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Look For The Good
I am posting this link for no other reason than this song made me feel good today- It is happily optimistic and I’ve be teetering on pessimism a lot...
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Twisted Time Chapter 2
“Where are we?” Sara heard the fear in Steve's tone and he was also squeezing her hand so tight, her fingers were going numb. “It’s okay; you’re...
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Roses are Red and Diamonds are Blue CHAPTER 1
The wayward winds Blast through life On a whim Changing everything J ane lifted the lid on the old trunk and the musty smell of trapped time...
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Twisted Time
“It is time.” Bilal said quietly but his sister shook her head not wanting to believe him. “You can not ignore it Sireal, I am telling you we have to...
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Trapped in An Episode of SURVIVOR!
Survival, a word I previously associated with a TV show. One I’d never watched because I’m not much of a ‘live or die’ type and didn’t want to see...
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I love what you surmise in
Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019
I love what you surmise in this thought provoking theory. I would book first passage to this Planet 9 free from all the animosity, hatred, wanton pollution etc... It would be a utopia for sure. Perhaps Heaven is out there among the uncharted...
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I liked the structure, the
Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019
I liked the structure, the way the words flowed to take you through the moment when everything changed form lovely to painful, like anytime in life when we are hit with something fearful we pray. In this poem, your prayer was answered.
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I found so many ways to
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
I found so many ways to interpret this, one, it sounds like a marvelous garden planted and protected, but two, I feel it is a soul that is planted and defended in that garden and will not venture beyond the wall to where it is not protected. I...
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I love that you respect all
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
I love that you respect all these animals as do I, and I know my dog is smarter than me because he tells me exactly what he wants( food, water, walk) and I listen every time.
Great rhyme and flow of this poem, I loved it and the cherries...
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Hi Jenny,
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
Hi Jenny,
Yes, I know we both wish they had written down those well loved recipes. I have ingredients but nothing of the measurements so her special touch, her loving touch, to all she did is lost to me.
Just as you'd said, the...
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I often wonder about the
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I often wonder about the house I grew up in, now someone else's home...did we forget a picture? Leave behind a treasured trinket that fell into a floor board? Maybe a well loved house does capture some of our beloingings just to hold on to us as...
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Hi Jenny,
Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2019
Hi Jenny,
You take us along on these journeys to your past and we are all grateful travelers.
Your warm remembrances are lit with love and friendship. I really enjoyed the last line, truly fond memories. Thank you for sharing this...
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This is clearly written with
Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018
This is clearly written with true heartfelt devotion and is powerful in its conviction.
Christmas songs throughout the year- is a lovely thought and one I wish could be true too. For if we could keep the Christmas light in our hearts all...
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I had to look it up too
Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018
I had to look it up too (sough) great word to use in this image invoking poem. Loved it.
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SO much flavor of the times,
Posted on Wed, 01 Mar 2017
SO much flavor of the times, very well described. I loved the images and travel tales-- they provoked in me a longing to travel and a fond remeberence of yester years.
Loved it, very well written and the end was superb...a Buddhist...
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