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I have 242 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1080579 times and 326 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1569 of my 4,924 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1590 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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1569 of my comments have received 1590 Great Feedback votes

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"The elephant is heavy, the

Posted on Tue, 25 Jun 2024

"The elephant is heavy, the feather is light,
the elephant is grey, the feather is white."

There's a lovely, lilting rhythm to this. Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Extreme differences!

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"there's tiny

Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2024

"there's tiny

secret footprints across leafy

glade of my world, setting

visions of wonder."

Imagination is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed that flight of fantasy with you, Jenny.

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Posted in His Flight

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I was wondering where you

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"We say, smugly, the Younger generation, our children, they will fix it."

For sure, all that will be left is stones but I would question the JSO shenanigans at Stonehenge. Of all the places to protest, the spiritual capital of the country...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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"The people of both sides

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"The people of both sides will be shown justice and respect for once."

That's a decent dream of Alfred's. Hoping it comes true one day.

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Easter Dream

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"So, what do I do 

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"So, what do I do 

of these penny pastiches 

that flutter and stutter awry"

 

That's a wonderful poem.

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Posted in Dirge for another year gone by

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Ah thanks Jenny. Hoping you

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2024

Ah thanks Jenny. Hoping you are on the mend now.

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Posted in West of Ireland

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It is odd that "democracy"

Posted on Thu, 20 Jun 2024

It is odd that "democracy" stands and falls on a choice of just two. To be fair, ideologically, the parties in the US are diametrically at opposite ends of the political spectrum so there is choice. At least an illusion of choice. It seems rough...

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Posted in The Year of the Elections by Alfred N.Muggins

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"Everybody knows that, since

Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2024

"Everybody knows that, since I auditioned for Britain's Got Talent. Some bastard put me on YouTube!'"

Sparkling dialogue in this part. Dai's misplaced paranoia made me smile. [Is all paranoia misplaced?]

Coming along very nicely!

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Posted in 17 What Would Interest Big Brother in Merthyr Tydfil?

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"Embattled Satan’s hold was

Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2024

"Embattled Satan’s hold was trounced
when gospel life and power announced.."

The energy and rhythm of the poem captures the evangelical aspect at its heart. I looked up John Pugh to cross reference with your piece. As ever, very...

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Posted in Light for heaviness

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Hi Jenny. Just popping to

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

Hi Jenny. Just popping to wish you well and hope you are on the mend. Take care of yourself. Paul x

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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