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I have 245 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1109249 times and 331 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1579 of my 4,957 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1603 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Falling

Falling I am no one . White walls washed by sodium light was all I could see. There was a certain kind of claustrophobia that went with the room, a...
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Cherry

The Golden Fleece (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-part-one-two The Golden Fleece (Part Two of Two) Feeling slightly restless, I...
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Gold cherry

The Golden Fleece (Part One of Two)

The Golden Fleece (Part One of Two) She who must be obeyed - that’s the phrase that sprang to mind as we meandered through Primark’s burnt offerings...
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Cherry

After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

Previous messages from Moscow: https://www.abctales.com/collection/messages-moscow After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow) It was on May 9 th...
Cherry

After the Snow

After the Snow Sun sets over a sylvan skyline, birdsong fades on bare boughs, vulpine tracks of hunting paths, life crawls post Yuletide sprawl...
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1579 of my comments have received 1603 Great Feedback votes

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I'm wrapped up in it too.

Posted on Tue, 29 Jul 2025

I'm wrapped up in it too. Looking forward to more!

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 3

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Read both parts.

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Read both parts.

I see what you mean about 'salty sea dog'. It was pure coicidence on my part. Honest!

More consummate travelogue. I read about your part of the world and I yearn to visit. It sounds like a place of many wonders...

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Posted in Fire and Rain

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Trumpenstein is an idiot.

Posted on Fri, 01 Aug 2025

Trumpenstein is an idiot.

The concept of trade barriers has been discredited numerous times over the years. And yet he uses them as a sort of electric cattle prod. The man is staggeringly incompetent in his understanding of economics. To...

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Posted in After the Goldrush and Before the Hurricanes (and the Floods, Fires and Aircraft Disasters!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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'..will he be nudged

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2025

'..will he be nudged
or safe on his ledge til fully fledged?'

That's an evoactive, highly visual poem. 

I have been watching a nest with baby seagulls in it for a while. Two birds eventually fledged. Sadly, I understand that...

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Posted in Life on the ledge

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'...which

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

'...which

brings respite clear and sonorous..'

I love any lore connected with corvids. Raven, crows, rooks. The lot.

A graceful, eloquent poem right there. 

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Posted in A Poet's Greek Mythology

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'Gulls seem noble here,

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

'Gulls seem noble here, hermits

not beggars all must be living with us; even were the sea

empty and their searching faith only, this place is better..'

Took me right there. Sounds like a stunning place. Beautifully evoked....

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Posted in before Floris

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Thanks for reading it, Di. 

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025

Thanks for reading it, Di. 

[I'm on book 2 in the 'Dark is Rising' series. Very much enjoying.]

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Posted in The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy

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Thanks for reading it, T.

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025

Thanks for reading it, T.

Yeah...5 months in now. One of the locals.

[Big day Sat 16th Aug - Aston Villa v Newcastle live on Sky 12.30pm ko then a wander down to The Optima to watch WSM v Chelmsford @ 3pm. Footie is back, baby!]

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Posted in The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy

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Wonderfully surreal and with

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

Wonderfully surreal and with your trademark humour, Drew.

Hopefully, life isn't enough and you keep going!

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in You are surprised as a published writer…

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Convincing dialogue and

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

Convincing dialogue and engaging characters. There's your trademark philosophical musings made vicariously throughout the storyline.

A great read, Jane.  

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Posted in The Vale - Part 3

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