Rain in a Forest
By Penny4athought
Sat, 06 Feb 2021
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2 comments
Wind in
Trees
Air
Feathering
Over skin
Sky-lightning
Ozone sharp
Taunting
Rain
Bursting clouds
Fat drops
Slither
Down
Leaves
Rivulets
Snake puddles
in soil
Breathe in
Petrichor
Saturated
Atmosphere
Drenched
in Nature
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I felt the words in your poem
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I felt the words in your poem Penny. The rain falling and trees touched by the force of nature. You captured the scene perfectly.
Jenny.
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I imagine mysef running
Permalink Submitted by Penny4athought on
I imagine mysef running though a forest when it rains; it looks so amaizng when the rain drips from the leaves and everything is vibrant and beautiful after a good downpour. Thank you for reading and again for your lovely comment.
Penny4athought
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