Fragments Of Life

By skinner_jennifer
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You swim through vast oceans of sky,
drifting between pearly clouds, where
oyster shade colours reflect rays of
shimmering sunlight,
pearls of untold wisdom whispered on
soft breeze; dance invisibly, dipping –
rising, capturing all crystal rainbows
of delight...
for as air we breathe on a hot summer
day cannot be glimpsed, things aren't
always how they appear. Listen! Hear
gentle ruffle of leaves – feel energy
unconfined, for these are fragments
of life that naturally flows.
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This is so lovely, Jenny
This is so lovely, Jenny
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Wonderful! It sounds as if
Wonderful! It sounds as if you laid on the grass on a hot summer's day and just looked up - perfectly described!
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Lovely
Lovely words depicting a lovely day.
Nice one Jenny.
Turlough
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Swimmming through the sky-
Swimmming through the sky- now that would be lovely. Your imagery is dreamy and soothing in this poem Jenny. Enjoyed it very much.
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lovely words, beautiful images
Jenny! What beautiful language! Such as "vast oceans of sky" ; "crystal rainbows of delight".
Inspired for sure! Tom
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Beautiful observations of
Beautiful observations of nature and the buzz of energy all around us when we step outside, Jenny. There is so much happening, you could spend whole days lost in the garden or the woods with no need to travel and spend money on luxuries. Even simply looking up at the pearly clouds is a spectacle.
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I enjoyed the dreaminess of
I enjoyed the dreaminess of looking at the sky above, and imagining swimming in its beauty, on a warm day, relaxing.
Took a bit longer to think of the rest of your dreaminess. I imagine the relaxation of the lovely day, the silence and little sounds reminding you of the eternal truths and the greatness of the beautiful scene all around us that is being sustained. Rhiannon
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"You swim through vast oceans
"You swim through vast oceans of sky.."
The scene set in that very first line.
Highly spiritual and a positive affirmation.
Beautifully done, Jenny.
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