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I have 264 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1254586 times and 356 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1658 of my 5,164 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1695 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (9)

Part 8 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-8 With the revelation, a chill ran through them. This was BIG. Thoughts...
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Cherry

Dust

Dust A breeze blows moving dust, sepia-stained monochrome rain, through empty rooms. Ethereal melodies, wind chimes for lost souls, songs audible...
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Poem of the week

Uphill, January 29th 2026

Uphill, January 29th 2026 St Nicholas church has stood here for centuries staring out over the sea, standing high on a hill, liminal limestone walls...
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Cherry

The Devil’s Bridge

I remember fragments. Vague to start with then detail emerging like a cobalt ink blot spreading across my sepia-stained mind. A night of falling snow...
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Why does it always rain in graveyards?

Why does it always rain in graveyards? The procession of gravestones is staring at me. That’s how it seems with not a soul about. I scan the horizon...
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1658 of my comments have received 1695 Great Feedback votes

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Succinct and gorgeous.

Posted on Fri, 05 Jun 2026

Succinct and gorgeous.

A small and perfectly formed poem. 

And lovely pics, Rhiannon.

 

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Posted in Resplendent Rose

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Still gripped by the story.

Posted on Sat, 30 May 2026

Still gripped by the story. You are cranking up the tension very nicely. I will read more very soon!

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book One (29))

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"I will not let this vision

Posted on Sun, 31 May 2026

"I will not let this vision go, but

secure it in a poem with symbol:

LOVE."

I like the way the poem revolves around that central theme. Beautiful images, beautiful thoughts. What would we all do without nature to take us to a...

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Posted in On This Peaceful Day

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Those last few lines are

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026

Those last few lines are incredibly moving. I feel for you, Jenny. I hope the dark days are replaced by brighter ones soon enough. Take care x

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Posted in Torment

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"Crash! of thunder –

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2026

"Crash! of thunder –
clash! of cymbals in the sky.."

Dramatic and evocative, Rhiannon.

Thunderstorms forecast here but nothing yet. I am looking forward to cooler days ahead.

Your poem paints pictures. Very nicely done...

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Posted in Night Storm

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The contrast of a carefree

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2026

The contrast of a carefree ride on a Schwinn bicycle to the collective angst of an ongoing war. And a record that transcends it all. You took me right there, Penny. 

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Posted in "The Way We Heard" - All you need is Love- 1967

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Grant Stayner is coming! I

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2026

Grant Stayner is coming! I like the tension building in this section and the descriptive backdrop. I can see the action. The decks have been cleared for a showdown. Onto the next chapter..

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book One (21)

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"...which is freeing

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

"...which is freeing nutrients by decay
replenishing earth's riches day by day.."

A poem written with a symbiotic touch. The IP was any variation on the theme of roots so yours is an exemplary adaptation.

An ideal read to...

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Posted in Roots

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Thanks for reading it, Di.

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

Thanks for reading it, Di. Yep, Danielle was a bit flustered so forgot to be responsible. She may end up paying for that mistake. Next part up soon.

[Hoping you are looking after those lovely feral cats up on your island. Dunno whether you...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)

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"So you don't just go around

Posted on Fri, 22 May 2026

"So you don't just go around draining men." I'm so glad that's not a rhetorical question and that they are establishing boundaries. I like the underlying humour in some of the exchanges. There's not much to go on when mapping dialogue like this...

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book One (12)

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