Emily shivered with renewed fear once Brent left the kitchen with that professionally held gun in his hand to answer the door, or attack the visitor...
Caitlyn righted herself on the seat and held on as the carriage rocked over the uneven road. She looked out the carriage window expecting to see the...
Yes, those vivid dreams that impart some knowledge, a beautiful line for a poem or song, or a peek into the universe's secrets but it drifts away out of your grasp as you wake up, leaving you struggling to remember what it was--I think most can...
The healing spirit of animals on humans is well told in this sad tale of loss. Is there is a recognition of need from cat to human, or dog to human, or horse to human, or any animal that sees that broken piece within us? I think animals are far...
I enjoyed this poem with it’s revelry on New Year. A NEW YEAR, and I hope it is a ‘New Year’, not a recycled, down trodden, smack some lipstick on it old year...I connected with your poem’s optimism as I believe in the goodness within us...
The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...
Autobiography of a water droplet, a brilliant take on the water cycle and a well written poem. I enjoyed the journey and philosophical thoughts from the droplet.
Will that be my end?
Well, if that plant’s eaten
I may be...
I'm so glad there is more to this story; it's so unique and I am having so much fun reading it. Cannot wait for the next posting. This could be a Movie or even a TV series; it has a lot of potential.
I’m sorry to hear about your trees; I’ve lost a few in storms too so I know how much it changes the landscape, and storms of that magnitude can be frightening. As for your poem, it hits the chord of humanity; picks at those who offer cold,...
Squeezing onion-juice; not
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Squeezing onion-juice; not heard it put that way before. Your poem is charged with turbulent energy and I loved it.
Read full commentPosted in Scary is the Sky
Yes, those vivid dreams that
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Yes, those vivid dreams that impart some knowledge, a beautiful line for a poem or song, or a peek into the universe's secrets but it drifts away out of your grasp as you wake up, leaving you struggling to remember what it was--I think most can...
Read full commentPosted in The Muse
The healing spirit of animals
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
The healing spirit of animals on humans is well told in this sad tale of loss. Is there is a recognition of need from cat to human, or dog to human, or horse to human, or any animal that sees that broken piece within us? I think animals are far...
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)
I agree with all of the above
Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024
I agree with all of the above comments; this was a hoot to read. You create hysterical characters and make me laugh at their absurdity.
I logged onto my virtual therapist who helps me to process the stress of being such a...
Read full commentPosted in Make Millions in Two Minutes...
I enjoyed this poem with it’s
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
I enjoyed this poem with it’s revelry on New Year. A NEW YEAR, and I hope it is a ‘New Year’, not a recycled, down trodden, smack some lipstick on it old year...I connected with your poem’s optimism as I believe in the goodness within us...
Read full commentPosted in January Panorama
The melodic verses are
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...
Read full commentPosted in Sic Transit Gloria
A voice of a molecule,
Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024
A voice of a molecule, fascinating poem Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in Autobiography (but not mine!)
Autobiography of a water
Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024
Autobiography of a water droplet, a brilliant take on the water cycle and a well written poem. I enjoyed the journey and philosophical thoughts from the droplet.
Will that be my end?
Read full commentWell, if that plant’s eaten
I may be...
Posted in Autobiography (but not mine!)
I'm so glad there is more to
Posted on Fri, 08 Dec 2023
I'm so glad there is more to this story; it's so unique and I am having so much fun reading it. Cannot wait for the next posting. This could be a Movie or even a TV series; it has a lot of potential.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you ......Part 9
I’m sorry to hear about your
Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2023
I’m sorry to hear about your trees; I’ve lost a few in storms too so I know how much it changes the landscape, and storms of that magnitude can be frightening. As for your poem, it hits the chord of humanity; picks at those who offer cold,...
Read full commentPosted in October 2023
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