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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 897151 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Pointless Boris (Part One of Two)

This is the eighth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Pointless Boris (Part One) Things...
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Life Through a Prism

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/life-through-a-prism-mp3 Life Through a Prism Life’s journey viewed through a backlit prism of...
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Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel) Moonbeams cast striations across velvet night, breezes blow in conspiratorial, hushed murmurs, Timber wolves howl...
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Groundhog Boris

This is the seventh entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Groundhog Boris The numbers on...
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Het Bonhe

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/het-bonhe-mp3 Het Bonhe As spring emerged from winter, Russian scholars, teachers taught the...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi -

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2024

Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi - damn...I missed that one.

And Archie Gray to Spurs. I still remember Eddie Gray playing for the lillywhites.

I like the sound of the July Morning. It sounds quite a festival.

That intro "Afternoon...

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Posted in All the President’s Biscuits

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"Whiter than white’ – “look

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

"Whiter than white’ – “look at me” insolent
silent shriek.."

Such drama in your vignette, Rhiannon.

The ever evolving struggle between flora.

We intervene where we can, of course.

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Posted in Garden bindweed, again

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"..like echoes that

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

"..like echoes that

reach through time give

sweet new beginnings to

future minds..."

 

An elegant moving poem for such an awful incident.

Crimes committed that take the lives of young ones are amongst the...

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Posted in Hold fast To Love

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"Tonight –  the full moon, is

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

"Tonight –  the full moon, is the Uposatha, 
when we will meditate until the dawn..."

That's a wonderfully, evocative poem.

Another philosophical journey through life.

Adriotly done, Dougie.

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Posted in Memento Mori

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Great story.

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

Great story.

Not sure if you are looking to continue or if it's standalone but it does lend itself to more.

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Posted in P.O.D

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"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’

Posted on Thu, 25 Jul 2024

"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa shouted over to Pat. This wasn’t a truthful statement, the bandana looked absurd and she quickly took a swig of warm beer to obscure her lying face..."

Straight in with humour :O)

Lots of very...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 31

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"Will you miss the nights in

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2024

"Will you miss the nights in the pub with the gang?

Will you send me a postcard from Ujung Pandang?"

There's a wistful feel to this, Turlough.

It's like a stream of conscious style that's also reflective looking back on times...

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Posted in Candi Staton, the Sea and Me

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Great story.

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2024

Great story.

I love the train of thought that underpins the narration. And the small detail, as always. Yes, that's an alluring twist to end with!

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Posted in Lie, lie against the dying of the light

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"Floating ballroom dresses.."

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024

"Floating ballroom dresses.."

A gorgeous vignette and lovely photo, Rhiannon.

Beauty captured so eloquently in so few words.

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Posted in Begonia …

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"This temporary existence not

Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024

"This temporary existence not to every

ones taste, yet for me at this time of

crippling pain, has created respite from

life's expectations.

 

I'm suspended between two worlds;"

 

You have captured...

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Posted in Suspended Between Two Worlds

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