Martha was on her way to the kitchen with the two cups of tea to try to talk sense to Miriam but she stopped before she reached that room, feeling a...
Where the restless mind wanders are untried adventures fantasy and mystery in uncharted landscapes Illuminated by sparks of intrigue just beyond the...
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This 2nd chapter enforces the
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
This 2nd chapter enforces the paranormal. I'm still guessing at what is behind Billy's specialness and looking forward to reading the next install to see where you are leading us, your unsuspecting readers....and the crows on the boy's arms lends...
Thank you Insert-. I have left this tale for awhile and coming back to it, I had hoped to do the characters justice. Your encouraging comment has made me hopeful I have.
Loved how it moved in seasons, words creating images of heat and frost and defined the shortness of life. The final line about flowers as life's consort, for me, brought the thought of flowers on a grave, Beautifully written Marandina,.
I agree with Jupitermoon, your poem is powerful and heartfelt. The vivid word play, the mercurial pace of each line drives the message, and the message is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Loved the quick tempo, much like the frantic pull to scroll,and the ending’s warning of consequence - brilliantly stated. Our brains are shrinking by the unnatural light of our mobiles as are our lives. We are losing the need for tangible...
Great beginning...just the right amount of spooky intrigue and I love the title. Your depth of surroundings draws the reader in, it dimensional and your characters fill the space creating the reality of the tale. I'm not sure I like the idea of...
Where do I begin -- so much here to unpack and soooo much fun - to poke at the state of our union here....or lack of it -- having J.C. being interrogated - I laughed and it was sheer joy - I'm so glad you are continuing this..... it is making me...
This 2nd chapter enforces the
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
This 2nd chapter enforces the paranormal. I'm still guessing at what is behind Billy's specialness and looking forward to reading the next install to see where you are leading us, your unsuspecting readers....and the crows on the boy's arms lends...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)
Thank you Insert-. I have
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
Thank you Insert-. I have left this tale for awhile and coming back to it, I had hoped to do the characters justice. Your encouraging comment has made me hopeful I have.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 31
A perfect description of what
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
A perfect description of what a Friend should be in this Acrostic poem.
Read full commentPosted in F R I E N D
Swimmming through the sky-
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
Swimmming through the sky- now that would be lovely. Your imagery is dreamy and soothing in this poem Jenny. Enjoyed it very much.
Read full commentPosted in Fragments Of Life
Loved how it moved in seasons
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
Loved how it moved in seasons, words creating images of heat and frost and defined the shortness of life. The final line about flowers as life's consort, for me, brought the thought of flowers on a grave, Beautifully written Marandina,.
Read full commentPosted in After the Geese
I agree with Jupitermoon,
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
I agree with Jupitermoon, your poem is powerful and heartfelt. The vivid word play, the mercurial pace of each line drives the message, and the message is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Read full commentPosted in Wired Differently
Loved the quick tempo, much
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Loved the quick tempo, much like the frantic pull to scroll,and the ending’s warning of consequence - brilliantly stated. Our brains are shrinking by the unnatural light of our mobiles as are our lives. We are losing the need for tangible...
Read full commentPosted in 3 oz of Insanity
Great beginning...just the
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Great beginning...just the right amount of spooky intrigue and I love the title. Your depth of surroundings draws the reader in, it dimensional and your characters fill the space creating the reality of the tale. I'm not sure I like the idea of...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)
What an honor your comment
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
What an honor your comment was to read. Thank you Di-hard for letting me know how much you enjoyed this poem. It made my day.
Read full commentPosted in Float Downstream.....
Where do I begin -- so much
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
Where do I begin -- so much here to unpack and soooo much fun - to poke at the state of our union here....or lack of it -- having J.C. being interrogated - I laughed and it was sheer joy - I'm so glad you are continuing this..... it is making me...
Read full commentPosted in J. C. Jones V - Let us Eat
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