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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1054459 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1563 of my 4,897 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1584 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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My stories

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Carols at Midnight

Carols at Midnight Light from a votive candle flickers – candescent, smells of incense permeate the pews. Beyond a prayer book stone floor seems...
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Santa Pause

Santa Pause John Jones hated his name, its mundanity matched only by the inane notion of Christmas. In truth, it hadn’t always been this way. A...
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Christmas Skies

An homage to John Betjeman and inspired by his poem written in 1954 called ‘Christmas’ Christmas Skies Chiming church-bells peal from afar, summoning...
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Where Maps End

Where Maps End Rays of maple light shimmer at sunrise, Dawn’s horizon cast on a glass sea below. Enveloping nascence, A quiet overture of birdsong...
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Who Wants to Live Forever?

For Halloween 2024 Who Wants to Live Forever? Fritz Erlinger was a name that came to haunt me, torture me as my life unfolded. Yet, in the beginning...
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1563 of my comments have received 1584 Great Feedback votes

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That's an intense instalment

Posted on Tue, 07 Oct 2025

That's an intense instalment and quite a cliff hanger.

Keep going, Penny!

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 33

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The USA - the land of

Posted on Sun, 28 Sep 2025

The USA - the land of conspiracy theories. I don't suppose we'll ever get to the truth of a lot of things. Whilst Alfred could lay low, I suspect the lure of investigative roving reporting will be too strong for him!

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Posted in Is America Coming Here? (Sleepwalkers?) by rogue reporter Alfred N.Muggins

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An enigma posed adriotly.

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2025

An enigma posed adriotly.

I don't know the answer but I'm sure someone will be along shortly to solve it.

Nicely done, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Who am I?

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You often explore the dark

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

You often explore the dark underbelly of the corporate jungle with insight and cynicism, Mark. The fragments you describe are familiar especially the verbal waterboarding that goes on around missed sales targets and weak pipelines. 

[Where...

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Posted in Kettle Violation

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Ah yes...children will make

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

Ah yes...children will make games out of anything.

That's a lovely, warm story told in poetic form.

Charming and engaging, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Appropriate!

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All caught up.

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

All caught up.

Alternate universes/the multi-verse. My favourite theories but I could be off-beam. I often am :)

It's an intriguing premise. "Through The Goo-Hole". 

 

 

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 2)

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Memories are all we are left

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

Memories are all we are left with when loved ones leave us. In that way they live on.

I enjoyed this reminiscence, especially the bit about W-s-M. 

Thank you for sharing this, Jenny. 

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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"Their hands cannot reach

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

"Their hands cannot reach around the world."

Where's there's life, there's hope. And ragu an apt metaphor.

Imagistic and profound. Adriotly done, Lena.

 

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Posted in Seasoned

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"He had lost count of how

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2025

"He had lost count of how many tables had gone to their after life thanks to the continual and frequent machinations of his wife Mrs Muggins, a lady most obsessed with tables"

I'm with Insert - what's going on with those tables?! :)

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Posted in Birthday Blues by Alfred Muggins

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‘I’m off now, meeting my bird

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025

‘I’m off now, meeting my bird,’ Eesh...I remember saying stuff like that once. 

Yes, I like the idea of a doggy guardian of the lift. I can just imagine that.

Looking forward to reading the next part already. 

 

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Posted in The Vale - Chapter 7

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