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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1287610 times and 361 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1684 of my 5,235 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1722 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

This is an adaptation of the story of the Pied Piper of Hamlin which is also a Grimm’s fairy tale Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-...
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A Final Message From Moscow

A Final Message from Moscow When Putin’s tanks rolled into Ukraine on 24 th February 2022. I was inundated with messages concerned about the welfare...
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Dreams of Solitude

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/dreams-of-solitude-mp3 Dreams of Solitude In dreams I seek solace from the tyranny of days,...
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Pointless Boris (Part Two of two)

This is the ninth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Part 1 at: https://www.abctales.com...
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Pointless Boris (Part One of Two)

This is the eighth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Pointless Boris (Part One) Things...
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1684 of my comments have received 1722 Great Feedback votes

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Three Wise Men....hard to

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

Three Wise Men....hard to come by, these days. Clever adaptation paralleling events of today. Nicely done, Alfred.

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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Beautifully paced.

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2024

Beautifully paced.

It takes patience to keep going for so long and maintain a high standard.

The searching online for answers certainly resonates with me. It's funny how quickly you go from thinking that it's only you that's ever...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 43

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That's an emotive piece

Posted on Mon, 16 Dec 2024

That's an emotive piece written with such compassion.

I didn't know Julia but can touch and feel how special she was through your words.

I guess that can be the gift of writing - a release, a way to remember, a monument to someone...

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Posted in Velvet Goldmine

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I like the way the poem moves

Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2024

I like the way the poem moves from grey and brooding to insular and snug.

A season in a nutshell.

Beautifully done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Where’s your snug?

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I enjoy Alfred digressing. It

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

I enjoy Alfred digressing. It's always an interesting read. Definitely don't side with Putin and his cronies. We have the lesser of the evils in the West. Just about.

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Posted in Caring For All The Animals (Including Humans!) and Avoiding World War 3! By Alfred N.Muggins

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Well you certainly brought

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

Well you certainly brought that very special bird to life in verse, Jenny.

Adriotly done with vivid imagery.

Lovely stuff :)

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Posted in The Bower Flame Bird

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'dribble' 'drabble' and

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2024

'dribble' 'drabble' and 'trabble'. Who knew? Every day is a school day!

Hope you get your Christmas cards finished :)

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Posted in Doing Days

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"Fading into night, stars

Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024

"Fading into night, stars

intrinsic to space and time

twinkle.."

There's a tale of passion, Jenny. Adriotly crafted and poetically narrated.

I love the imagery, as ever.

Of course...I'm left wondering if it's...

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Posted in Stormy Night Of Passion

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Free markets economics v

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024

Free markets economics v state controlled. Neither works in their purest form. The solution lies in an appropriate mix. In the meantime, we all just try and do the best we can to get through it.

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Posted in Party Election Leaflets : Delivering Economic Stability? By Alfred N.Muggins

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A belated happy birthday.

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024

A belated happy birthday.

Yes, I enjoyed looking at those photos as I have on Instagram. You have a keen eye for an interesting shot.

Your love of Europe..and Bulgaria shines through (the rain).

Another insightful, accessible...

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Posted in A Tale of Two Balkan Cities

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