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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 344896 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1217 of my 4,044 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1231 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 2 of 3)

Draft for a 3 part short story Part one at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/black-crow-purgatory-part-1-3 The Black Crow of Purgatory Part 2...
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The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 1 of 3)

Draft for a 3 part short story The Black Crow of Purgatory It is said that a crow can transport souls from the next realm back to the land of the...
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Dreams of Halloween

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/dreams-of-halloween-mp3 Dreams of Halloween In celluloid dreams I walk in graveyards of the...
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Poem of the week

Samhain and Beyond

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/samhain-and-beyond-revised-mp3 Samhain and Beyond We stand in hallowed doorways, hand in hand,...
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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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1217 of my comments have received 1231 Great Feedback votes

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"..carried by buzz of bees

Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2023

"..carried by buzz of bees

their daily labours flit in ecstacy.."

 

Another beautiful diary entry if a little sad. And a lovely pic. Paul :) 

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Posted in Under Late Spring Sky

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"Oh if only I could throw in

Posted on Tue, 01 Aug 2023

"Oh if only I could throw in the towel,

Life could be so much easier again,

but then where would I get the money..."

 

A lamentation of many. I hope Alfred keeps moving around history and writing up his stories. Things...

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Posted in A Bad Deal! By Alfred Muggins

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"Extra cup of molten lard".

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2023

"Extra cup of molten lard". Mmmm....tasty. Abolition of the general public? Well...why not? More enjoyable memories so well written, of course. Enjoyed. Paul :) 

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Posted in Mucky Maureen

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"....and bake in the oven of

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2023

"....and bake in the oven of daily life and discipline,
fuelled by faith and prayer...."

I like the idea of baking in the oven of daily life. Nicely said and done, Rhiannon. Paul

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Posted in Nourishing Nurture

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Still following and enjoying,

Posted on Sun, 30 Jul 2023

Still following and enjoying, Penny. Plenty of intrigue and action. Looking forward to the next part [Should that say "....scrolling through her contacts for Brent's number...?"] Paul

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy" 11

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"The sky is made of cinnabar

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2023

"The sky is made of cinnabar gloom,
   stained by smog and sunset..."

Creatively written and thought provoking imagery. Very nicely done.

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Posted in Poetry Makes Nothing Happen

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"Unbalanced politics

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023

"Unbalanced politics

Financial demigods

Crush dreams

And criminalize hope..."

 

"Hope struggles to survive..." but is always there. Powerful poem, Penny. Very nicely done. Paul

 

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Posted in "Murky Waters"

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You evoke a wistful tale with

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023

You evoke a wistful tale with an ironic finale. A chance meeting that spans the ages. We all change over time. Who determines whether we have changed for the better? Nicely done :) 

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Posted in Cities contemplating jazz

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"The green that can trigger

Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023

"The green that can trigger

the chemicals in air and water."

A sweeping resume of the chain of life. I like the way you get underneath the bonnet of nature's mechanism. We should stand and acknowledge it from time to time. Nicely...

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Posted in chlorophyll

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"Winter raw, sky is grey

Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2023

"Winter raw, sky is grey

all is covered with a white duvet.."

 

Evocative and beautiful imagery, Rhiannon. Another lovely vignette. Paul 

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Posted in Colour Drought

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