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"Murky Waters"
Misleading words Linguistic twists Blur the lines Between us Ego aggrandized Facts victimized Truth obliterated History manipulated Tribe of like...
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"Dwindling Ancient Forests"
Primal Temperate Rainforest Mist Shrouded Trees Moss covered grounds older than the rivers history in the soil mystery in the air whispers on the...
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"A Little Rhyme"
Fog rolls in on ocean shores Casting shadows on gossamer doors Imagination writes the tale On a ghost ship we can sail To ancient lands in our...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 10
Brent walked into the apartment and found Thies intently watching the clip of the man at Emily’s door. “No need to wonder where he went; I saw him in...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 9
(Events from earlier that evening) “Sahara, get in here right now!” Daphne yelled in a tone that demanded immediate action and her voice reverberated...
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Posted on Thu, 18 May 2023
Bravo for that strong, uplifting last verse. I applauded the sentiment. Take charge of your voice, express yourself and do not give a care for those who wish to silence you.
Every writer must find their voice, their truth and it...
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You paint a vivid picture of
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
You paint a vivid picture of tradition, beauty and tranquility in a world far from here. In your verses, I see landscaped gardens and calm waters beneath tiny foot bridges, cherry blossoms pink in the sunlight and the porcelain face of a Geisha,...
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Beautiful and lyrical is your
Posted on Wed, 17 May 2023
Beautiful and lyrical is your ode to a butterfly and its beautiful dance through life. It is sad to think their life span is so short, but in that short time they do create many smiles. Well deserved POD.
Read full commentPosted in Miracle Of Spring On Gossamer Wings
A poem to hearld a spring day
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
A poem to hearld a spring day's awakening; all the parts fluid, building on the moments and creating a picture in words, as beautiful as a monet painting. I particularly loved your descriptive images in this passage: "and first grafitti...
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Your sentiments in this poem
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
Your sentiments in this poem reflect, for me, the immortal words of John Lennon:
"Imagine all the people sharing all the world- You may say I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one - I hope someday you'll join us and the world will live...
Read full commentPosted in Sowing The Seeds Of Love
You truly need to publish
Posted on Sun, 23 Apr 2023
You truly need to publish these screwball comedy vignettes. You have the dialogue and scene set down pat; all you need to do is slap it between two book covers.
Eating bugs for beer what a concept, rather disgusting but it made for a very...
Read full commentPosted in The Goings On at Ned's
Oh my, and now covid to boot?
Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023
Oh my, and now covid to boot? You have had a time of it and I know hospitals are not conducive to sleep, especially if you have to share the sleeping quarters. This has to be so stressful for you and yet your sense of humor remains at the...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3
azure perfumed tapestry...
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
azure perfumed tapestry....just lovely!
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It sounds like you could be a
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
It sounds like you could be a Brick Master with the way you describe your enjoyment. My older son loves lego's too and as a child, at the age of 5, he begged for the Pirate Ship. He was so determined and adamant that he could build it that we...
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Your humor is intact in this
Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023
Your humor is intact in this gripping piece of autobiography and that amazes me; it had to have been harrowing when you woke up and realized you were on the floor, and not being able to reach your daughter had to be frightening. I don't know why...
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