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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1211425 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1625 of my 5,061 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1662 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

This is the fourth entry in the series of stories at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve Mason and the Last Day of...
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North of Taiga

North of Taiga At sunrise over bleak horizons, breath frozen in an arctic tundra, winds skitter in scattered trees, seasons dream of warmer days...
Cherry

Second Life

Rewritten story Second Life Snow fell like frozen tears from colourless skies; windows frosted over in the cold. A shadow shifted on the kitchen wall...
Cherry

A Murder of Crows

A Murder of Crows Clouds brood under dark skies billowing black as coal dust, hung low, pregnant with rain, thunder rumbles like metal sheets in a...
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Poem of the week

Dragon Gate

Dragon Gate They came during the spring near banks of oriental ochre, an amalgam of golden scales, amassed; mighty Yellow River. A brazen sun called...
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1625 of my comments have received 1662 Great Feedback votes

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All caught up again. Still

Posted on Mon, 23 Jun 2025

All caught up again. Still engrossed. 

I like the whole sliding doors theme then the analogy with photons sharing the same space at the same time. Kind of Pullman-esque (quantum physics in a fantasy tale).

You write dialogue so well...

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Posted in Dead Man: 6 (ii)

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"..now I'm soaking up

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

"..now I'm soaking up euphonious

Sweet Smoke.."

Great line that one.

A dreamy reminiscense so eloquently penned. As always.

Topical with Glasto due this weekend. As much as I like the thought of festivals and...

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Posted in Let Me Go Back

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"..some blether and blather,

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

"..some blether and blather,
discuss, even fuss  –"

Some deft word play on display here, Rhiannon. Definitely immaculate rhyme and rhythm. Almost musical.

A poem executed with great skill. 

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Posted in Whatever the weather …

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I agree...Paul is a great

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

I agree...Paul is a great name :)

Close encounters of the best kind. Sometimes life surprises you. 

 

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Posted in Steak.

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Thanks for reading insert

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

Thanks for reading insert (and the cherries)

This is the wip I mentioned a while ago. It's my first attempt at a novel so this is the first draft opening. I started this in April 2024. Per Drew's expert advice, I've left it so I...

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A fair analogy. So much irony

Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025

A fair analogy. So much irony in who the persecuted were in the 40s and who the persecutors are today. Learn the lessons of history. Not everyone does, it seems.

So much angst, so eloquently expressed.

One of your finest, T. 

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Posted in Fifty-One Empty Places at the Dinner Table

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Thanks for reading, Jenny.

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2025

Thanks for reading, Jenny. Maybe the poem wouldn't have been written if I had got a pic. Who knows? What I do know is that image of them gambolling up the street together will stay with me always :) 

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Posted in The Fox and the Siamese

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This continues to be

Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2025

This continues to be compelling and engrossing.

It's today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in Dead Man: 5

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That's a poignant footnote -

Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025

That's a poignant footnote - we all suffer from the ravages of time and the change it brings with it.

A reflective mix of past and present adrioitly done. 

Great stuff, Jenny :)

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Posted in When Time Has Elapsed

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Read both parts.

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2025

Read both parts.

One of your more bitter sweet entries but, as always, thoroughly engaging and genuinely interesting.

So sorry for your feline loss and hoping you recover from your own malady. The former is always very tough to deal...

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Posted in Aura Urziceanu’s Lullaby Effect

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