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I have 242 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1090124 times and 327 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1574 of my 4,935 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Colours of Christmas

It’s December 1 st ….I’m declaring it Christmas… Colours of Christmas Dreams made of cinnamon, nights of ice, tree-light dancing on frosted panes...
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Cherry

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence) Clouds billow like gathering coal dust, telegraph-wire lined, feathers and bone watch dusk descend. Monochrome...
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Cherry

Those We Leave Behind

Those We Leave Behind It feels like I have been standing in this field all my life. From here I can see the edge of town where trees and rivers...
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Cherry

Eastern Sky

Eastern Sky Fractured skies. White lightening Lights up buildings. And for a moment We are blinded. Everything is shrouded. Cordite… Monochrome...
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The Changing of Seasons

The Changing of Seasons Skies painted silver Rain drifting on breezes. Cumulus roiling in the distance. The sigh of mountains Heaving in silence. A...
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1574 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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Let's hope a better America

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Let's hope a better America emerges from its current mess. Sadly, his term in office has a way to go yet. Who knows where will all be when the Trumpmeister is finally done. 

Good on Alfred Muggins for contiuing to call out the Orange...

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Posted in Chronicles Of Trumpenstein : The Progress Of The Trumplings by Alfred N.Muggins, Armchair Reporter

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That's a powerful lamentation

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

That's a powerful lamentation and an apt metaphor.

Grieving for an animal is tough. I think it's because they are so vulnerable and dependant on us. There's a feeling of inevitable guilt that comes with everything else. 

A...

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Posted in This Sad Blister

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It reads like an elegy. I

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

It reads like an elegy. I imagine after living a life like that, time was called sometime in the past.

You bring him to life in a warm, relatable way. Definitely an empathetic account despite his flaws.

[Yes, the Scots of Glasgow do...

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Thanks for reading, T.

Service stations off motorways are really black holes that people disappear through and return from when it's time to resume their journey.

Would I lie about this? (Well...yes...probably)

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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I've tweaked the first couple

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

I've tweaked the first couple of paras so this part now reads from Marie's POV. It does look smoother. Thanks for the suggestion! :)

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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This is an earthy, urban tale

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

This is an earthy, urban tale laced with domestic angst. It's all very credible written with the 'twin syndrome' humming at its heart. Looking forward to reading more. 

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Posted in The Vale - Part Two

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That's a wild adrenaline ride

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

That's a wild adrenaline ride. Great writing is this, Jane.

Very topical as we get a lot of street racing around here. Off to read the other parts. 

 

[Small typo: Should that be ‘Clue’s in the lyric, Adam.’?]

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Posted in The Vale - Part One (a)

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These moving pen pictures are

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

These moving pen pictures are beautfully written.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky pick of the day.

I have added a pic (East Peckham) to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to use another...

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Posted in Party Fashions

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All caught up again. Still

Posted on Mon, 23 Jun 2025

All caught up again. Still engrossed. 

I like the whole sliding doors theme then the analogy with photons sharing the same space at the same time. Kind of Pullman-esque (quantum physics in a fantasy tale).

You write dialogue so well...

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Posted in Dead Man: 6 (ii)

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"..now I'm soaking up

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

"..now I'm soaking up euphonious

Sweet Smoke.."

Great line that one.

A dreamy reminiscense so eloquently penned. As always.

Topical with Glasto due this weekend. As much as I like the thought of festivals and...

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Posted in Let Me Go Back

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