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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 955125 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1548 of my 4,864 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1567 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Does it Rain in Heaven?

Watching someone close to you leave Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/does-it-rain-in-heaven-mp3 Does it rain in Heaven? Night...
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Cherry

Charmed (Part Two of Two)

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-two Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/charmed-part-one-two...
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Gold cherry

Charmed (Part One of Two)

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-one Charmed (Part One of Two) The sun doesn’t shine in the London Underground; a...
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Cherry

Night Whispers

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/night-whispers-mp3 Night Whispers Clouds file across stoic skies, constellations watch aeons...
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Cherry

Boris and the Curious Case of Brexit

This is the tenth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Boris and the Curious Case of...
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1548 of my comments have received 1567 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely done, Ed. You capture

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Nicely done, Ed. You capture the mythology of Egypt adeptly and vividly. Enjoyed this.

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Posted in KHEPRI

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Vanessa entering her daughter

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Vanessa entering her daughter's bedroom resonated with me. I wandered about like a lost lamb in a similar fashion when my little girl went to Uni. I like the half-hearted attempt to make the room look neater.

Spencer's literal...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 35

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"...the foamy pond of their

Posted on Thu, 19 Sep 2024

"...the foamy pond of their comrades.

Their tumid insides screaming..." 

That's a deep introspection of how little boys are. Some wonderful lines, imagery and metaphor. Perhaps the most depraved is a wolf. Just maybe.

Enjoyed...

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Posted in How boys play

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Thank you for referencing one

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Thank you for referencing one of my favourites authors. I read quite a bit of RLS when I was younger.

There's a beautiful flow to this matching the theme with interesting questions asked that we often think but rarely articulate.

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Posted in Visible signs of the invisible

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"..delicious blackberry and

Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024

"..delicious blackberry and apple crumble
for Sunday lunch!"

From tree to plate - a journey documented so well and so elegantly. My mouth was watering by the end and those photos are yummy.

Adriotly penned, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Delicious harvest

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"There is an earthy romance

Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024

"There is an earthy romance of song in early autumn’s golden hour.."

What a wonderful opening line. Blends beautifully into a haunting tale. The poem lingers long after being read. Immaculate, Lena.

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Posted in M'Appari

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"… What’s a “holiday”?’"

Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2024

"… What’s a “holiday”?’"

Oof...that's a powerful last line leaving all kinds of issues in the reader's mind. Of course, we often take holidays for granted but many don't get them for lots of reasons. Maybe it's the child's first holiday....

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Posted in ‘What’s up??’

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That's an interesting analogy

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

That's an interesting analogy - slaying the far-right dragon. Maybe although we tend to over simplify with labels and terms. Social unrest only really goes away when the root cause for the issues are resolved or at least seen to be given time and...

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Posted in The New King Arthur Slays His First Dragon! By Alfred N.Muggins

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"..when trees flecked with

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

"..when trees flecked with fireflies in magical lightshow,

flickering rhythm encountered as lightening flashes.."

That's a highly visual, magical sequence of images. Just gorgeous, Jenny.

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Posted in Enchanted insects

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This wonderfully evocative

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

This wonderfully evocative poem drawn from another time and place is a joy to read. That's why it's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

I have added a picture to promote your work on social media. Please let me know if you...

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Posted in Before Maps Were Made

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