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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 894861 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Dreams of Rain

A wind-swept, seeping rain dances on bedroom windows, houses opposite obscured – streets are empty, twilight gloom broken by neon street lamps –...
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Punters

This is the fourth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co It had been a long, old Pandemic...
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Poem of the week

Another Night On a Bare Mountain

Night on a Bare Mountain (aka Night on Bald Mountain) is a series of compositions written by composer Modest Mussorgsky (1839 – 1881). It was only...
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Cherry

Penalties

On 11 th July 2021 the England Football team lost on penalties to Italy after a 1-1 draw having played extra time in the Final of the Euro2020...
Cherry

Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"..for in some countries

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

"..for in some countries
there’s hunger, disease
from drought and war.."

Nicely done with a lovely rhythm, Rhiannon.

An important message too. Food is such a vital commodity and subject to corruption. We are lucky that...

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Posted in Life's fuel

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To be fair, Jenny, that will

Posted on Sun, 21 Apr 2024

To be fair, Jenny, that will have happened to a lot of people. When a car gets bump started, it can shoot off and many end up falling flat on their face. I hope you have recovered from your ordeal. The embarrassment at being the centre of...

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Posted in How Could I Be So Stupid

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"..in folds of air birds will

Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2024

"..in folds of air birds will sing

and honey bees will rejoice

the flowers of late spring..."

 

Such evocative imagery, Jenny. You connect with nature so well with your poetry :)

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Posted in Yellow Blooms Of Late May

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"...the mournful boom of

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

"...the mournful boom of bittern,

the silent clarity of consequence,

that the greatest lie might be the starkest truth

is the coldest flame."

 

Some gorgeous lines in there, Rachel. Soulful and poignant.

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Posted in Doubt

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"Even wildernesses need

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

"Even wildernesses need management
to keep the variety,
ensure diversity,
prevent monopoly.."

That's an authoritative poem, Rhiannon. So much knowledge in there. You are right, of course. The weeds need managing to give...

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Posted in Wild weeding

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"Started off a clear morning,

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024

"Started off a clear morning,

dawn sky of red and gold;

wood mice hoped this day.."

 

Lovely images, Jenny. Strange weather we get in April. We had sun, rain, sleet and hail yesterday! Perhaps we and the wood mice...

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Posted in Wild Side Of April

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It's great to read another

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

It's great to read another Alfred Muggins story. I'm sure Mrs Muggins must have looked fetching in her new pink cowgirl hat. Hoping there's a part 2 to follow...

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Posted in Trips Down Memory Lane Before The World Falls Apart by Alfred N.Muggins

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‘That’s how you got home,

Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024

‘That’s how you got home, Annie, petrol. It got you home didn’t it.’ That made me laugh. The dialogue is compelling. You must have a lot of fun visualising the interactions between the characters you have created including Spencer, of course. The...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 23

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It's nice to imagine Captain

Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2024

It's nice to imagine Captain Sensible with his infamous parrot singing "Happy Talk" on TOTP as part of a computer processing thoughts and songs. I know it's a cover but it's the version that stands out. For me anyway but then I love The Damned....

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Posted in Mono Log

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Dr Kruschev - wasn't he the

Posted on Tue, 09 Apr 2024

Dr Kruschev - wasn't he the Russian president at some point in the past? There seems to be many links between Bulgaria and Russia.

Good to see your adopted country in the Shengen Area. I like the thought of those storks flying wherever...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - March 2024 - La finale

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