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"Hug-a-lass"
The amber glow of the setting sun and the crunch of bicycle tires on dead leaves sent shivers down her spine. “Roger, I don’t think I’m going inside...
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Willow's Missing Tail" 10
The portal was not closed to Willow. She slunk into the garden and her midnight coat blended into the shadows, but her eyes glittered with magical...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 11
Emily stared at the small square drive in her hand; why was it hidden in Sir Harry’s collar? It didn’t look like a chip used for tracking. She...
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"Murky Waters"
Misleading words Linguistic twists Blur the lines Between us Ego aggrandized Facts victimized Truth obliterated History manipulated Tribe of like...
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"Dwindling Ancient Forests"
Primal Temperate Rainforest Mist Shrouded Trees Moss covered grounds older than the rivers history in the soil mystery in the air whispers on the...
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Great, evocative poem Jenny,
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Great, evocative poem Jenny, alive with the storm you were experiencing and the fears you had as a child. Well deserving of golden cherries. I could feel the thunder and see the flashes of lightning across the sky in your very descriptive...
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Your poem conjures sadness,
Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023
Your poem conjures sadness, an introspective consideration and juxtaposes it with ordinary images like the grandfather rattling his teeth and the cockatoo named Dog. The tempo and visual words are profound yet illusive. What is the “first sorrow...
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Yes, this is a well deserved
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023
Yes, this is a well deserved pick of the week. There are those poems that touch a heart chord and this is one. We do reflect on past connections and wonder if it is as remembered, or was something missed? ...“Imaginary Diary", I think we've all...
Read full commentPosted in You Never Said
Like Ed, also not a hunter.
Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023
Like Ed, also not a hunter. The Friendship and loyalty have put the two in an uncomfortable deception but the truth would get them out of it…good setup and defined characters; is there more to this?
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Loved this poetic ode to Rain
Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023
Loved this poetic ode to Rain, very nicely done; I can hear the rain drenching the land, quenching the thirsty earth and softly pattering on the rooftops. Enjoyed this very much....
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To stay positive when faced
Posted on Sun, 13 Aug 2023
Staying positive when faced with a harsh diagnosis is difficult but you have a good outlook, by your last line and, as none of us knows the end of our chapter, living each day and seeking the beauty in it is the best we can do. I am happy to read...
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Yes, I did register to be
Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023
Yes, I did register to be there. Thank you for asking.
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Once again Craven Danger
Posted on Sat, 01 Jul 2023
Once again Craven Danger lives up to his name; he's always finding trouble and I agree with Marandina about hearing that NY accent, its lovely, but to me it’s hometown music. Congratulations on the well deserved POD and the new digs too. Hope you...
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There is a morning dew feel
Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023
There is a morning dew feel in this poem; nature waking up, soft touches of beauty, so delicate, like the mayfly. Wonderful poem Jenny.
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The pride of seeing your
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
The pride of seeing your child find their talent, wherever it is found, is transforming. I had a similar experience with my younger son; I have a piano but no time to play and decades passed since my days of lessons and time enjoying it. The...
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