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I have 233 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 820711 times and 313 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1505 of my 4,735 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1521 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)

Night sounds permeate woods, a nocturnal topography spot-lit silver by a diaphanous moon. Cumulus clouds drift silently, pregnant with seasonal...
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Cherry

The Fox and the Siamese

Life can be pure magic sometimes. The Fox and the Siamese Another rocket hit a building, a mushroom cloud billowing across my television screen,...
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Cherry

A Move to Bleadon Hill

A Move to Bleadon Hill Bleak factories billowing smoke, steel towers industrial sentinels amid seas of concrete and glass; all of this now salient -...
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Cherry

Boris and the Art of the Deal

This is the fifteenth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Boris and the Art of the Deal...
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Cherry

The Body in the Library

Saturday 24th April 1976 The Body in the Library I always was a fan of Sherlock Holmes. Tales of his case-solving are legendary made even more...

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1505 of my comments have received 1521 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, congratulations on

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

Yes, congratulations on completing a novel-length story. Beautifully crafted throughout. Whimsy and drama. You could definitely edit and publish this if you chose to. Paul 

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

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Chains of daisies as an

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

Chains of daisies as an analogy of unity, strength yet peace. The world needs more of this thinking. Nicely done and enjoyed your poem. Paul :)

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Posted in Daisy Chain

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It's a difficult one. When

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

It's a difficult one. When and how to intervene on a military level. Maybe the Russians will finally get the message. Soon, I hope.

https...

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Posted in Listening to the News 2/3/22

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A beautiful view and a

Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022

A beautiful view and a wonderful photo. I do enjoy being taken with you on these walks of yours, Rhiannon. Paul :)

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Posted in Wonderful Ludlow View

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All caught up again. You have

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

All caught up again. You have my full admiration for the length of the story so far and the consistently high standard you achieve with each episode. You are on course to have a fully fledged novel. Keep going!

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 18

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Your poetic reminiscences are

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

Your poetic reminiscences are like no other, Jenny. Another gorgeous poem remembering times gone by. Paul :)

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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Such a wonderful walk. I wish

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Such a wonderful walk. I wish I was actually there.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

I have added a pic to promote your piece on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to...

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Posted in before Floris

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Read both parts.

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Read both parts.

I see what you mean about 'salty sea dog'. It was pure coicidence on my part. Honest!

More consummate travelogue. I read about your part of the world and I yearn to visit. It sounds like a place of many wonders...

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Posted in Fire and Rain

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'..will he be nudged

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2025

'..will he be nudged
or safe on his ledge til fully fledged?'

That's an evoactive, highly visual poem. 

I have been watching a nest with baby seagulls in it for a while. Two birds eventually fledged. Sadly, I understand that...

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Posted in Life on the ledge

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'...which

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

'...which

brings respite clear and sonorous..'

I love any lore connected with corvids. Raven, crows, rooks. The lot.

A graceful, eloquent poem right there. 

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Posted in A Poet's Greek Mythology

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