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"Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

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Willow's Tail" 29 (gather the suspects)

By Penny4athought on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

The festival’s closing ritual had begun, the reception hall was lit with twinkling fairy lights and a banner strung across its impressive façade...

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"Willow's Tail" 28

By Penny4athought on Sun, 15 May 2022

“Hello Martha.” Dillon’s smile widened as he approached her and Martha’s heart slammed in her chest. He was their nemesis? “I can’t believe it’s you...

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By Penny4athought on Sun, 17 Apr 2022

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Your poem captures the reader

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

Your poem captures the reader from the start and with the familiar surroundings of the Wizard of Oz; it sets a pace we can all fly in until it drops us into the dark realities of current life here on terra 'not Kansas anymore.' And the last line...

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Beautiful poem; I am in awe

Posted on Fri, 10 Jun 2022

Beautiful poem; I am in awe of these ferns- ancient seedless plants, millions of years in existence -one of the oldest neighbors in the forest. What tales they could tell if they could. I especially loved your last line's offer of respect....

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Snippets of recognition in

Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

Snippets of recognition in this but not sure I’m correct in my interpretations.For, Fisher king -is that the DJ in the movie with the homeless man (Robin Williams) who he befriends and whose life he had inadvertently destroyed by previous actions...

Posted in Kings of Myth and Illusion

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Grimm's tales certainly are

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

Grimm's tales certainly are grim (pun intended) never thought they were palatable for young children but definitely thought fine reading for young adults. Your version of this dark account of the Pied Piper was nicely orchestrated and I liked the...

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The last line, the way you

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

The last line, the way you juxtapose nature and man; seeds and thoughts intertwining taken by the wind, to be squirreled away, to ponder on. That truly drew me in and took me there. I saw the sun, the pollen, insects buzzing, and thoughts...

Posted in Maple Tree Den

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A slithering poem of

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

A slithering poem of thoughtful revenge by an avenging, warrior worm, and perfectly executed in Shakespearean tone. You have a definite talent for this Onemorething. Pray do more...

Posted in A Blindworm’s Revenge

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I loved this read and the

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

I loved this read and the name for the plant too. I imagine it was the inspiration for velcro-which make me suppose there is nothing man can know, that nature hasn't shown us.

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Tears, shivers and that

Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022

Tears, shivers and that chocked up feeling, told me how much your poem resonated with me. Beautiful and poignant.

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This sounds like a place I

Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2022

This sounds like a place I would love to visit. I love nature especially on a blustery day; it does make you feel alive, the winds, warm or chilled, have a way of stirring the soul. I loved this poem and the place it took me to. Thank you for...

Posted in Up On The Ridgeway

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Hi Di-hard, so happy you're

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

Hi Di-hard, so happy you're reading along. Hadn't thought of a sequel but you're right, it's possible. I’m trying to finish this with a worthy ending but I'll miss these characters too; they've been fun to create and get to know...hmmm, maybe a...