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I have 256 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1185555 times and 346 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1614 of my 5,026 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1649 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Geisha

Geisha Where black rain once fell from laden Eastern skies, ichor now seeps at sunrise onto white mountain tops. In a land of bamboo walls, sliding...
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Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/hereafter-holodog-story-part-on... Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/...
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Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Two of Three)

Part One at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/hereafter-holodog-story-part-on... Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Two of Three) The last...
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Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part One of Three)

Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part One of Three) Before the midwife had even finished making sure he was breathing, Harold Newman’s fate was sealed. He...
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Tommyknocker

Trauma can take a mind to the strangest places – real and imaginary Tommyknocker I was eight years old when I last saw Tommy. At first, I never knew...
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1614 of my comments have received 1649 Great Feedback votes

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"...probably whack him with

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2025

"...probably whack him with an umbrella to get him to move out of the way. " That line made me laugh :o)

Robot Wars - I *knew* it.

That's a helluva an ending.

You've set the next sequence up so well!

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 58

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More conflict to drive the

Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025

More conflict to drive the plot. And not where you might expect to find it. 

Scandal. Robotic scandal.

Looking forward to reading more.

Keep going!

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 57

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"..stay silent – watchful

Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025

"..stay silent – watchful through seasons,

pride in your senescent:: Worthy Majesty."

That's a big finish, Jenny. Trees are the best of us.

A wonderful poem, right there!

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Posted in Mighty Ancient Oak

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"...about to emigrate to

Posted on Tue, 15 Apr 2025

"...about to emigrate to Australia
– facing about six weeks in the steamship?"

Imagine that, SIX WEEKS!

That's an evocative poem and fascinating historical context.

Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Gaffe!

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Nicely done, Ed. There's a

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025

Nicely done, Ed. There's a lilting flow to it that draws the reader in. 

Part 35 seems like strong progress. 

Good luck with the rest of it.

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Posted in New Directions (35)

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Read both parts so looking

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025

Read both parts so looking forward to more. 

You capture the sights, sounds and smells so well and, as ever, your eye for small detail is second to none. There's a latent empathy that you write with that makes stories like this so...

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Posted in Taking Tea - Kavinda and Me

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Thanks, Di. I've managed to

Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025

Thanks, Di. I've managed to rinse this concept for 5 years now. I really must come up wth an original idea again. Soon :)

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Posted in Boris and the Art of the Deal

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[Yes.....but....it's only

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

[Yes.....but....it's only half time. The youngsters of PSG will be quaking in their boots when 40,000+ Brummies are screaming at them at VP. Well....I can dream for a bit longer...can't I? Mighty Leeds top with 5 games to go. C'mon you whites! In...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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A rivetting read and an

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2025

A rivetting read and an engrossing story emerging. That's why this is the Facebook, X/Twitter & BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I've added a pic to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to use something else....

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Posted in Steelie 16

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That's a wonderful tale of

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

That's a wonderful tale of finding inspiration in the seemingly mundane. It's the small details that bring the story to life. I was absolutely there with you taking shelter and going on a journey long sought and now found. It's life affirming to...

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