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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 898119 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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Gold cherry

Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
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Gold cherry

Leaving Home

Rain falls as drizzle – recalcitrant, obstinate, framing a doorway filled by fretful parents, staring into a no man’s land of sadness, one last,...
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Gold cherry
Poem of the week

Saccades of Sands

A clicking camera shutter, perpetual saccades, capturing fleeting moments that mark epochs, littered in sentiment and seminal occasions,...

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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"...hearing

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

"...hearing

white noise drift over craggy

rocks.."

Ah waterfalls....magical creations of nature.

I enjoyed your reminiscence, Jenny :)

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Posted in Waterfall

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Meeting all three of my kids

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

Meeting all three of my kids at the airport at noon was altogether magnificent - that must have been emotional after such a long enforced break due to the Pandemic

Listening to Romanian Jazz on Spotify - I think I could so with some Johnny...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - April 2024 - The Sporophyte Stage

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"Rumbling sounds of oceans'

Posted on Thu, 09 May 2024

"Rumbling sounds of oceans' surge and flow.."

 

Gorgeous images, beautiful photos. Felt like I was right there. An evocative, lovely poem, Rhiannon:)

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Posted in Shores ever changing, new, fresh

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Dreams can be wonderful

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2024

Dreams can be wonderful things and spirit us away to another place and time. I really enjoyed this.

It's our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day. Congratulations, Jenny.

I have added a picture of the fabulous Clifton Suspension...

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Posted in Complex Dream

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Kashmir and the Clifton

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2024

Kashmir and the Clifton Suspension Bridge in the same dream. Sounds like your subconscious is encouraging you to go on a journey. Dreams are always fascinating to capture so well done for turning yours into an intriguing one :)

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Posted in Complex Dream

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"Aladdin Sane and Hunky Dory

Posted on Thu, 02 May 2024

"Aladdin Sane and Hunky Dory

Bowie’s works in all their glory.."

A pensive, thoughtful poem. Speculative is good. Makes us all think so nicely done, Turlough.

I like the sound of ninety-nine inch TV screens. The footie would...

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Posted in Turn and Face the Strange

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"..drooping bells to charm

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2024

"..drooping bells to charm not chime.."
A poem full of colours and images, Rhiannon. And beautiful pics too :)

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Posted in Columbine

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"She fantasised about tying

Posted on Fri, 26 Apr 2024

"She fantasised about tying Colin Davenport to a chair for a month and making him watch while the company didn’t go into meltdown.."

Poor old Colin Davenport. I think we've all fantasized about torturing someone with a diet of...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 24

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"Arboreal creatures grasp

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2024

"Arboreal creatures grasp secret

triggers to be unlocked.."

Different circumstances, I know, but your poem made me think of the missing Sycamore Gap tree at Hadrian's Wall. Trees make the world a better place so the thought of...

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Posted in Connecting With Trees

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"..And places where the cat

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

"..And places where the cat has been

Some uses considered quite obscene..."

That line made me laugh.

Poor old Muller Lite lambasted like that. Still...your local alternative does sound yummy. A rapping, rhythmic, humourous...

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Posted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!

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