"It spins the imagination round, your poppycock logic of hologram life…We are solid sir not see thru projections…You jackanapes of oddities have put...
Pasty faces and foggy lands In dreams that shake the soul Phobetor weaves a tapestry Of dank and dripping shrouds To chill the blood and tremble lips...
Joey listened intently to the bird’s singing in the tree and began to hum the tune along with them trying to remember the words. Joey’s dad picked up...
“Perfidia, I’m sure Jon isn’t in jeopardy with your cousin,” Martha reasoned. “And I’m not so sure,” Perfidia replied and turned back to Willow with...
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The changing tempo, the easy
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
The changing tempo, the easy segue from one cadence of nursery rhyme to another was flawless, and your words perfect pearls of putdowns. It is true today, if you have a name that is recognized, the publishing world is open to you-no talent needed...
Came to this story late but so happy to have read it now. Seeing an eclipse can have an effect, an out of the moment feeling, becaue everyting looks a bit off, not normal, strange and beautiful, I liked the happy ending you gave to the story;...
Always enjoy the diary entries you write Jenny. I too love the beauty of a waterfal,l and being able to spend a whole day there, havng it all to your self, that had to have been magical.
I lost my car key once- unknowingly placed them in the freezer with the container of ice cream I'd bought - didn't find them for several days-But it is odd how two places that close in location can offer the same service and chage such a wide...
I Like the nuance of the characters traits and though you knew something was going to happen with Blodwyn's entry.. winning by a hair wasn't expected. Well done; this was a fun read!
Adorable poem Jenny- and when I read it I smiled thinking how we must think alike; I'd had a silly thought turn into a poem about a rabbit on a spring day. But, I love this mouse world you've created and a spring day in that life was much fun to...
Her story is sad indeed. A woman of remarkable courage and vision led an army into battle and won but had to hide her gender and don men's clothes - and because she was a woman, her victory awarded her, not a medal but a martyr's death. Even...
I love the idea of a 100 words a day journal; wish I had the time to start one myself. Maybe when I retire? But that date keeps moving into infinity, so not sure when my leisure begins. But I enjoyed reading your February entries very much and...
The changing tempo, the easy
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
The changing tempo, the easy segue from one cadence of nursery rhyme to another was flawless, and your words perfect pearls of putdowns. It is true today, if you have a name that is recognized, the publishing world is open to you-no talent needed...
Read full commentPosted in Nursery Writes
Came to this story late but
Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2024
Came to this story late but so happy to have read it now. Seeing an eclipse can have an effect, an out of the moment feeling, becaue everyting looks a bit off, not normal, strange and beautiful, I liked the happy ending you gave to the story;...
Read full commentPosted in Eclipse
Always enjoy the diary
Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024
Always enjoy the diary entries you write Jenny. I too love the beauty of a waterfal,l and being able to spend a whole day there, havng it all to your self, that had to have been magical.
Read full commentPosted in Waterfall
I lost my car key once-
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2024
I lost my car key once- unknowingly placed them in the freezer with the container of ice cream I'd bought - didn't find them for several days-But it is odd how two places that close in location can offer the same service and chage such a wide...
Read full commentPosted in The Key to The Slices of Life. Part Two.
I Like the nuance of the
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2024
I Like the nuance of the characters traits and though you knew something was going to happen with Blodwyn's entry.. winning by a hair wasn't expected. Well done; this was a fun read!
Read full commentPosted in Blodwyn's Hair
Adorable poem Jenny- and when
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024
Adorable poem Jenny- and when I read it I smiled thinking how we must think alike; I'd had a silly thought turn into a poem about a rabbit on a spring day. But, I love this mouse world you've created and a spring day in that life was much fun to...
Read full commentPosted in Wild Side Of April
Her story is sad indeed. A
Posted on Sat, 09 Mar 2024
Her story is sad indeed. A woman of remarkable courage and vision led an army into battle and won but had to hide her gender and don men's clothes - and because she was a woman, her victory awarded her, not a medal but a martyr's death. Even...
Read full commentPosted in The Maid of Orleans
"peeping Squirus Vulgaris..."
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2024
"peeping Squirus Vulgaris..." --- I think his cousins live here in Florida; I've seen a few peeping squirrels looking into my windows.
I love your journal entries they are witty and enjoyable. You've brought to life a town of...
Read full commentPosted in This Sort of Thing - February 2024 - Last Orders
Spring awakens in your lovey
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2024
Spring awakens in your lovey words Jenny. Beautiful poetry:
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Read full commentPosted in Rousing Spring
I love the idea of a 100
Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2024
I love the idea of a 100 words a day journal; wish I had the time to start one myself. Maybe when I retire? But that date keeps moving into infinity, so not sure when my leisure begins. But I enjoyed reading your February entries very much and...
Read full commentPosted in This Sort of Thing - February 2024 - Early Doors
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