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"Roslyn Pond and You"
We’ll follow the path To the old tree swing Down by Roslyn pond Hand in hand Shy smiles Back and forth Our footprints On the worn dirt path Last only...
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Look For The Good
I am posting this link for no other reason than this song made me feel good today- It is happily optimistic and I’ve be teetering on pessimism a lot...
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Twisted Time Chapter 2
“Where are we?” Sara heard the fear in Steve's tone and he was also squeezing her hand so tight, her fingers were going numb. “It’s okay; you’re...
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Roses are Red and Diamonds are Blue CHAPTER 1
The wayward winds Blast through life On a whim Changing everything J ane lifted the lid on the old trunk and the musty smell of trapped time...
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Twisted Time
“It is time.” Bilal said quietly but his sister shook her head not wanting to believe him. “You can not ignore it Sireal, I am telling you we have to...
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I could feel the forest
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
I could feel the forest around me and it was a peaceful walk along with you. I too love deers though there are none where I live now and I wish we did not hunt these and other animals as we do, though I understand in times of old it was necessary...
Read full commentPosted in Nature's Ambiance
Adorable, the tempo and beat
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
Adorable, the tempo and beat of this sounded like a nursery rhyme. I loved it and could see it with illustrations on a page in a children's book of poems.
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 11)
I love a rainy day when all
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2019
I love a rainy day when all things are renewed with the drenching. Your poetic descriptions accurately painted a grey, yet still colorful, walk in the rain and I enjoyed walking it with you. I felt the sadness in your words at the memory of lost...
Read full commentPosted in Cocktail Of Clouds And Rain
Away from city lights, on a
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
Away from city lights, on a dark night, gazing up at the velvet, endless sky, it gives a new persepctive. We are so small, so inconsequential in the scheme of this expansive universe. It humbles and makes me aware of the fragile workings of our...
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Beautifully written, perfect
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2019
Beautifully written, perfect descriptions of a rainy day, wind blowing and rain pouring down while you view it cozily from inside and playing a game of scrabble. ( I love scrabble) . It all sounds so inviting... and as you'd wished...I hope the...
Read full commentPosted in Periods Of Joy
Your descriptions made me
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
Your descriptions made me feel the changes of seasons, the arid air and the cooler rush of spring moving this ever flowing river along - and the quest to be strong, like the river. I felt several different meanings in the words and to each reader...
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Your story and words felt so
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Your story and words felt so real. The acceptance of the spirit of the lost child, still ephemerally in their lives, was touching and heartfelt. The notion that The Mother and Child connection is never severed came through beautifully. Katy is ...
Read full commentPosted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
I love the flavor of
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2019
I love the flavor of friendship in this – you’re letting us in on your thoughts as this day unfolds, like we’re best friends and I laughed, commiserated and cheered and it was so much fun spending the day there – I truly enjoyed your wit and...
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 3: Tunnelling Through
I could not stop reading,
Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019
I could not stop reading, each morsel of this story was more tender than the last. The way you wrote of the beauty of her poetry conjured images both amazing and provoking, winter can be warmly cold and artistically beautiful. This was a great...
Read full commentPosted in The Norwegian Poetess
Thank you airyfairy, it has
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
Thank you airyfairy, it has always stayed with me even though I'd never meet this relative, the ending of his life seemed so harsh for one so young (he'd turned 29 the September before that Christmas Eve) and the year 1944 just evoked so many...
Read full commentPosted in 1944 (12miles south of Spa Belgium)
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