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I have 258 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1191764 times and 348 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1619 of my 5,044 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1654 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube The Grand Marine Hotel stands imperiously looking out over the Bristol Channel as it has done for many dust-coated...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)

Part 6 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-6 Billy watched snake-eyed as a shape ghosted through the fog. Appearing...
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Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-5 Sunday morning brought with it a thick enveloping mist rolling inland...
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Cherry

Borealis

This is a poem posted this week at a weekly challenge on X/Twitter by the account @TopTweetTuesday. Whilst your first love should always be ABCTales...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

Part 4 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-4 Billy pondered the day ahead. He knew a trip would come down to one of...
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1619 of my comments have received 1654 Great Feedback votes

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Neatly done, Luigi.

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

Neatly done, Luigi.

The twists and turns of a mystery exposing the dark underbelly of a suburban town/hamlet in Middle America.

Now I know. Now we all know.

Well done in penning a great finale. 

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'Sunlight glinting on the 

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

'Sunlight glinting on the  water,
and the tumbling, bubbling sound of ripples.
Primroses here, a violet there,
bright white stitchwort here'

What a wonderful ramble and personalised through some personal updates weaved in...

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Posted in Delighted to get out!

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Ah just noticed it's 'Pass

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Ah just noticed it's 'Pass the Story' not 'Pass the Parcel'. We see what we want to see sometimes, don't we?

Thanks, Penny. This probably is a hash of numerous detective series and movies I have seen over the years. Maybe even a bit...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

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Thanks Rhiannon. Yes, I kept

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Thanks Rhiannon. Yes, I kept looking at that. I don't usually use 'leggit' in my stuff. I will edit so thanks for picking that up.

I wasn't sure how quickly these part 10s were expected. I could have spent longer on this but we are where...

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Cheers, CM.

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Cheers, CM.

In future episodes, Sel Ticman goes on to be a best selling author, bigger than Agatha Christie and Jeffrey Archer combined.

Marandina was always too soft. Far too honest to get by in the States.

The Orange Menace...

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Thanks, insert. It was fun to

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Thanks, insert. It was fun to write albeit there's quite a bit of prep needed for this challenge as you have to be au fait with all the other stuff that's gone before.

Anyway....a big thank you to Penny for her generosity and creating some...

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The pot boiling over. The

Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026

The pot boiling over. The finale beckons! 

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Posted in "Pass the Story" Chapter 9

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With everything going on in

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2026

With everything going on in the world, it's incredibly grounding reading your monthly updates. There's a philosophical and reassuring feel to events in your part of the world. The seasons turn, people die, people live, we all move on. I like the...

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Posted in Was Danielle Steel in Steely Dan?

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A wonderfully imaginative

Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026

A wonderfully imaginative piece, Jane. I always think that Heaven and Hell stories are tricky to pull off but you have done it here with aplomb. Made me think of an Easter theme with the criminals flanking either side at the Crusifixtion. Well,...

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Posted in Things that he took to the Afterlife

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Wonderful imagery in this

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2026

Wonderful imagery in this evocative poem. Lovely photos, as always.

I've been to this part of the world but not to this location. I simply must.

Really nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Herefordshires’s Hampton Court/Castle Gardens

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