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I have 262 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1236696 times and 353 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1646 of my 5,141 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1683 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)

In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six) Billy Williams had always wondered what is was about his grandparents’ house. He had been visiting...
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A Lamentation of Bees

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/a-lamentation-of-bees-mp3 A Lamentation of Bees Shafts of sunlight glinting, autumn breezes...
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Does it Rain in Heaven?

Watching someone close to you leave Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/does-it-rain-in-heaven-mp3 Does it rain in Heaven? Night...
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Charmed (Part Two of Two)

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-two Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/charmed-part-one-two...
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Charmed (Part One of Two)

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-one Charmed (Part One of Two) The sun doesn’t shine in the London Underground; a...
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1646 of my comments have received 1683 Great Feedback votes

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Interesting modern take on

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2025

Interesting modern take on the Three Wise Men story. New curve ball will be the Orange One's take on it all when he takes over the presidency in the US. Continued volatility, I imagine..especially given his latest views re Greenland. The man's...

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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Middlesborough has a tough

Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2025

Middlesborough has a tough rep. Even now, I think it remains one of the most deprived places in the UK. I did drive through it a few years ago as part of an ancestry trip re my OH. She has family history that way. I don't suppose we consider...

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Posted in Eleven Thousand Silent Playmates

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There's that rat- -tat-tat

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

There's that rat-a-tat-tat all-action style.

Always fascinating to be included in your world through your writing.

Yes...nicely done, Kris!

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Posted in Dinner-with 5 eyez (stripped)

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"..we get older –

Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2025

"..we get older –
apprehensive of fate?
or prayerfully, trustingly
wait …"

"Blown through the New Year Gate - "

Yes, I think so. And a powerful finale. Lots to think about in so few lines.

Nicely done,...

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Posted in January 1

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That's an interesting,

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's an interesting, philosophical discussion about the merits of a robot partner.

The story has layers which keeps the reader on their toes.

Looking forward to the next part..

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 45

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That's a sage-like tale right

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's a sage-like tale right there. Just two people from different generations putting the world to rights. Nicely done and a Happy New Year to you.

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Posted in All The World Before Us

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Cheers, T.

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

Cheers, T.

May 2025 bring us promotion to the Premier League or further qualification for the CL.

As Shankly said "Some people believe football is a matter of life and death, I am very disappointed with that attitude. I can assure...

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Posted in Carols at Midnight

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"What a surprise to see

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

"What a surprise to see
a chameleon on a little Christmas tree!"

An unexpected and intriguing story captured so poetically, Rhiannon.

Can't recall a Christmas tale involving a chameleon before.

Yes, blending in, of...

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Posted in How did the chameleon get on the Christmas Tree?

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"..saw

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

"..saw
two bright round eyes
beady brown – Shriek! surprise!"

That's a highly visual tale told with dramatic effect. Skilfully done, Rhiannon.

Unexpected visitors, for sure. Enjoyed this.

Happy New Year to you....

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Posted in Rustle!

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The uninhibited voice that

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2024

The uninhibited voice that blurts out inner thoughts is such fertile ground for comedy and drama. Much more to come from this story, I'm sure.

The dialogue is credible and the pacing works well.

Keep going!

Merry Christmas...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 44

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