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I have 266 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1277361 times and 358 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1678 of my 5,211 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1715 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Fading of Legends

An imagist poem Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/fading-of-legends-mp3 Fading of Legends Cassiopeia in robes of silver, night...
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How I Came to Meet Eric

How I Came to Meet Eric Seamus O’Donnell was a patient man. He came from a long line of farmers who were born and bred in County Fermanagh and South...
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Ynys Wydryn (Glastonbury Tor)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/tor-mp3 Ynys Wydryn (Glastonbury Tor) Blue skies shimmer, winter light, offerings hang from...
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In Memoriam

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/in-memoriam-mp3 In Memoriam Rain-clouds sweeping, weeping, lament, moss-covered, monuments of...
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A Christmas Boris

This is the sixth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co A Christmas Boris Dom was not dead...
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1678 of my comments have received 1715 Great Feedback votes

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I like the pervasiveness of

Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024

I like the pervasiveness of magic throughout and how its significance is offset against the importance of human emotions and feelings. Magic isn't all-encompassing and the plot emphasises that through the interaction of your characters. It's a...

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21

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"Dark days, wet days, grey

Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2024

"Dark days, wet days, grey days,
downpour-drenching.."

I like the juxtaposition of dark days and bright days. This poem is awash with colour and sound. Fitting for that most wonderful of seasons - autumn!

Lovely stuff,...

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Posted in Tumultuous Autumn

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Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024

That's a powerful last line. Foreboding. Let's hope sanity prevails. Eventually.

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Posted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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That's writing discipline

Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024

That's writing discipline right there...12 months and 36,600 words later. Congratulations on a genuine achievement (I'm not sure what a non-genuine achievement is but it seemed to scan).

You have a definite talent for writing travelogue....

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Posted in Ex Crete

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All caught up again.

Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024

All caught up again.

Yes, the "experiencing high volumes...we value your call.." is spot on! I've had that a few times just recently.

That's a comic dilemma neatly chiselled. I sense a debate around an invalid claim coming from the...

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Posted in Parcel for You...Part 37

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"..then followed

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024

"..then followed

by a Peter Pan moment swooping

down with his shadow."

That's a powerful image, that child-like connection linking younger days to older. Time goes so quickly but poetry can be timeless. Great stuff, Jenny.

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Posted in Magic Of Youth

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Still such a difficult and

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2024

Still such a difficult and complex situation in the Middle East. Alfred's angst will be shared by so many.

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Posted in Death Trap by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue armchair historian and reporter!)

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This latest diary entry is

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024

This latest diary entry is wonderfully entertaining, educational and humorous.

It's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

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Posted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea

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Does it rain more in Ireland?

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Does it rain more in Ireland?

We've all chased rainbows at some point. I'm sure Alfred will find his pot of gold one day. We want to read his novels.

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Posted in Chasing Rainbows by Alfred N.Muggins

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Gorgeous pics.

Posted on Tue, 01 Oct 2024

Gorgeous pics.

A sweeping vignette that shows again how connected you are to nature and the seasons, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Seasons’ Round

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