Strains of John Mayer's Gravity Fills the air Wafting from the portable speaker By my beach chair I'm parked on my lawn Catching rays of Vitamin D On...
Sisters are great but there are times in certain adolescent years that older sisters can view younger ones as bothersome, and I suppose I was. Being...
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I so enjoyed reading this-
Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016
I so enjoyed reading this- glad the boy recovered but I didn't want the adventure to end. So many rhymes and interesting turns of phrase kept me smiling. I do love a hope filled story and this was amazing. Loved your take on the Angel too, pipe...
This is so powerful. I hear what you are saying and yes, All lives do matter. I wish there was a more human conncection, empathy and understanding between all of earth's inhabitants- a stronger bond to do unto others as we would have done unto...
I loved this. The characters you created felt real and your descriptive writing held my interest. I loved the firm convctions and the final acceptance. It was very well written...hope there is more.
I so enjoyed reading this-
Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016
I so enjoyed reading this- glad the boy recovered but I didn't want the adventure to end. So many rhymes and interesting turns of phrase kept me smiling. I do love a hope filled story and this was amazing. Loved your take on the Angel too, pipe...
Read full commentPosted in A gift at Christmas
This is so powerful. I hear
Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2016
This is so powerful. I hear what you are saying and yes, All lives do matter. I wish there was a more human conncection, empathy and understanding between all of earth's inhabitants- a stronger bond to do unto others as we would have done unto...
Read full commentPosted in All Lives Matter (statement, political)
Simple and heartfelt and
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2016
Simple and heartfelt and again feels like it could be a song.
Read full commentPosted in Love Is A Better Thing I Do With You
An interesting concept and it
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
An interesting concept and it certainly feels like we're in grade school level knowledge when it comes to knowing what life is all about.
Read full commentPosted in Classroom
well done
Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015
I loved this. The characters you created felt real and your descriptive writing held my interest. I loved the firm convctions and the final acceptance. It was very well written...hope there is more.
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