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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 898053 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 You can read part two here: https://www.abctales...
Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3) The...
Cherry

The Raven Returned

An homage to my favourite poem “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-raven-returned-mp3 The Raven...
Gold cherry

Anniversary

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/anniversary-mp3 When we promise to remember Anniversary Time slipping away like sands, ground...
Gold cherry

Back In Kansas

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/back-in-kansas-mp3 Back in Kansas Lightening zags across a cobalt horizon, splintered,...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"Look into the flames, and

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2024

"Look into the flames, and what do you see?
    Horses and dragons flash in and flee.."

There's a lovely rhythm to this, the words bounced along inside my head.

So many images contained and imagined. A lovely creative piece is...

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Posted in Pareidolia

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"This heat could make Prince

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

"This heat could make Prince Andrew sweat.." Yikes...that IS hot!

We are about to get the remnants of Hurricane Ernesto here. Temp is 20Cish. That's what you get for living on a wet and windy island.

"Bulgaria’s hot like a half-time...

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Posted in No Country for Cold Men

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"..family of swans, eight

Posted on Sun, 18 Aug 2024

"..family of swans, eight

fluffy infants must be cared for.."

This reminds me of West Hunsbury Country Park near me.

That's a bucolic poem and a lovely pic, Jenny. Just lovely :)

 

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Posted in Caught In Charm Of What I See

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"..he should try to persuade

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2024

"..he should try to persuade Mrs Muggins to opt for a holiday in France soon, perhaps even next year..." Let us know if Mrs Muggins goes along with it.

"..Unfortunately Alfred has run out of croissants.." and I hope Alfred found more...

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics! : Part 2

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That's a creepy story so well

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

That's a creepy story so well told. Very original and very nicely done.

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Posted in Death where is your sting?

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Well said.

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

Well said.

I saw a piece on the news last night about schools in Scotland making children hand in their mobiles and 'park' them in a holder at the front of the classroom before each lesson. Even the kids themselves say that they can't...

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Posted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024

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"..While the beauty of

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

"..While the beauty of flowers craves the soft touch of truth..."

The poem reads like a metaphor - a world full of anguish juxtaposed against a lament for the neglected beauty of nature. I read it a few times. I really like the layers and...

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Posted in Conditions That Please or Displease Flowers

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"...let’s call her Vanessa,

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

"...let’s call her Vanessa, because that was her name.."

You should be on the stage with your comic timing.

An encounter that could have come from an Alan Bleasdale piece. It did make me think of Yosser Hughes and the like. Giz a...

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Posted in Benches & Hedges

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I should come over and visit

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2024

I should come over and visit the family.

Sir Kier has ensured that most of the trouble makers have been arrested and processed. I think the dust has settled. Until the next time

It's a volatile country in a volatile world but we...

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Posted in Leviathan

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"Sandstone capricious as

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024

"Sandstone capricious as crimson

rowans, honeyed as bell heather.."

Such a quiet, haunting lament.

Some gorgeous phrases, especially towards the end.

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Posted in The Burgh

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