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I have 245 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1108733 times and 331 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1579 of my 4,957 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1603 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/spirit-jenny-jones-part-one-two The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two) “Is that you, Jenny...
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Cherry

The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)

The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two) Jenny Jones believed in things. She believed in fairies and legends; she had faith in magic. With a love...
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Cherry

Hunsbury Hill Country Park

A local haven at Fall Hunsbury Hill Country Park Falling leaves drift; autumnal eddies, amber blankets billow in breezes, dragonflies hover over fans...
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Cherry

In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)

Parts One to Five at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/vale-shadow-king In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six) The danger was visceral,...
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In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)

Parts One to Four at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/vale-shadow-king In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six) Grandpa Rhys was waiting...
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1579 of my comments have received 1603 Great Feedback votes

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Well you certainly brought

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

Well you certainly brought that very special bird to life in verse, Jenny.

Adriotly done with vivid imagery.

Lovely stuff :)

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Posted in The Bower Flame Bird

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'dribble' 'drabble' and

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2024

'dribble' 'drabble' and 'trabble'. Who knew? Every day is a school day!

Hope you get your Christmas cards finished :)

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Posted in Doing Days

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"Fading into night, stars

Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024

"Fading into night, stars

intrinsic to space and time

twinkle.."

There's a tale of passion, Jenny. Adriotly crafted and poetically narrated.

I love the imagery, as ever.

Of course...I'm left wondering if it's...

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Posted in Stormy Night Of Passion

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Free markets economics v

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024

Free markets economics v state controlled. Neither works in their purest form. The solution lies in an appropriate mix. In the meantime, we all just try and do the best we can to get through it.

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Posted in Party Election Leaflets : Delivering Economic Stability? By Alfred N.Muggins

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A belated happy birthday.

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024

A belated happy birthday.

Yes, I enjoyed looking at those photos as I have on Instagram. You have a keen eye for an interesting shot.

Your love of Europe..and Bulgaria shines through (the rain).

Another insightful, accessible...

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Posted in A Tale of Two Balkan Cities

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Read both parts. Really

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Read both parts. Really enjoyed. You have left it in a way that it could be added to.

Of course, an important underlying message about the environment but delivered in a way that avoids sledgehammer lack of subtlety. Let the reader absorb...

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Posted in The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 2

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Gloriously surreal with an

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2024

Gloriously surreal with an important underlying message. You write in first person so well. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The fickleness of new daylight

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A deftly crafted elegy of

Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024

A deftly crafted elegy of sorts. I imagine this was a real person?

There's a lot going on between these lines underpinned by your trademark humour. I could touch and feel the conflicting emotions largely driven by religious undertones....

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Posted in Kathleen’s Secret

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Loved the ending, Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Loved the ending, Jenny.

A message for our time. Environment over greed.

If everyone followed this mantra, the world would be a much better place!

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Posted in John's Conscience

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"What a gift to the country,

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2024

"What a gift to the country,
what a gift to our world
the little beetle’s waste management
cleaning up our environment!"

I enjoyed the pulsing rhythm and rhyme of this.

It really is an interesting story and very...

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Posted in Pasture-Cleaners

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