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I have 186 stories published in 23 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 279683 times and 240 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1083 of my 3,697 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1095 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton. I love to write but get distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought. My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

I think that everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have short stories published in a horror anthology by @thealienbuddha, anthology Vol.IV by @LoftPublishing and flash fiction at @paragraphplanet.

Poems of mine have been published by @thealienbuddha (The Alien Buddha Gets Rejected) and @blackboughpoems (Winter-Christmas Anthology 2023).

I have new stories published in 2023 by @darkwinterlit and @thealienbuddha (Halloween anthology and ABZ55 at ABP) along with appearing in an anthology by @LoftPublishing (Anthology Vol V).

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-haunted-fort-of-bhangahr The Haunted Fort of Bhangahr I stare out of the tinted window for...
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The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

Eleanor Cross

Eleanor, highborn of Castile, favoured daughter of Ferdinand, beloved, revered Queen to Albion’s powerhouse: The Longshanks. Noble monarch, woman of...
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Poem of the week

Memento

I should delete these texts A permanence of darkness, where light no longer creeps, where memories fade, of bygone times. I can hardly see them now,...
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Happy New Year

It’s 23:17 at least that’s what my phone says. People don’t wear watches these days, do they? It’s pretty busy in here tonight but what do you expect...

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1083 of my comments have received 1095 Great Feedback votes

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"...The dying moment,

Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023

"...The dying moment,

easily confused

with a stopped clock."

 

Melancholic, wistful and existential. All things that make a good poem. Nicely done, for sure.

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Posted in Inklings

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"...fragile early wood wild

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

"...fragile early wood wild daffodil.."

Synonymous with spring. A beautiful image, Rhiannon. Lovely photo as well. Who doesn't love daffodils?! Paul

 

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Posted in A few early wild daffodils in the woods

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A tragic and sad story. Hard

Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023

A tragic and sad story. Hard to imagine the harshness of those kind of laws now. You recount the tale and speak up for the wronged so eloquently. 

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Posted in Newes From The Dead

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You have found something of a

Posted on Sun, 12 Mar 2023

You have found something of a niche with these stripped-back tales, Mark. For so few words, the images are vivid and the story profound. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in the ward

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Thanks for reading, CM.

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Thanks for reading, CM. Always appreciated and, yes, right on both counts. (Good win in the cup today for the Bhoys. Treble on. Hail hail) 

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Posted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)

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I have a cherry tree in my

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

I have a cherry tree in my front garden. I wrote a poem about it a while back. It's a wonder to see the cherry blossom every year. Enjoyed your poem. Paul 

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Posted in Cherry Tree

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Great last line, Hilary! Yes

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Great last line, Hilary! Yes those pesky birds. Enjoyed the story. Paul :)

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two

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What a beautiful world you

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

What a beautiful world you have conjured, Hilary. Off to read part 2!

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm

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Enjoying the role swap.

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023

Enjoying the role swap. Looking forward to see what they both get up to! :) 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.2 by Alfred Muggins (himself)

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"...dreamy raindrops like

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

"...dreamy raindrops like pearls

of wisdom trickling down

her pane,"

 

A dreamy meditation full of beautiful imagery. Is the name "Rosa" significant? It feels like a reference to a book or a film. Anyway, enjoyed :)

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Posted in Every Moment Counts

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