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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1208248 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1624 of my 5,060 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1660 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

Part 9 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/penny4athought/pass-story-chapter-9 Penny’s 'Pass the Parcel’ Part 10 Milton wanted to flick another rolled...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (17)

Part 16 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-16 The stone walls of St Bridget’s stand in silence as though stoical...
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Cherry

Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/makis/pennys-pass-story-part-five Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 6 Back at the station, Sheriff Milton...
Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)

Part 15 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-15 THE GRIMOIRE Nadeem Potter loved nothing more than time spent in the...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (15)

Part 14 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-14 It was an unholy union and yet, in time, the creature came to care...

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1624 of my comments have received 1660 Great Feedback votes

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I prefer first person myself

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026

I prefer first person myself but don't always write using that format. It's invariably introspective and I always think a little claustrophobic but I like the inner monologues that come with it. 

'Falling Down' is a seminal movie that...

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Posted in Courtesy Calls: The Fire Lane (2)

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Atmospheric and pensive.

Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2026

Atmospheric and pensive. Bristol's not far from me these days. 

You build reflection into your poetry so naturally, Jenny. It makes it so accessible. 

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Posted in Long ago Thoughts

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"I hear dollars clink with

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2026

"I hear dollars clink with roubles in the push to weaponise"

An eloquent invective, Turlough.

The identity of the murderous regime is less clear now than it ever was. 

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Posted in They Can Only Do Harm

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With Remembrance Day on the

Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025

With Remembrance Day on the horizon, this layered poem is poignant and very relevant.

 

It is today’s Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

 

Congratulations, Ewan.

 

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Posted in Put The Sword Down

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This is definitely 'quite

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

This is definitely 'quite bonkers and entertaining'.

There's so much creativity in this piece and it's a genre I adore.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I have added a pic to promote your work...

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Posted in The UFO Bible 1

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I remember reading seashore's

Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025

I remember reading seashore's stuff when I returned to the site in 2020. It was visceral, honest and striking. It certainly made me sit up and take notice. I imagine she was a one-off. Coral made quite a mark during her lifetime. 

A moving...

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Posted in Our Old Girl… Remembering Coral

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This charming tale of

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2025

This charming tale of childhood imagination is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

 

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Posted in Dobe Island; My Place in the Sun

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Most of us have been there

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2024

Most of us have been there but how many have made it back intact?

This wonderful piece is today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

I've added an image to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to...

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Posted in Linkedin Island

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"Contentment is precious, at

Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2024

"Contentment is precious, at peace, with ‘enough’"

We live in a capitalist society where advertisments everywhere are designed to make you feel inadequate. It takes a long time to work out what's important. 'Having enough' is a great place...

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Posted in Never Enough?

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I was wondering where you

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"We say, smugly, the Younger generation, our children, they will fix it."

For sure, all that will be left is stones but I would question the JSO shenanigans at Stonehenge. Of all the places to protest, the spiritual capital of the country...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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