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"Willow's Missing Tail" 23
Perfidia walked down the stairs but stopped when she saw Jon; had he waited for her? “I told you I wouldn’t be long;” she shrugged, continuing down...
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"Silence"
War inside my head explodes with feelings of disbelief and despair, paralyzing me with debilitating sorrow a sorrow painted by my anger at the...
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Endings
In the days that follow, we will fall into a depression and battle stomach wrenching pain at the incomprehensible diagnosis and seeing the ravages of...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 22
There was just over an hour and a half left before sunset when the doorbell played Beethoven’s Für Elise. Perfidia’s eyes widened and she looked at...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 21
“Perfidia,” Martha said with an apologetic look as she entered the kitchen from the backdoor, “I’m sorry we couldn’t wait for you.” “I understand. It...
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So happy to see this next
Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025
So happy to see this next chapter.
Cedric is a conniving robot and stilll creepy. I hope Vanessa won't be taken in by his gourmet talent or Spencer will have to show his friend the door, and soon. I enjoyed getting Spencer's perspective....
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Sorry I haven't left more
Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2025
Sorry I haven't left more comments on the chapters but I usually catch up reading on my phone at work and the mobile doesn’t allow me to post - But I love this story and can't wait for the next installment.
Cedric is creepy but there is...
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I'm sure this was a difficult
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
I'm sure this was a difficult poem to write; I'm happy you didn't let the dark memories fester within, that you wrote them out and held them up to the sunlight so they can wither away and you can emerge, whole and beautiful as you're meant to be...
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Cows seem complacent when
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Cows seem complacent when they are grazing. I find them comforting to watch and I agree with Turlough, their large expressive eyes are gorgeous. They’re sturdy, beautiful beasts. Your poem brought me into an early morning light where I saw all of...
Read full commentPosted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.
Expletive deserved; wrong
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Expletive deserved; wrong number should never wake sleeping being. I concur demurely: WTF.
(where's their focus?)
Fun read Luigi - thank you for posting.
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So kind of you to say this Di
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
So kind of you to say this Di_Hard because I’ve become fond of these characters too. It has become difficult for me to focus on almost anything lately but when I went back to this tale I found solace in creating their world. I’ve even been...
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Buon compleanno Luigi!
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Buon compleanno Luigi!
You're a young soul and your poetic agility proves mental exercise is as imperative as the physical counterpart in staying young. Your gift of words thankfully posted on this site, have brought smiles to all who read...
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Very well deserved golden
Posted on Wed, 22 Jan 2025
Very well deserved golden cherries Hudsonmoon----This was a gem of a story. Pearls of humor drip from every word of resolution. And as always, the character's and dialogue were pure perfection. Please keep writing these vignettes; they are founts...
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I love the build up in the
Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025
I love the build up in the last few chapters and the cliff hanger of an ending in this one- Did Spencer escape out the bathroom window? Is he going to cybermates to fix his head? I cannot wait for the next chapter to post.
You have a gem...
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I agree with insert- you are
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
I agree with insert- you are very thoughtful neighbours and you took excellent care of your friend's home. This was an enjoyable read; thank you for posting it.
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