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"The Coffee House Spy" 5

By Penny4athought on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Stacy turned from the window and holstered her gun as Brent walked back into the apartment. “Did you get the license plate?” she asked. “I framed a...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 5

By Penny4athought on Sat, 08 Oct 2022

Perfidia pulled into the parking area of the Arcane Gardens and Pet Rescue and stared at the nondescript building ahead with a skeptical eye. “It...
Fantasy
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"Anemoi" (wind gods- mythology)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 01 Oct 2022

Eurus owns the Eastern winds And all the autumn colors The Blazing trees Gold and red September’s Artful nature October nights Shortened days Through...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 4

By Penny4athought on Mon, 19 Sep 2022

Martha brought a plate of fresh baked brownies to the table and Perfidia breathed in the chocolate laced aroma. “I love brownies; and these are...
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"Autumn frame of Mind"

By Penny4athought on Sat, 10 Sep 2022

The calendar turns September taunts last days of summer first chills of autumn kodachrome leaves orange and yellow crisp and fallen under feet to...
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Great start; it's a well

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

Great start; it's a well structured and believable story, sad and realistic. Now I want to read the next chapter and see how they manage to keep the secret, and make ends meet.

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 1

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What an imagination you have

Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022

What an imagination you have Di-hard; this reads like Alice in wonderland. Strange goings on for Mary, Wong and a Quartermaster. I loved the surreal quality of the world you've created; it's like a Picasso in words.

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Posted in part 15

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A dark and shivering poem; I

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...

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Posted in All Hallows Eve

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A spectral and morose walk

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.

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Posted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve

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Chilling and so well

Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022

Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.

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Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)

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Interesting snapshots into a

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

Interesting snapshots into a life. smiley

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Posted in Here

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Great story telling and your

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)

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Could a lawyer have helped

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there;  I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.

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Beautiful words to bring to

Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022

Beautiful words to bring to mind a perfect moon lit night.smiley

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Posted in the magical music of moonlight

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Darkness vs. the light; the

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)

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