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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1304056 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1694 of my 5,264 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1737 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Mid-Winter

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/mid-winter-mp3 Mid-Winter Constellations whisper in aphonic skies, a myriad of stars on dark...
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Gold cherry

The Last Wish of Christmas

The Last Wish of Christmas Fate unwinds its own path. The truth is, I haven’t always been a dog. Appearances can be deceptive. The lights from the...
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Gold cherry

Memories from Falls Past

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/memories-from-falls-past-mp3 Memories from Falls Past Mist falling in dank layers, enveloping...
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Cherry

The Last Door

“One should die proudly when it is no longer possible to live proudly.” Friedrich Nietzsche The Last Door The moon shone in a pitch-black sky, its...
Cherry

A Tale from Dark Woods

A story for Halloween A Tale from Dark Woods It was on the darkest of nights in October that we got together. We had been gathering like this for...

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1694 of my comments have received 1737 Great Feedback votes

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This ingeniously conceived

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

This ingeniously conceived and told tale of tulip picking is, appropriately, today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I've added a pic to promote your work on social media. Please let me know if you prefer to use something...

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Posted in Semper Augustus

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"..and I would admire this

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

"..and I would admire this toiled beauty

standing in splendour triumphantly."

That's a great finish and a lovely homage to a place that clearly means a lot to you, Jenny.

Another gorgeous poem from you, of course.

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Posted in Triumphant Folly In The Park

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Who knew there was such an

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

Who knew there was such an intricate etiquette to picking flowers? 

I really like the way the story turns upside down then rights itself again with an underlying message. Respect. 

Lots of craft, guile and skill in this tale, of...

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Posted in Semper Augustus

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A lovely vignette of April

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

A lovely vignette of April woods. 

Lovely pics too, Rhiannon. 

What a glorious time of year, this is!

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Posted in Wild Garlic, Ramsons

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That's a captivating story,

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2025

That's a captivating story, Ed. Deftly crafted and I like the 'true irony' link.

[Maybe a couple of typos. Should the below read:

'..just lots of cars and lorries."

"..when she chose a bedspread.."

I think that font...

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Posted in Dobe Island; My Place in the Sun

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A powerful short story, Jenny

Posted on Fri, 25 Apr 2025

A powerful short story, Jenny. Memories can haunt; this tale lingers and makes its point.

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Posted in More Than We Bargained For

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Beguiling and beautiful. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Apr 2025

Beguiling and beautiful. 

That's why this wonderful poem is today's Facebook, X/Twitter & BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations :)

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Posted in The Heronning

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'...violet helps us be wise..

Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2025

'...violet helps us be wise...'

Seen quite a few violets in bloom just recently including some in my garden.

Such a beautiful time of year just now.

You have captured the joy in this poem, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Peeping through …

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That's a heartwarming story.

Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2025

That's a heartwarming story. I can imagine that becoming a screenplay. 

There's a raw honesty to it and a sliding doors pen picture of conflicting worlds. 

I guess we are lucky to be born into the one we are in. For the most part....

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Posted in When Life Gives You Flags

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"...probably whack him with

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2025

"...probably whack him with an umbrella to get him to move out of the way. " That line made me laugh :o)

Robot Wars - I *knew* it.

That's a helluva an ending.

You've set the next sequence up so well!

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 58

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