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Feels like there might be a
Posted on Sun, 05 Apr 2026
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
You've stirred the suspect pot nicely w.w.j.abercrombie and moved the story closer to its finale. Well done, and thank you for taking part in the 'pass the story' challenge.
Agree with you Terrence. We all have a personal set of abilities, strengths and weaknesses, and finding how to work within them will be different for each of us. We are unique, we are stardust like snowflakes - no two alike but each one beautiful...
Thank you for this great addition to the 'pass the story' challenge Marandina. Your detailed police station and undertones of animosity between the staff painted a convincing picture. I'm so glad every author is putting their personal spin on...
You have done it justice Makis- I love the details you give on Amos Snodgrass, opening a new perspective that is very interesting. I cannot wait to see what the next author will do with it.
You've given a thorough accounting of the affairs of these characters, Turlough. This story has grown legs and it's moving all over the place. I cannot wait to see who the next chapter's author will be, and where they will take it.
Thank you Luigi for participating in the challenge. I enjoyed the transition into a counterfeit ring and counterfeit murder, a criminal turn of events. Now we will have to see what developments the next writer will bring to this story.
You have opened a discussion with your thoughtful posting. I too struggle with the idea of God, though I was raised to believe in God I have lost that childhood innocence and find myself questioning the existence of a supreme being,especially in...
Feels like there might be a
Posted on Sun, 05 Apr 2026
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
Read full commentPosted in I. Deep Storage - Part One
A humorous way to end it
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
You've stirred the suspect
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
You've stirred the suspect pot nicely w.w.j.abercrombie and moved the story closer to its finale. Well done, and thank you for taking part in the 'pass the story' challenge.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Agree with you Terrence. We
Posted on Sun, 29 Mar 2026
Agree with you Terrence. We all have a personal set of abilities, strengths and weaknesses, and finding how to work within them will be different for each of us. We are unique, we are stardust like snowflakes - no two alike but each one beautiful...
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Thank you for this great
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026
Thank you for this great addition to the 'pass the story' challenge Marandina. Your detailed police station and undertones of animosity between the staff painted a convincing picture. I'm so glad every author is putting their personal spin on...
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I've jumped in here and now
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2026
I've jumped in here and now have to go to Part 1 and catch up. It has captured my imagination.
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You have done it justice
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2026
You have done it justice Makis- I love the details you give on Amos Snodgrass, opening a new perspective that is very interesting. I cannot wait to see what the next author will do with it.
Thank you for taking on this challenge...
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part Five
You've given a thorough
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
You've given a thorough accounting of the affairs of these characters, Turlough. This story has grown legs and it's moving all over the place. I cannot wait to see who the next chapter's author will be, and where they will take it.
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four
Thank you Luigi for
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
Thank you Luigi for participating in the challenge. I enjoyed the transition into a counterfeit ring and counterfeit murder, a criminal turn of events. Now we will have to see what developments the next writer will bring to this story.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass the Parcel Part 3
You have opened a discussion
Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026
You have opened a discussion with your thoughtful posting. I too struggle with the idea of God, though I was raised to believe in God I have lost that childhood innocence and find myself questioning the existence of a supreme being,especially in...
Read full commentPosted in The Possibility Of Having Lived Other Lives
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