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"Art of Trouble" 4

By Penny4athought on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

Jade finished her coffee and croissant sandwich of ham and cheese as she scrolled through information on her phone regarding the artist, Casper...

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"Art of Trouble" 3

By Penny4athought on Tue, 29 Jul 2025

After the train rolled to a stop at the Croton-Harmon station the conductor opened the doors of the train cars to allow exiting passengers off and...

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"Art of Trouble" 2

By Penny4athought on Tue, 22 Jul 2025

24 hours earlier Jade was critiquing her outfit choice in her mirror, not sure if it did anything for her, and was about to change when her cell...

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 30

By Penny4athought on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Martha was on her way to the kitchen with the two cups of tea to try to talk sense to Miriam but she stopped before she reached that room, feeling a...

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A beautiful homage to the

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

A beautiful homage to the rain cycle necessary for life on this planet.

Posted in That all-important molecule!

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The bravado of youth masked

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

The bravado of youth masked the vulnerable fear Danielle had felt with the younger boys. They were obviously itching for trouble and the worrying aspect of bringing a knife to the seashore shadowed the moment with a hint of horror but Billy saved...

Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

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There is a winding script

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025

There is a winding script here that feels like a circular stairway up to a forbidden tower and the fear of what happens next is building. Will Danielle and Billy's paths cross? Is Danielle's nigtmare a prophesy? Is Billy a bird whisperer? Is the...

Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)

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This 2nd chapter enforces the

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

This 2nd chapter enforces the paranormal. I'm still guessing at what is behind Billy's specialness and looking forward to reading the next install to see where you are leading us, your unsuspecting readers....and the crows on the boy's arms lends...

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Thank you Insert-. I have

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Thank you Insert-. I have left this tale for awhile and coming back to it, I had hoped to do the characters justice. Your encouraging comment has made me hopeful I have.

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A perfect description of what

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

A perfect description of what a Friend should be in this Acrostic poem.

Posted in F R I E N D

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Swimmming through the sky-

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

Swimmming through the sky- now that would be lovely. Your imagery is dreamy and soothing in this poem Jenny. Enjoyed it very much.

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Loved how it moved in seasons

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025

Loved how it moved in seasons, words creating images of heat and frost and defined the shortness of life. The final line about flowers as life's consort, for me, brought the thought of flowers on a grave, Beautifully written Marandina,.

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I agree with Jupitermoon,

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

I agree with Jupitermoon, your poem is powerful and heartfelt. The vivid word play, the mercurial pace of each line drives the message, and the message is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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Loved the quick tempo, much

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Loved the quick tempo, much like the frantic pull to scroll,and the ending’s warning of consequence - brilliantly stated. Our brains are shrinking by the unnatural light of our mobiles as are our lives. We are losing the need for tangible...