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I have 278 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1466060 times and 377 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1753 of my 5,412 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1804 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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A Better World

Remembering the most recent US election in 2024 A Better World I dreamt of a better world, of Satchmo and red roses too, no slings and arrows hurled...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (30)

Part 29 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-29 A front door stands slightly ajar, an arcane terraced house seemingly...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (29)

Part 28 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-28 THE WESTERN HERALD 11 hours ago 2 min read Child abductees return...
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Dog Days

Dog Days Lingering on the back seat, threadbare tartan rug, paw prints in paisley, dust preserved in amber. I think of chiffon, fur coloured ebony,...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (28)

Part 27 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-27 Billy had no idea what to do. High above was a witch’s giant face...
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1753 of my comments have received 1804 Great Feedback votes

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I loved the sense of time and

Posted on Tue, 28 Jul 2026

I loved the sense of time and place as well as the cracking dialogue in this piece.

That's why it's today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

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Posted in The Tea Break

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Another intoxicating mix of

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2026

Another intoxicating mix of horticulture, cuisine, local tradition and travelogue. It takes a great deal of skill to weave amongst so many different aspects when penning these diary entries. Thoroughly engaging, educational and an alluring read...

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Posted in The Dumplings of Count Tiškevičius

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Thanks for your support with

Posted on Tue, 14 Jul 2026

Thanks for your support with this, insert. It's genuinely appreciated.

Writing something novel length is something I have always wanted to do. And now I have!

It would have been so difficult to do without the interest and support...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (30)

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Beautifully written, as

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2026

Beautifully written, as always.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

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Posted in Amanderella and the Marduk Affair Chapter 8.

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"..the sacred checks and

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2026

"..the sacred checks and balances which were so necessary to a functioning democracy." Yes to this. Hard to imagine what the situation will be in 4 years time. I can't see Trumpenstein still being in power. I think he's been told he can't run for...

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Posted in What Will The World (or America!) Be like In Another 4 Years? by Alfred N.Muggins

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So sorry to hear that, Jenny.

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2026

So sorry to hear that, Jenny. That's awful news and you are being incredibly brave about it.  I hope that you get the very best care from those involved. I don't know what else to say other than I hope you continue posting and keep everyone in...

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Posted in Lung Biopsy Result

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A careful study of the

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2026

A careful study of the altruistic nature of friendship.

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Posted in The Less Miserables Lose a Friend (1)

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It's a difficult one, Jenny.

Posted on Sat, 18 Apr 2026

It's a difficult one, Jenny. Risk v reward. There's risk with most procedures. It just depends whether you can live with it. Logic suggests getting to the bottom of it all as, that way, you have the chance of an effective remedy. Coughing for the...

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Posted in Tomography

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You might be right, T. We're

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

You might be right, Luigi. We're going in circles. Someone needs to take charge. I think the next writer will do just that. Not my genre at all but I can't see why this won't be wound up inside 4 more chapters. There's another 8,000 words...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Sel Ticman is a force of

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Sel Ticman is a force of nature that's still blowing around like rampant tumbleweed. Maybe he'll feature in future chapters. I think he was last seen selling copies of his books at a local market in downtown Denver. Funny really...I feel as...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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