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Willow's Tail" 29 (gather the suspects)
The festival’s closing ritual had begun, the reception hall was lit with twinkling fairy lights and a banner strung across its impressive façade...
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"Willow's Tail" 28
“Hello Martha.” Dillon’s smile widened as he approached her and Martha’s heart slammed in her chest. He was their nemesis? “I can’t believe it’s you...
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"Willow's Tail" 27
Perfidia walked quickly towards the pet contest’s building, she didn’t want to miss seeing Willow take the trophy but it had taken her longer than...
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"Magic in a Bottle (or the tales of Andelu) " 1
Long Island Sound -The End of the Island (Summer 1960) Chrissy, the oldest, was the first to see the old bottle bobbing in the waves. Janey, the...
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Shared Existence
The rustling of tree branches and trilling of bird songs are the catalyst for meditation. The reverence of nature cocoons me and I am aware of the...
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Chilling and so well
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Interesting snapshots into a
Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022
Interesting snapshots into a life.
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Great story telling and your
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
Could a lawyer have helped
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there; I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.
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Beautiful words to bring to
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
Beautiful words to bring to mind a perfect moon lit night.
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Darkness vs. the light; the
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)
Ah, the boy is a waizard in a
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Ah, the boy is a wizard in a family of wizards...this story is taking shape nicely; I see I have one more to go and then will have to wait on the conclusion...
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Father Time, abstract and
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Father Time, abstract and watching ....great writing. This story is just getting better and better and I can not wait to read it through; which I'm going to do right now!
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I found this gem today and
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
I found this gem today and loved it. Your vision of these sentinels of nature is so well defined. I read Jenny's comments and agree with her; I too hope the wooded area you visit can beprotected and saved.
Your poem is lovely and well...
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Interesting concept but I
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
Interesting concept but I think the dogs and cats would have much to say on this request. For Cats will never bow to such a ridiculous notion and Dogs would never deign to be anything but dogs. That they get along together in your household...
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