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I have 250 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1147578 times and 338 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1602 of my 5,001 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1629 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Borealis

This is a poem posted this week at a weekly challenge on X/Twitter by the account @TopTweetTuesday. Whilst your first love should always be ABCTales...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

Part 4 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-4 Billy pondered the day ahead. He knew a trip would come down to one of...
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Gold cherry

The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy

The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy It’s said that there is a Heaven on Earth. Maybe this is it. Uphill looks resplendent as I stare out over...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)

Part three at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-3 To the east of Brean Down, dawn brings an orange ball of candescent...
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Gold cherry

After the Geese

After the Geese The last of the geese have flown, migratory release, a summer sown, snows due soon, polar winds biting, phases of the moon, new year...
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1602 of my comments have received 1629 Great Feedback votes

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Cracking story. Enjoyed all

Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2026

Cracking story. Enjoyed all three parts. Classically Russian Doll in its conception. 

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Posted in III. The Body Box - Part Three

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"..and the daffodils trumpet

Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2026

"..and the daffodils trumpet their joy in the way
the days are now lengthening, warming for spring.."

You have captured the language of flowers so adriotly here, Rhiannon.

A cornucopia of colour.

Glorious!

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Posted in Listen to the flowers!

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‘I heard you lead our Arty

Posted on Mon, 09 Mar 2026

‘I heard you lead our Arty into the hollowlands,’ said Mani.

Ooh intriguing. The plot thickens. I like little snippets dropping in like that making the story turn. 

Looking forward to more. 

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 4

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I remember leaving hospital

Posted on Fri, 06 Mar 2026

I remember leaving hospital as a kid after having a broken arm sorted. My mum made me boiled egg and soldiers. It tasted like one of the best meals I ever had, so happy was I to be home. This all seems a bit of a puzzler, Jenny. I hope it's...

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Posted in My Time In A & E ( PT 2 )

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The internal rhyming is so

Posted on Thu, 05 Mar 2026

The internal rhyming is so well done. Pure nonsense but highly enjoyable. Well...unless it's all true. 

My favourite lines "...made the nurse curse when he shredded
her purse and dismembered her favourite hat.."

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Posted in Teeth Tales: Ernie's Terrible Teething

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Eesh....not sure things like

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2026

Eesh....not sure things like 'T B and Cancer' should be thrown around before test results are in. Bless you Jenny.  Looking forward to reading more and hoping for a happy ending. 

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Posted in My Time In A & E

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2026

Thanks for reading, T.

[I try not to think of the footie at the mo. Terrible result last Friday. I watched Leeds last night who did their best but it wasn't enough v The Mancs.] 

I must set a story in my hometown of Brum at some...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (12)

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Still off-kilter and

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2026

Still off-kilter and intriguing.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 3

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Intriguing and off-kilter.

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

Intriguing and off-kilter.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

I have added a pic to promote your work on social media.Please let me know if you prefer to use something else.

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 2

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That's a fascinating,

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

That's a fascinating, sweeping summary of post-war PMs. A piece written with a good deal of authority. I guess you could say it's been quite a rollercoaster in terms of policies and personalities. We could be in for yet more radicalism at the...

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Posted in Thanks Clem!...Sorry about The Queue

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