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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1212768 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1626 of my 5,061 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1663 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1626 of my comments have received 1663 Great Feedback votes

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Netanyahu is hinting at

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Netanyahu is hinting at indefinite control over Gaza now moving away from the stance of cutting all ties once Hamas is defeated. This does not bode well for any kind of peace in this region. I'm afraid this instability and violence could go on...

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Posted in The Book of Alfred the Great II (Muggins!), as written by that famous prophet of Past Present and Future!

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Hi Jean. The journey

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Hi Jean. The journey continues and you take us with you in your writing. It's a rollercoaster for sure and we are all rooting for you. You are one of the bravest people I know. Keep smiling and stay positive. Yes, definitely an inspiration. As...

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Posted in chemo 2 - session 2

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"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling

Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2023

"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling lights:
no fear here
of ghosts or bombs.."

 

The joy just jumps out of this poem. Perfect for this time of year. Just lovely, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Firework party, a little early

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Some interesting historical

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

Some interesting historical comparisons and interesting that these may be your own thoughts rather than rogue reporter - Alfred Muggins. Civilians are inevitably the innocent victims of war. We continue to hope for common sense to prevail.

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Posted in Civilians In War

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All caught up again. It feels

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

All caught up again. It feels like the story is moving from comedic to exploring the emotional consequences of this scenario. That's a substantial well to tap into. Looking forward to reading more :)

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 6

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Still following, Penny. That

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

Still following, Penny. That's a cliffhanger last line. Looking forward to the next instalment :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 11

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I'm glad I read it all. Just

Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023

I'm glad I read it all. Just perfect for Halloween. I do love Gothic horror and the older tales from the likes of Poe and Irving. Skilfully done, Penny.

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Posted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve" Part 4 of 4

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"...symbolic and transient

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

"...symbolic and transient

like sprinkling of fairy

dust on a magical dream."

Such moving notes at the end of the poem. A beautiful tribute to your parents. Nicely done, Jenny.

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Posted in Remembering

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That's a powerful ending with

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

That's a powerful ending with your final stanza, Luigi. The meter and rhyme is very nicely done, of course. Expertly executed, sir.

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Posted in One Good Turn

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"It is revenge!. No good

Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2023

"It is revenge!. No good crops grow from bombs."

It feels like this above line links events in the East and the storms in your beautiful part of the world. Different magnitude, of course. Not sure where it will all end now that the genie...

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Posted in October 2023

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