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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 352700 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1222 of my 4,054 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1236 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...
Gold cherry

Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

We met on the mezzanine, lobby of splendour and gold, our bearded, mystic Hindu guide, spirited tourists into seats. Passed meandering, sacred cows,...

The Theory of Everything (take 2)

I originally posted this piece a few days ago. I had this half-arsed notion that I needed to put something up on my birthday and a rare foray to...
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Gold cherry

A Secret Forest

We landed at Marco Polo, Azzurri gateway to the North, clutching passports we passed bleary-eyed through mundane border checks, as luggage rolled...
Cherry

Wootton Village

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/wootton-village-mp3 Slate-coloured, sombre skies cast vacuous, apocryphal runes. Carrion crows...

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1222 of my comments have received 1236 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, some very inventive

Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2023

Yes, some very inventive sections. Loved the pizza delivery and the discovery of the disc in the dog's collar. Looking forward to the next part :) 

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"Hangliders drifting along

Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023

"Hangliders drifting along lazily above the higher ridge"

 

I can visualise the valley, the hawthorn trees and the lambs. This sounds like a stunning walk, Rhiannon. The weather is beautiful at the moment. Gorgeous pics as well....

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Posted in Around Longtown, upper Monnow Valley

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Love the title. There's

Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023

Love the title. There's something about the phrase "ladies that do lunch" that makes me smile every time I hear it. This is totally bonkers for sure and plays out like a mini-movie. Based on a true story too? Looking forward to the uncensored...

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Posted in Ladies who lunch at The Entomol

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"Sunshine in a glade once

Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023

"Sunshine in a glade once stillful of winter.."

 

My lodestone is U2 as well. Saw them live at the Odeon in Birmingham before they became stadium big. I can feel the joy in your words. The joy of music, a wonderful thing. Loved this...

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Posted in new song

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Such contrasting images on

Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015

Such contrasting images on Obsidian. Showers, beds and all mod cons. You bring across the sense of awe at being somewhere so much more advanced so well. If seems a shame that the children will get reprogrammed and lose their memories of the new...

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Posted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Nineteen ( Pt 5 ) The Reunion

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"A cock-eyed chef's hat

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023

"A cock-eyed chef's hat

and a tired apron all askew.."

 

Lends a sense of playfulness to the poem. It sounds like you have had culinary fun with grandchildren who love to pretend cook. Then again, maybe we all do. Enjoyed,,...

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Posted in Little Cook!

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"...ephemeral mayfly once

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023

"...ephemeral mayfly once

hidden at water's edge.."

 

Another lovely, dreamy reverie and stroll through nature on a beautiful, Bank Holiday Monday. 

 

Enjoyed, of course :) 

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Posted in Nature's Wonders

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I liked the contrast between

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015

I liked the contrast between Gregor and Sam at the start of this chapter. I was wondering whether Gregor had any redeeming features and his affection for Sam hints at some. 

The spectral figures show yet more imagination in the ongoing...

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Posted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 5 ) Out Of The Darkness

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That seems like a stealthy

Posted on Sat, 27 May 2023

That seems like a stealthy plan of Henry's and something of a departure from his former, brutal tactics. It could work but might take a while. Yes, life would be interesting being ruled by Henry VIII. I look forward to the next part! 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.4 by Alfred Muggins (himself) The Real Henry VIII Finds His Feet In 21st Century England! Part 2

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".. a crowning glory of all

Posted on Thu, 25 May 2023

".. a crowning glory of all hues.

sent out on the hopeful sky."

 

I found this moving too. The acknowledgement of life even when one's own is fading. Beautiful. 

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Posted in For The Birds

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