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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1305123 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1694 of my 5,264 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1737 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Devil's Advocate (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Devil’s Advocate (Part Two of Three) It had been a long day and nurse Abbott...
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Gold cherry

Devil's Advocate

Devil's Advocate (Part One of Three) At the top of the world, most things look tiny although a diaphanous moon might look like a large silver coin to...
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Gold cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/steve-mason-and-last-day-school-part-one-two Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two...
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Cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

This is the fourth entry in the series of stories at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve Mason and the Last Day of...
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Cherry

North of Taiga

North of Taiga At sunrise over bleak horizons, breath frozen in an arctic tundra, winds skitter in scattered trees, seasons dream of warmer days...

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1694 of my comments have received 1737 Great Feedback votes

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Such a clever story so well

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Such a clever story so well told. There's someone out there for everyone! 

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Posted in On the verge of awakening

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Bloodsucker Vladimir Putinpot

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

Bloodsucker Vladimir Putinpot. Well...yes.

What a pantomime in Alaska. It's staggering to think that Trump is on the cusp of ending sanctions and willing to do business with someone so committed to the destruction of the West and all it...

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Posted in Mrs Muggins Goes On a Mini Tour of Italy, While the Butcher and the Clown Meet in Alaska! by Alfred N.Muggins

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Absorbing dialogue and

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Absorbing dialogue and dynamics between the characters.

All infused with magic.

Keep going, Penny!

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 31

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Thanks for following it all,

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

Thanks for following it all, Penny.

Feedback from accomplished writers like yourself is invaluable to me. 

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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It's all highly credible. You

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

It's all highly credible. You have captured the place and time with realism and empathy.

I can connect with the characters and the story line because I remember what places like Castle Vale and Chemsley Wood were like back then. I think...

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 6

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"Clustering in clouds that

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

"Clustering in clouds that shade.."

The importance of rain keeps going up as global warming bites. I marvel at the process of rain formation. One of the glories of living on this planet. A succinct and poignant vignette, Rhiannon. Very...

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Posted in That all-important molecule!

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"Nomadic riffs

Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025

"Nomadic riffs

Echoes of Rajasthan

Oh the Roma, Mama

They travelled with the Roma

Horses, camels, caravans

A living metronome..."

What a vivid portrayal. I loved the section above, in particular.

A...

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Posted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)

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"You swim through vast oceans

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

"You swim through vast oceans of sky.."

The scene set in that very first line.

Highly spiritual and a positive affirmation. 

Beautifully done, Jenny.

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Posted in Fragments Of Life

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The story building nicely.

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

The story building nicely. Still Cary-Grantesque.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 4

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Yes, keep tnose views.

Posted on Fri, 08 Aug 2025

Yes, keep those views.

Another enchanting ramble, Rhiannon.

You are so lucky to live somewhere so beautiful.

Enjoyed, of course. And gorgeous pics. 

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Posted in Above, in 10 minutes!

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