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I have 273 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1328641 times and 369 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1710 of my 5,301 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1754 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/vale-shadow-king-part-one-six In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six) Standing in...
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Cherry

In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)

In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six) Billy Williams had always wondered what is was about his grandparents’ house. He had been visiting...
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A Lamentation of Bees

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/a-lamentation-of-bees-mp3 A Lamentation of Bees Shafts of sunlight glinting, autumn breezes...
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Gold cherry

Does it Rain in Heaven?

Watching someone close to you leave Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/does-it-rain-in-heaven-mp3 Does it rain in Heaven? Night...
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Cherry

Charmed (Part Two of Two)

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-two Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/charmed-part-one-two...
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1710 of my comments have received 1754 Great Feedback votes

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Read both parts so looking

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2025

Read both parts so looking forward to more. 

You capture the sights, sounds and smells so well and, as ever, your eye for small detail is second to none. There's a latent empathy that you write with that makes stories like this so...

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Posted in Taking Tea - Kavinda and Me

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Thanks, Di. I've managed to

Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025

Thanks, Di. I've managed to rinse this concept for 5 years now. I really must come up wth an original idea again. Soon :)

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Posted in Boris and the Art of the Deal

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[Yes.....but....it's only

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

[Yes.....but....it's only half time. The youngsters of PSG will be quaking in their boots when 40,000+ Brummies are screaming at them at VP. Well....I can dream for a bit longer...can't I? Mighty Leeds top with 5 games to go. C'mon you whites! In...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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A rivetting read and an

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2025

A rivetting read and an engrossing story emerging. That's why this is the Facebook, X/Twitter & BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I've added a pic to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to use something else....

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Posted in Steelie 16

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That's a wonderful tale of

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

That's a wonderful tale of finding inspiration in the seemingly mundane. It's the small details that bring the story to life. I was absolutely there with you taking shelter and going on a journey long sought and now found. It's life affirming to...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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All this and still time for

Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2025

All this and still time for the Orange One to destroy the Global economy as well. He works fast. I'm sure the movie franchise "The Omen" must have had him in mind when they came up with the story!

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Posted in Pantomime President Furthers the Downfall of the Western Alliance :World War 3 Develops! : The Man Who Sold the World (turns out it was fated to be Trump all along!) by Alfred N.(not Maga!) Muggins (no relation thankfully!)

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Great dialogue and compelling

Posted on Wed, 26 Mar 2025

Great dialogue and compelling writing. 

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Good luck with the rest of the book.

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Posted in The Book: Chapter 44

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"Now the Constitution is once

Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2025

"Now the Constitution is once again up for grabs,

Where will it all end?

Surely in tears."

More pertinent questions asked by rogue reporter Alfred Muggins. I don't know the answers but I look forward to the ongoing...

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Posted in Make America Great Again by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue reporter!)

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'..raindrops are a special

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

'..raindrops are a special paragon of wonder,

For this constant bond between sky and earth;'

Some wonderful lines in here, Jenny. 

Thoughtful and articulate.

A lovely piece of work all round :)

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Posted in Rain

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All caught up again.

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2025

All caught up again.

Ah...Cedric's character is taking shape and that metaphorical time bomb is ticking. Jeopardy makes a plot work and this sub-plot is humming.

The interactions in the story are credible and deftly done.

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 55

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