"Lament"

By Penny4athought

Fri, 24 Jul 2026

4 comments

White noise fills the space of regret

Blocks conscious thought

Deletes words wished to be said

Solace lingers beyond the noise

through a path

of impermeable stones

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Permalink Submitted by marandina on Fri, 2026-07-24 15:04

That's a deep, philosophical vignette, Penny.

Beautiful in its brevity.

Permalink Submitted by Penny4athought on Fri, 2026-07-24 15:09

Thank you Marandina, I hoped it captured what I'd been feeling, a bit splintered lately.

Penny4athought

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Permalink Submitted by insertponceyfre... on Fri, 2026-07-24 17:20

Splintered is a very good description Penny, and you've captured it well. I hope the solace comes closer

Permalink Submitted by Penny4athought on Sun, 2026-07-26 19:05

Thank you insert, I appreciate your kind words.

Penny4athought