Martha ran ahead of Perfidia and Dillon into the garden calling Willow’s name. She was desperate to find her and her heart was beating in triple time...
Thomas was glad his friend Eugene was a night owl because it took only five minutes of sitting on his doorbell to break into his focused, online game...
The banquet table in Perfidia’s massive, living room was laden with an array of tantalizing comfort foods. The mingling aromas drew the men from the...
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The movement in this finale
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
The movement in this finale was much like a dance and to have the Sheriff we all presumed was dead come back to life, was very Hitchcock. I loved how you ended it, it was a thrilling read. Thank you for participating in the challenge and adding...
I tried to follow the other chapters, find a connecting suspect but I hope you'll write your final chapter Celticman - switch it up - or shoot somebody- because whichever way you conclude it, I know I will enjoy reading it.
I'm not a fan of Springsteen either, never found much to applaude in his music, but your rendition, and new verses, on the Mamas and the Papas 'California Dreamin' was chilling, and not without truth. I think Dr. Suess's Butter Battle Book might...
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
You've stirred the suspect pot nicely w.w.j.abercrombie and moved the story closer to its finale. Well done, and thank you for taking part in the 'pass the story' challenge.
Agree with you Terrence. We all have a personal set of abilities, strengths and weaknesses, and finding how to work within them will be different for each of us. We are unique, we are stardust like snowflakes - no two alike but each one beautiful...
Thank you for this great addition to the 'pass the story' challenge Marandina. Your detailed police station and undertones of animosity between the staff painted a convincing picture. I'm so glad every author is putting their personal spin on...
The movement in this finale
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
The movement in this finale was much like a dance and to have the Sheriff we all presumed was dead come back to life, was very Hitchcock. I loved how you ended it, it was a thrilling read. Thank you for participating in the challenge and adding...
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.
And justice is served. Nicely
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026
And justice was served. Nicely done Marandina, I imagined this unfolding like a scene in a movie - and it was a thrilling ending....
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10
I tried to follow the other
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026
I tried to follow the other chapters, find a connecting suspect but I hope you'll write your final chapter Celticman - switch it up - or shoot somebody- because whichever way you conclude it, I know I will enjoy reading it.
Read full commentPosted in "Pass the Story" Chapter 9
I'm not a fan of Springsteen
Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2026
I'm not a fan of Springsteen either, never found much to applaude in his music, but your rendition, and new verses, on the Mamas and the Papas 'California Dreamin' was chilling, and not without truth. I think Dr. Suess's Butter Battle Book might...
Read full commentPosted in Is Kerry Katona a Cat Owner?
Feels like there might be a
Posted on Sun, 05 Apr 2026
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
Read full commentPosted in I. Deep Storage - Part One
A humorous way to end it
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
You've stirred the suspect
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
You've stirred the suspect pot nicely w.w.j.abercrombie and moved the story closer to its finale. Well done, and thank you for taking part in the 'pass the story' challenge.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Agree with you Terrence. We
Posted on Sun, 29 Mar 2026
Agree with you Terrence. We all have a personal set of abilities, strengths and weaknesses, and finding how to work within them will be different for each of us. We are unique, we are stardust like snowflakes - no two alike but each one beautiful...
Read full commentPosted in A hundred moments in autism - playing darts
Thank you for this great
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026
Thank you for this great addition to the 'pass the story' challenge Marandina. Your detailed police station and undertones of animosity between the staff painted a convincing picture. I'm so glad every author is putting their personal spin on...
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6
I've jumped in here and now
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2026
I've jumped in here and now have to go to Part 1 and catch up. It has captured my imagination.
Read full commentPosted in Purple Mountain - Part 5
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