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"A cup with a viewpoint"
Liquid energy dark and hypnotic Brewed from the finest beans Touches the lips with instant gratification Caffeine pumping through the bloodstream...
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"Time and Stardust"
Time, we measure it, watch it, demand it go faster, command it to slow down and pray to stop it. It is the background to thoughts, actions and...
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If you see a tiny door...
The tiny door was not seen unless you crouched so low to the ground your nose scraped the hard pavement stones. Then you might see it. But, if you...
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A Christmas to Remember
Blue ice reflected the moon’s light. His hand warmed hers as Christmas snow fell gently down around them, but not as gently as his kiss upon her lips...
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December 8, 1980
It was 40 years ago today Lost chords Echoing lyrics Incomprehensible news Say it isn’t so Discordant Disjointed sounds Gunshot? Impossible Who Why...
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Whispers of love do travel
Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021
Whispers of love do travel along sensory paths , a fragrance, a sound, the weather of the day can bring swift recall. Precious moments we've shared, recorded on our timeline, waiting for a replay. They are the whispered hello from the ones we...
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Love the word play with the
Posted on Tue, 04 May 2021
Love the word play with the though process and of course one must find that Bishop in there somewhere and avoid the HS. This almost felt like a paragraph in Alice in Wonderland, moving through perception and changing lenses, with no voice. Great...
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The poem is crafted in
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
The poem is crafted in perfect harmony from the first word and Where this poem takes you, is to that incredible, vulnerable moment you trust your love to someone. It is tender and heartbreaking and by your ending, it was the wrong person to...
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Never thought about how
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
Never thought about how difficult that migration would be for birds, now I think I'll never forget. Sharp writing, no superfluous words, every line flows into the next and the journey is with awareness. Thank you for posting this for I love when...
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Perfectly written, the muse
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Perfectly written, the muse of nature has stirred my words many a time so I am with you on that point and that sunrise must have been magnificent. Very well deserved Cherries Jenny- loved this poem
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I knew the end to this story
Posted on Wed, 28 Apr 2021
I knew the end to this story as I started it - and still when it crescendo and exploded, I was shattered. This is so very well written, so telling of that moment in history, that moment in New York at Belmont Park. You're description of seeing...
Read full commentPosted in When Guilty Becomes Foolish
If all could see as you do -
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
If all could see as you do - feel as you do- perhaps there would be change- but for those too wrapped in their ways -too blind to the pitfalls of their continued quick comforts -there is no hope for change soon. The plastic blight is everywhere...
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All the parts/characters of
Posted on Sun, 25 Apr 2021
All the parts/characters of this fast moving story feel like they're about to collide...and I can not wait for the collision! This is Great stuff...and will be a best seller when you slap it between two covers and market this novel!
Read full commentPosted in Craven Gets Flashed XXIII
Yes, please rewind the mind
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
Yes, please rewind the mind to those sunny days of youth and love, such a perfect poem Jenny. You capture the longing but you also embrace the memory, knowing you still feel that love today. And the ending is pure and beautiful.."Older and wiser...
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Connect with the nature and
Posted on Thu, 15 Apr 2021
Connect with the nature and let it inspire, so very well desribed here, this is a lovely work Jenny and I enjoyed reading this.
Read full commentPosted in Quark And Curiousness Of The Mind
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