marandina
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I have 232 stories published in
28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 808902 times
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1496 of my 4,721 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1512 votes

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
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An entertaining road trip
Posted on Tue, 20 Jun 2023
An entertaining road trip story. You make the places visited sound so wonderful. Hercule Poirot would have solved the case and Ian Dury would approve, I'm sure. If only you had made the ballet..
Read full commentPosted in Trans Europe Express
There's nothing worse than
Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023
There's nothing worse than misplacing keys. You have captured the anguish here with a lovely rhythm. Tension built than release with a happy ending. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul
Read full commentPosted in They aren’t there!
"... blackbird will trill a
Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023
"... blackbird will trill a greeting
to guide me on my way."
Another enjoyable diary entry, Jenny. The Summer Solstice is a time of magic and peace. You capture that in your poem. Just lovely. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Window Of Light
That sounds like quite an
Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023
That sounds like quite an escapade, Luigi. Glad all was well in the end. You must have been worried for a while. Enjoyed your true-life tale [Should that read "..knocked me down with a feather.."? ] Best wishes. Paul
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Phew - such drama in a
Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2023
Phew - such drama in a shopping expedition. I hope Alfred's foot is OK and his bank account after paying for everything. I do wonder what Henry VIII would make of all this..
Read full commentPosted in A Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 3
Glad the steroids had some
Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023
Glad the steroids had some effect, Jean. Hoping the blood clots in your lungs are benign. Keep us posted re the rest of the scan results. As always, your strength of character and humour shine through (more dangerous with the walking stick)....
Read full commentPosted in Cancer Log 3
"I muse on how easy it is to
Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023
"I muse on how easy it is to blunder.."
That's an interesting and thoughtful pen picture you draw, Rhiannon. I think it is important not to make assumptions as you allude to. We often think we know someone and, as it turns out, we often...
Read full commentPosted in Do I know you?
"This moment revealed; in
Posted on Tue, 13 Jun 2023
"This moment revealed; in transient stillness..."
Another beautiful reverie, Jenny. Enjoyed, of course. And you are nailing these photos. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Splendour Of The Woods
"...which was fine by Alfred
Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023
"...which was fine by Alfred as he did not want to be doing too much thinking at this after work stage of the day.." A state may get into.
Wonky trollies, Karoke Star and Mrs Muggins blundering around the store. I could feel Alfred's pain...
Read full commentPosted in A Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 2
"And his wife with her bell
Posted on Sat, 10 Jun 2023
"And his wife with her bell ringer’s face,
crammed into the tiniest bag,"
Brutal yet poignant. Maybe some people learn to love to hate their partners. Very nicely done. Paul
Posted in There's Still Enough Time
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