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I have 262 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1236516 times and 353 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1646 of my 5,141 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1683 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (12)

Part 11 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-11 Bleached skulls littered a shimmering landscape, part buried, markers...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (11)

Part 10 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-10 THE WITCH When the rains didn’t come, life was difficult. The...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (10)

Part 9 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-9 Billy was fairly certain that the wolves were gone; as certain as he...
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Gold cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (9)

Part 8 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-8 With the revelation, a chill ran through them. This was BIG. Thoughts...
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Cherry

Dust

Dust A breeze blows moving dust, sepia-stained monochrome rain, through empty rooms. Ethereal melodies, wind chimes for lost souls, songs audible...
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1646 of my comments have received 1683 Great Feedback votes

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It's a difficult one. When

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

It's a difficult one. When and how to intervene on a military level. Maybe the Russians will finally get the message. Soon, I hope.

https...

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Posted in Listening to the News 2/3/22

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A beautiful view and a

Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022

A beautiful view and a wonderful photo. I do enjoy being taken with you on these walks of yours, Rhiannon. Paul :)

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Posted in Wonderful Ludlow View

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All caught up again. You have

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

All caught up again. You have my full admiration for the length of the story so far and the consistently high standard you achieve with each episode. You are on course to have a fully fledged novel. Keep going!

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 18

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Your poetic reminiscences are

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

Your poetic reminiscences are like no other, Jenny. Another gorgeous poem remembering times gone by. Paul :)

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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"Crash! of thunder –

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2026

"Crash! of thunder –
clash! of cymbals in the sky.."

Dramatic and evocative, Rhiannon.

Thunderstorms forecast here but nothing yet. I am looking forward to cooler days ahead.

Your poem paints pictures. Very nicely done...

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Posted in Night Storm

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Grant Stayner is coming! I

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2026

Grant Stayner is coming! I like the tension building in this section and the descriptive backdrop. I can see the action. The decks have been cleared for a showdown. Onto the next chapter..

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book One (21)

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"...which is freeing

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

"...which is freeing nutrients by decay
replenishing earth's riches day by day.."

A poem written with a symbiotic touch. The IP was any variation on the theme of roots so yours is an exemplary adaptation.

An ideal read to...

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Posted in Roots

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Thanks for reading it, Di.

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

Thanks for reading it, Di. Yep, Danielle was a bit flustered so forgot to be responsible. She may end up paying for that mistake. Next part up soon.

[Hoping you are looking after those lovely feral cats up on your island. Dunno whether you...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)

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"So you don't just go around

Posted on Fri, 22 May 2026

"So you don't just go around draining men." I'm so glad that's not a rhetorical question and that they are establishing boundaries. I like the underlying humour in some of the exchanges. There's not much to go on when mapping dialogue like this...

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book One (12)

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Thanks, Ray. Your skills are

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2026

Thanks, Ray. Your skills are certainly NOT meagre. We all learn from each other on this site. That's its greatest strength. 

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)

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