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I have 267 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1283230 times and 359 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1680 of my 5,221 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1717 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/miracle-maldon-part-one-three The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three) Mr King jiggled a key...
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Cherry

The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

Draft for a 3-part story. The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three) The moon hung low in a blue sky, an intruder on a twilight horizon. The day was...
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Cherry

Snow White

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/snow-white-mp3 Snow White Fiery, phosphorous sun arced lower, day summoning the arrival of...
Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 You can read part two here: https://www.abctales...
Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3) The...

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1680 of my comments have received 1717 Great Feedback votes

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More drama so deftly done.

Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025

More drama so deftly done. You build the tension so well whilst at the same time keeping the humour going.

I hope you get to the end and publish. I can see the final product having a broad appeal so potentially a big audience.

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Hi Maxine

Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2025

Hi Maxine

 

I use Wiki images - loads of free stuff on there. Dunno if that helps

 

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Images

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Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

So sorry for your loss, JoAnne. Life doesn't come much harder than the loss of a beloved partner. The pain is replaced my memories, in time. Take good care of yourself x

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Posted in "Silence"

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Nah. Not on holiday. Very

Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2025

Nah. Not on holiday. Very much in the freezing UK. That profile pic update is from a past holiday. Crete, I think.

Get yerself a VPN. You can access stuff from around the world then! 

The Ben Fogle, Bulgaria thing was fascinating....

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Posted in Eleven Thousand Silent Playmates

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Interesting modern take on

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2025

Interesting modern take on the Three Wise Men story. New curve ball will be the Orange One's take on it all when he takes over the presidency in the US. Continued volatility, I imagine..especially given his latest views re Greenland. The man's...

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Middlesborough has a tough

Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2025

Middlesborough has a tough rep. Even now, I think it remains one of the most deprived places in the UK. I did drive through it a few years ago as part of an ancestry trip re my OH. She has family history that way. I don't suppose we consider...

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Posted in Eleven Thousand Silent Playmates

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There's that rat- -tat-tat

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

There's that rat-a-tat-tat all-action style.

Always fascinating to be included in your world through your writing.

Yes...nicely done, Kris!

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"..we get older –

Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2025

"..we get older –
apprehensive of fate?
or prayerfully, trustingly
wait …"

"Blown through the New Year Gate - "

Yes, I think so. And a powerful finale. Lots to think about in so few lines.

Nicely done,...

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Posted in January 1

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That's an interesting,

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's an interesting, philosophical discussion about the merits of a robot partner.

The story has layers which keeps the reader on their toes.

Looking forward to the next part..

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 45

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That's a sage-like tale right

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's a sage-like tale right there. Just two people from different generations putting the world to rights. Nicely done and a Happy New Year to you.

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Posted in All The World Before Us

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