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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1205689 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1622 of my 5,056 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1658 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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A View of the Hudson

A View of the Hudson He drinks a Styrofoam coffee at sunset on the roof of the world, indigo skies turn amber, over tall, grey buildings, Macy’s in...
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The Great and Secret Show

The Great and Secret Show She says let me show you a secret and takes me by the trusting hand, we sweep over upland meadows, mossy dew kissing...
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Cherry

Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

Some believe that love can transcend time Why does it always rain in graveyards? Why does it always rain in graveyards? Of course, the reality is...
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Cherry

Resolution

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/resolution-mp3 (re-recorded inadvertently with a clock ticking in the background. Decided to...
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Cherry

In-between Days

In-between Days Those days between Christmas and New Year are lost somewhere in the mists of time. Endless, with no apparent rhyme or reason, people...
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1622 of my comments have received 1658 Great Feedback votes

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I'm reading references to DT

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025

I'm reading references to DT being 'transactional' in his dealings. Both at home and abroad. It seems to be all about money. The more the merrier. 

He's also unbalancing the world order and appears to be 'getting into bed' with Putin. The...

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Posted in Cabal : Billionaire Oligarchy? by Alfred N.Muggins

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"..hoar frost glitter,

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025

"..hoar frost glitter,
snowfall smothering.."

A poem full of animation. Felt like I was there.

Perfect for February. Skilfully done, as always.

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Posted in February Variety

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"I saw the moonglade captured

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025

"I saw the moonglade captured in the dew.."

[Made me think of a photo I took of cows in shafts of sunlight near Wookey.]

Capturing the remarkable in the unremarkable is what makes us human. You do it so well in this beautiful poem...

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Posted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.

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Thanks for reading, David.

Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2024

Thanks for reading, David. Yep....most ghosts are remembered for something traumatic. It's the way lore works, I guess.

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Posted in The Golden Fleece (Part Two of Two)

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Great final line, Jane! 

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025

Great final line, Jane! 

I like the inner thoughts of Vanessa that drives the narration. Her ennui is well done and now replaced by a whole new scenario. Spencer's back....I'm guessing with quite a story to tell.

Keep going :)

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 52

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Great poem, Ed. Wonderful

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

Great poem, Ed. Wonderful imagery in a tightly bound universe you have created here.

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Posted in Snow

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"..Dreams like driftwood

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

"..Dreams like driftwood washed ashore

From the pelagic cumulonimbus realm.."

Some great lines in this. My kinda poem. One to get lost in (probably both writing and reading)

Imagery and enigma.

[Really enjoyed both of...

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Posted in Fathoms Above

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Ha..I haven't thought about

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025

Ha..I haven't thought about it in years but I burned all my school books too. In my back garden after the final day. 

School days were bittersweet for most of us with good times and bad. I'm glad you were candid in your account as it makes...

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Posted in School Reunion

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That's a poignant vignette

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2025

That's a poignant vignette and, I imagine, of particular significance just now. Yes, hope springs eternal and in places you least expect :)

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Posted in "Fragile"

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You can sense the tension

Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2025

You can sense the tension which is a testimony to how this is written. The combination of racing thoughts and constant seeking. 

Spencer's wandered off without his tablets....like we all do sometimes. Well I do, anyway :)

Looking...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 50

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