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I have 214 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 465836 times and 286 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1336 of my 4,331 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1351 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Dreams of Rain

A wind-swept, seeping rain dances on bedroom windows, houses opposite obscured – streets are empty, twilight gloom broken by neon street lamps –...
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Punters

This is the fourth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co It had been a long, old Pandemic...
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Poem of the week

Another Night On a Bare Mountain

Night on a Bare Mountain (aka Night on Bald Mountain) is a series of compositions written by composer Modest Mussorgsky (1839 – 1881). It was only...
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Cherry

Penalties

On 11 th July 2021 the England Football team lost on penalties to Italy after a 1-1 draw having played extra time in the Final of the Euro2020...
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Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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1336 of my comments have received 1351 Great Feedback votes

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"In

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

"In

silence of stillness night owl's duty is

almost done;"

Night-time can be Heaven or Hell depending on your disposition. Another poem with your deftness of touch and sentiment. Nicely done, of course Jenny.

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Posted in Transcendental Journey of Meditation

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"The dark, dread milkman is

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

"The dark, dread milkman is near!."

 

That last line made me think of Poe. A very entertaining read and very creative. Next door have the milkman...I can hear the quiet whoosh of the truck at 5am sometimes. Be afraid...

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Posted in The Sinisterish Milkman

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"The sixth best pair on the

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

"The sixth best pair on the ship" - such precision :)

An evocative journey steeped in imagery. I too would love to read more about Iran. Adriotly done, sir.

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Posted in Me and My Muezzin

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There's that underlying, wry

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

There's that underlying, wry humour that makes your stories so readable. All caught up with this one and hooked on the tale. Yes, keep going!

[You could add links to the different parts to make it more accessible. I think you would get...

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Posted in 'Parcel for you..' Part 3

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"Letters postmarked

Posted on Sun, 15 Oct 2023

"Letters postmarked Motherwell"

That line made me laugh. That is a veritable box of tricks. Spare bedlinen and towels is probably where we all are, in reality. Adroitly done and made me smile. Paul :)

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Posted in Jacques in the Box

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A gothic-Poe-esque/Irving

Posted on Sat, 14 Oct 2023

A gothic-Poe-esque/Irving-esque tale that has me intrigued. I love the prevailing darkness that seems to surround the whole thing. Looking forward to the next part :)

[Should "vailed" be "veiled"?]

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Posted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve "(a short story) PART 2 of 4

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"..where each boy had a box

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

"..where each boy had a box for ‘tuck’ and treasure."

Intrigue and mischief. A naughty uncle's trick and a charming tale. Enjoyed, Rhiannon. Paul :)

 

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Posted in A Hazy Memory of an Uncle’s Trick

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There's a lot of historical

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

There's a lot of historical and political knowledge in here making it such an interesting read. Politics are complex in the Middle East but, in essence, yes ongoing repression will lead to dire consequences. The whole things seems to be...

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Posted in Ancient and Modern Tales : Past Present and Future : Alfred N.Muggins Tells a Story!

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Audio version added at: https

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

Audio version added at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/this-england

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Posted in This England

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That's another brave piece of

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

That's another brave piece of writing. Cancer appears to be a slippery foe. As always, Jean, people in a similar situation will read this and find it helpful that someone can articulate with clarity what's happening along with options and...

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Posted in A LITTLE BIT INTERESTING

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