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I have 273 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1321239 times and 369 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1707 of my 5,296 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1751 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (17)

Part 16 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-16 The stone walls of St Bridget’s stand in silence as though stoical...
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Cherry

Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/makis/pennys-pass-story-part-five Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 6 Back at the station, Sheriff Milton...
Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)

Part 15 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-15 THE GRIMOIRE Nadeem Potter loved nothing more than time spent in the...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (15)

Part 14 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-14 It was an unholy union and yet, in time, the creature came to care...
Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (14)

Part 13 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-13 Jezebel found herself, once again, wandering through sand dunes and...
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1707 of my comments have received 1751 Great Feedback votes

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A dramatic reunion to finish

Posted on Tue, 14 Jul 2026

A dramatic reunion to finish this bit. Pry and Davin. Reading on..

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two Dreamscape (32)

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The situation in Iran remains

Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2026

The situation in Iran remains a mess. The situation with the World Cup remains a mess. The situation in Gaza remains a mess. What have all these things got in common? More accurately, who have all these situations got in common? Hmmmm...

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Posted in The Alfred Muggins' Diaries : June 2026 Part 1 : Trumpy's Search For Peace, and The World Cup

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"Fail and forfeit all.

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2026

"Fail and forfeit all. Succeed we leave the Earth in you and your Mother’s care.”

The mission is clear. Eesh..that chapter was tense and lucid. Onwards we go!

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Posted in Banished To Earth, Book Two, Dreamscape (31)

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I was right there reading

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

I was right there reading this. You have weddings and respective receptions down to a tee (funny thing is, as joyous an occasion they are, I really hate going to them).

Ascerbic and very funny with it. It makes you wonder why people get...

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Posted in The Way We Heard - All Time Low

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"Welcome breeze

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

"Welcome breeze
shaking trees.."

I find myself celebrating cloud cover at the moment. The fall of rain comes to the popping of champagne corks just now!

There's a lovely rhythm to this poem, Rhiannon.

Here's to future...

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Posted in Breeze!

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Thanks, insert. I did think

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

Thanks, insert. I did think about that after I'd posted it. The hope is through writing and being a member at a site like ABCTales. I might add the IP as a category to this as I always forget about trying inspiration point. This week's is mine,...

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Posted in A Better World

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This is our story of the week

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2026

This is our story of the week – congratulations!

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Posted in The Way We Heard: Three Coins In The Fountain (1954) (Pt.1)

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The reality of a fateful trip

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2026

The reality of a fateful trip to the market for the herd.

Sad, endearing and dark beauty in a stark reality that's taken for granted.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

I...

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Posted in The Drove

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That's a deep, philosophical

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

That's a deep, philosophical vignette, Penny.

Beautiful in its brevity. 

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Posted in "Lament"

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"..Saville’s trade mark yodel

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

"..Saville’s trade mark yodel cuts through the warm air like the mating call of a Loon." That made me shudder a bit. I remember those days when Savile was just another deejay.

I recall MySpace too although it feels like forever ago....

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Posted in The Way We Heard: That's Not My Name - The Ting Tings - 2008

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