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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 344577 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1217 of my 4,044 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1231 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Colours of Christmas

It’s December 1 st ….I’m declaring it Christmas… Colours of Christmas Dreams made of cinnamon, nights of ice, tree-light dancing on frosted panes...
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Cherry

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence) Clouds billow like gathering coal dust, telegraph-wire lined, feathers and bone watch dusk descend. Monochrome...
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Cherry

Those We Leave Behind

Those We Leave Behind It feels like I have been standing in this field all my life. From here I can see the edge of town where trees and rivers...
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Cherry

Eastern Sky

Eastern Sky Fractured skies. White lightening Lights up buildings. And for a moment We are blinded. Everything is shrouded. Cordite… Monochrome...
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The Changing of Seasons

The Changing of Seasons Skies painted silver Rain drifting on breezes. Cumulus roiling in the distance. The sigh of mountains Heaving in silence. A...
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1217 of my comments have received 1231 Great Feedback votes

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Another beautifully observed

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2024

Another beautifully observed slice of life. You do the small details well. Really enjoyed this. 

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Posted in Is this the real life?

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Really well written - drew me

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

Really well written - drew me in as the story unfolded. Credible plot, for sure. Adroitly done.

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Posted in The Spa

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"..when lapse of memory

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

"..when lapse of memory

chases days and nights.."

Nothing worse than losing a dream you want to remember. You have done a fine creative job in producing a poem based on something so elusive. Nicely done, Jenny :)

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Posted in What's Not Written

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‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll

Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024

‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll reserve full judgement until I see you two together and evaluate the dynamics of your relationship and if I think you’re taking advantage of him, I’ll intervene.’

Annie is a force of nature - marriage...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 22

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"All I see are double

Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024

"All I see are double standards, some animals are more

equal than others..."

Always good to see Orwell quoted.

Yep, the online world can really get inside your head if you let it. You have painted a picture of chaos adriotly...

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Posted in Too Many Tabs Open

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"...grape hyacinth’s blue

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024

"...grape hyacinth’s blue bubbles
burst up from their sleep..."

Such a sweep of colours and celebration. I think it's spring equinox today. Finally...surely....warmer days and lighter nights. I think we are due after all the rain....

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Posted in Colourful Chorus!

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Reading out loud is a big

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

Reading out loud is a big deal so well done for navigating the adrenaline-fuelled terror and euphoria that goes with events like that. Yeah...I'd love to listen if you do a recording. I haven't put anything onto SoundCloud for a while but it is a...

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Posted in More n'24

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"He drove her to a quiet

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

"He drove her to a quiet place.

And in the land of guns of course he had one too.

He took it out and in the seamlessness of time.."

 

That is a tragic tale, Jane. An elegiac tribute that is sad to read but so...

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Posted in Sparkly Little Paula

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Thanks for reading, T. Yes,

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

Thanks for reading, T. Yes, that was the factory I was thinking of when I read your poem a while back. It was a bit weird that so many people commented on strange smells from factories in the past in your comments thread (including me). The...

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Posted in Falling

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"..deep caves beneath

Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024

"..deep caves beneath capacious

gorges pensively wait to be

explored.."

Such rich and evocative imagery. A lovely tribute to Mother nature, Jenny. Paul

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Posted in Inspired By Mother Nature

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