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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1213341 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1626 of my 5,061 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1663 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/1603-purgatory-part-one-two The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two) With that the monk-like...
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The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)

The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two) Air shimmered in iridescent layers, desert heat smouldering under a cloudless Arizona sky. A diamondback...
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Cherry

Eclipse

Eclipse Clouds in a dawn sky seen through stoical eyes can sometimes seem like ethereal carriers of innermost angst. Maybe there is a silent...
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Poem of the week

The Moon Maiden

This poem is based on a Japanese folktale about a childless couple – a bamboo cutter and his wife – who are given an infant by the Moon Maiden. It is...
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Falling

Falling I am no one . White walls washed by sodium light was all I could see. There was a certain kind of claustrophobia that went with the room, a...
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1626 of my comments have received 1663 Great Feedback votes

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All caught up.

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

All caught up.

Alternate universes/the multi-verse. My favourite theories but I could be off-beam. I often am :)

It's an intriguing premise. "Through The Goo-Hole". 

 

 

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 2)

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Memories are all we are left

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

Memories are all we are left with when loved ones leave us. In that way they live on.

I enjoyed this reminiscence, especially the bit about W-s-M. 

Thank you for sharing this, Jenny. 

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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"Their hands cannot reach

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

"Their hands cannot reach around the world."

Where's there's life, there's hope. And ragu an apt metaphor.

Imagistic and profound. Adriotly done, Lena.

 

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Posted in Seasoned

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"He had lost count of how

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2025

"He had lost count of how many tables had gone to their after life thanks to the continual and frequent machinations of his wife Mrs Muggins, a lady most obsessed with tables"

I'm with Insert - what's going on with those tables?! :)

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Posted in Birthday Blues by Alfred Muggins

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‘I’m off now, meeting my bird

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025

‘I’m off now, meeting my bird,’ Eesh...I remember saying stuff like that once. 

Yes, I like the idea of a doggy guardian of the lift. I can just imagine that.

Looking forward to reading the next part already. 

 

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 7

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Supply chains are inter

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2025

Supply chains are inter-connected and often span the Globe. The Law of Unintended Consequences very much in play when applying artifical changes to an established economic model. Trump's tariffs have been declared illegal again in court. What a...

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Posted in The Archmoron Himself by Alfred N.Muggins

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Lots of rain around at the

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Lots of rain around at the moment.

Life is about moments and they can catch us when we least expect them.

You have an eye for capturing what many would miss, Jenny.

Keep distilling them into poetry for us :)

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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Still gripping, still

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

Still gripping, still engaging, still classy.

[Teeny typo: Jade opened the door. “Diner is served.” Thomas waved at the table..Should that read 'dinner is served?']

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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"..settling like

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

"..settling like

faerie folk, colours on pallet create

summer blooms.."

A lack of motivation and/or inspiration comes to us all in the end. Writing at sites like this makes such a difference as you encounter people that take...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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"Turn on the lights – they

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2025

"Turn on the lights – they saw
drifting plankton, bioluminescent  creatures glowing.."

I like the way the poem pivots around the lights coming on. It makes it highly visual. I can only imagine the biodiversity at the bottom of the...

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Posted in From the Chinese Bathyscaphe, Striver

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