Part one was written last Halloween, and its taken me a year to get back to it and post part 2. I've added a link to part 1 here, and hope to post the final 2 parts before, or on, Halloween. https://www.abctales.com/story/penny4athought/spirt-sleepy-hollow-all-ha...
Perfect, poetic descriptions
Posted on Sat, 27 Jan 2024
Perfect, poetic descriptions to go along with those beautiful photos; the squelchy mud sounds familiar to me; mostly after a day of rain when my garden becomes nothing but squelchy.
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Thank you Di_Hard your
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Thank you Di_Hard your comment has made me smile, brightly. When my sons were little, I did read tales of magic and fiction and made up some tales too; I think they enjoyed those stories but I know I enjoyed those times with them.Your kind...
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The obligatory smokescreen
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
The obligatory smokescreen eradicated by the un-choreographed moment- I loved this peek behind the curtain of families; the pretense and hidden truths when it comes to pomp and circumstance and feelings. The smile at a family gathering can be...
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Powerful poetry, weaving
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Powerful poetry, weaving shadows, not quite sure what makes this bird so mysterious. I don't think I've ever seen a magpie, had to google it and found a video about magpie's befriending a lady who now cares for them. The birds were very...
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Squeezing onion-juice; not
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Squeezing onion-juice; not heard it put that way before. Your poem is charged with turbulent energy and I loved it.
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Yes, those vivid dreams that
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Yes, those vivid dreams that impart some knowledge, a beautiful line for a poem or song, or a peek into the universe's secrets but it drifts away out of your grasp as you wake up, leaving you struggling to remember what it was--I think most can...
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The healing spirit of animals
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
The healing spirit of animals on humans is well told in this sad tale of loss. Is there is a recognition of need from cat to human, or dog to human, or horse to human, or any animal that sees that broken piece within us? I think animals are far...
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I agree with all of the above
Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024
I agree with all of the above comments; this was a hoot to read. You create hysterical characters and make me laugh at their absurdity.
I logged onto my virtual therapist who helps me to process the stress of being such a...
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I enjoyed this poem with it’s
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
I enjoyed this poem with it’s revelry on New Year. A NEW YEAR, and I hope it is a ‘New Year’, not a recycled, down trodden, smack some lipstick on it old year...I connected with your poem’s optimism as I believe in the goodness within us...
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The melodic verses are
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...
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