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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 341005 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1211 of my 4,036 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1225 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

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My stories

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Diner

Diner Outside the diner at 385 Sixth Avenue, humanity ebbed and flowed. It would often take a brief pause to eat then continue on in its mysterious...
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Gold cherry

Blagdon Lake in Winter

For Louise Glück Blagdon Lake in Winter Silver skies. Ephemeral light glints on Blagdon Lake. The geese are gone now. I hear echoes of wind chimes...
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Cherry

The Other Side of Paradise

The Other Side of Paradise I can still remember standing at the side of a dirt track, a sodium-coloured sun high in the sky. The heat made the air...
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This England

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/this-england This England Ancient land of myths and legend where a man once pulled a mighty...
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Cherry

Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate-part-two-...
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1211 of my comments have received 1225 Great Feedback votes

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"We board the ship of fools,

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"We board the ship of fools,
two-by-two, in borrowed shoes,
cross Gulliver’s wide uncharted seas
and miss Atlantis by 20000 leagues."

So many cultural references. A poem of great skill.

I hope you eventually find...

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Posted in The Road to Erehwon

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"...soon swards that need

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"...soon swards that need mowing
and flowers galore.."

A lovely tribute to the changing seasons, Rhiannon. Nicely done, of course.

I can't wait for lighter and warmer nights :)

 

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Posted in Gentle march of the seasons

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A concise, poetical

Posted on Fri, 01 Mar 2024

A concise, poetical explanation for leap years. There's something magical about a 29th February isn't there? Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Fixing the calendar

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"...is it wisps of mist or

Posted on Thu, 29 Feb 2024

"...is it wisps of mist or smoke rising in the valley below them?
and Madley large satellite-tracking dishes visible."

Another evocative ramble with you, Rhiannon. And what a way to finish. Enjoyed, of course :)

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Posted in Clehonger to Ruckhall Circular

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That's a unique way of

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

That's a unique way of painting a pen picture of a snake using the image of it being stalked by a cat. Your empathy and admiration of the serpent comes through.

"Friendly, pampered python" never thought I'd see those words in the same...

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Posted in Ophidian at Four O’Clock

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That's a wonderful story and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

That's a wonderful story and so well told through your poem, Jenny. A lovely read, for sure.

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Posted in The Fish Hawker

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Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping and compelling. Keep going!

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Posted in A Devil of a Man (7) - In Vino Veritas

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Such a sad story well told.

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Such a sad story well told.

[Small typo: Should be "raindrops"?]

 

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Posted in The moon is all bluish tonight

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It's ironic that Stalin was

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

It's ironic that Stalin was airbrushed from Russian history and yet, as alluded to here, the ignomy of his deeds is being repeated. Perhaps in time and probably after his death, Plutin will suffer the same fate.

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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That documentary is

Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2024

That documentary is extraordinary. Especially the phone calls to members of the FSB etc involved in the plot to poison him. It seems that Navalny hoped he would be the next Nelson Mandela leaving prison after being locked away for years to be...

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Posted in Say the Name

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