“Pleased to meet you sir,” Daniel held out his hand even though the large Dolphin-like being had no hand to take it with but he hoped the gesture of...
Will the winds howl and destroy Or blow farther out to sea? Devastation haunts in dreams And waking brings no relief The weather on now 24/7 The news...
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Where do I begin? This was so
Posted on Wed, 07 Dec 2016
Where do I begin? This was so well written and so to the point it hurts and that is a good thing. Your voice in this is strong and begs the reader to think. I loved this and wish everyone in the whole of our planet could read this and reflect on...
This is so powerful. I hear what you are saying and yes, All lives do matter. I wish there was a more human conncection, empathy and understanding between all of earth's inhabitants- a stronger bond to do unto others as we would have done unto...
I loved this. The characters you created felt real and your descriptive writing held my interest. I loved the firm convctions and the final acceptance. It was very well written...hope there is more.
Where do I begin? This was so
Posted on Wed, 07 Dec 2016
Where do I begin? This was so well written and so to the point it hurts and that is a good thing. Your voice in this is strong and begs the reader to think. I loved this and wish everyone in the whole of our planet could read this and reflect on...
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This is so powerful. I hear
Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2016
This is so powerful. I hear what you are saying and yes, All lives do matter. I wish there was a more human conncection, empathy and understanding between all of earth's inhabitants- a stronger bond to do unto others as we would have done unto...
Read full commentPosted in All Lives Matter (statement, political)
Simple and heartfelt and
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2016
Simple and heartfelt and again feels like it could be a song.
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An interesting concept and it
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
An interesting concept and it certainly feels like we're in grade school level knowledge when it comes to knowing what life is all about.
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well done
Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015
I loved this. The characters you created felt real and your descriptive writing held my interest. I loved the firm convctions and the final acceptance. It was very well written...hope there is more.
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