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Could a lawyer have helped
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there; I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.
Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...
Ah, the boy is a wizard in a family of wizards...this story is taking shape nicely; I see I have one more to go and then will have to wait on the conclusion...
Father Time, abstract and watching ....great writing. This story is just getting better and better and I can not wait to read it through; which I'm going to do right now!
I found this gem today and loved it. Your vision of these sentinels of nature is so well defined. I read Jenny's comments and agree with her; I too hope the wooded area you visit can beprotected and saved.
Interesting concept but I think the dogs and cats would have much to say on this request. For Cats will never bow to such a ridiculous notion and Dogs would never deign to be anything but dogs. That they get along together in your household...
The ritual, the outpouring of feelings, the ending of a long reign. It was amazing to watch the massive crowds that gathered. The Queen was an ever present steady hand and I admired her ability to carry on with demands and traditions. I cannot...
Could a lawyer have helped
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there; I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.
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Beautiful words to bring to
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
Beautiful words to bring to mind a perfect moon lit night.
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Darkness vs. the light; the
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...
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Ah, the boy is a waizard in a
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Ah, the boy is a wizard in a family of wizards...this story is taking shape nicely; I see I have one more to go and then will have to wait on the conclusion...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Four of Six)
Father Time, abstract and
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Father Time, abstract and watching ....great writing. This story is just getting better and better and I can not wait to read it through; which I'm going to do right now!
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Three of Six)
I found this gem today and
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
I found this gem today and loved it. Your vision of these sentinels of nature is so well defined. I read Jenny's comments and agree with her; I too hope the wooded area you visit can beprotected and saved.
Your poem is lovely and well...
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Interesting concept but I
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
Interesting concept but I think the dogs and cats would have much to say on this request. For Cats will never bow to such a ridiculous notion and Dogs would never deign to be anything but dogs. That they get along together in your household...
Read full commentPosted in What Would Happen If I treated My Cats Like Dogs & My Dogs Like Cats?
What a lovely poem about the
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
What a lovely poem about the changing season Jenny and congratulations on a well deserved POD.
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The ritual, the outpouring of
Posted on Mon, 19 Sep 2022
The ritual, the outpouring of feelings, the ending of a long reign. It was amazing to watch the massive crowds that gathered. The Queen was an ever present steady hand and I admired her ability to carry on with demands and traditions. I cannot...
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A flying carpet, how
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
A flying carpet, how magnificent! It is a an exhilarating bit of magic you've written here and I am along for the ride.
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