 

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Posted in Woodsman And The Medicine Woman.

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'Many from holidays. – No

Posted on Tue, 12 Aug 2025

'Many from holidays. – No internet in those days.'

A treasure trove captured so eloquently.

My father-in-law is an avid postcard collector.

Effectively...historical documents. A story to be told on each one.

A journey-...

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Posted in Discovered old postcards

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How else did such a con

Posted on Tue, 12 Aug 2025

How else did such a con artist manage to ascend the highest position of Trust in the land? 

Not once, but TWICE! Its said that making a mistake is fine as long as you learn from it. Hmmmmmm......

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Posted in The Greatest Nation On Earth! by Alfred N.Muggins

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All caught up again.

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025

All caught up again.

You definitely capture the urban landscape like a disparate portrait filled with ordinary people living challenging lives.

How slow am I? I imagine 'The Vale' is inspired by Castle Vale. I worked there once as a...

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 5

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Such a wonderful walk. I wish

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Such a wonderful walk. I wish I was actually there.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

I have added a pic to promote your piece on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to...

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Posted in before Floris

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I'm wrapped up in it too.

Posted on Tue, 29 Jul 2025

I'm wrapped up in it too. Looking forward to more!

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 3

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Read both parts.

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Read both parts.

I see what you mean about 'salty sea dog'. It was pure coicidence on my part. Honest!

More consummate travelogue. I read about your part of the world and I yearn to visit. It sounds like a place of many wonders...

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Posted in Fire and Rain

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