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The dad stared at the big dog and shook his head with confusion and concern. “I thought I heard that dog speak,” the dad, Jack, whispered to his wife...
A blue ribbon of light flew over mountains and grasslands, raced through a forest of trees glistening with morning dew and slipped into the window of...
Turn down the noise Power off the blue light Disconnect the media Ignore the frenzy Step into the forest Contemplate the lake View art in the clouds...
Emily shivered with renewed fear once Brent left the kitchen with that professionally held gun in his hand to answer the door, or attack the visitor...
371 of my comments have received 391 Great Feedback votes
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The obligatory smokescreen
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
The obligatory smokescreen eradicated by the un-choreographed moment- I loved this peek behind the curtain of families; the pretense and hidden truths when it comes to pomp and circumstance and feelings. The smile at a family gathering can be...
Powerful poetry, weaving shadows, not quite sure what makes this bird so mysterious. I don't think I've ever seen a magpie, had to google it and found a video about magpie's befriending a lady who now cares for them. The birds were very...
Yes, those vivid dreams that impart some knowledge, a beautiful line for a poem or song, or a peek into the universe's secrets but it drifts away out of your grasp as you wake up, leaving you struggling to remember what it was--I think most can...
The healing spirit of animals on humans is well told in this sad tale of loss. Is there is a recognition of need from cat to human, or dog to human, or horse to human, or any animal that sees that broken piece within us? I think animals are far...
I enjoyed this poem with it’s revelry on New Year. A NEW YEAR, and I hope it is a ‘New Year’, not a recycled, down trodden, smack some lipstick on it old year...I connected with your poem’s optimism as I believe in the goodness within us...
The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...
Autobiography of a water droplet, a brilliant take on the water cycle and a well written poem. I enjoyed the journey and philosophical thoughts from the droplet.
Will that be my end?
Well, if that plant’s eaten
I may be...
The obligatory smokescreen
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
The obligatory smokescreen eradicated by the un-choreographed moment- I loved this peek behind the curtain of families; the pretense and hidden truths when it comes to pomp and circumstance and feelings. The smile at a family gathering can be...
Read full commentPosted in Wasn't that a party
Powerful poetry, weaving
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Powerful poetry, weaving shadows, not quite sure what makes this bird so mysterious. I don't think I've ever seen a magpie, had to google it and found a video about magpie's befriending a lady who now cares for them. The birds were very...
Read full commentPosted in Pie
Squeezing onion-juice; not
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Squeezing onion-juice; not heard it put that way before. Your poem is charged with turbulent energy and I loved it.
Read full commentPosted in Scary is the Sky
Yes, those vivid dreams that
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Yes, those vivid dreams that impart some knowledge, a beautiful line for a poem or song, or a peek into the universe's secrets but it drifts away out of your grasp as you wake up, leaving you struggling to remember what it was--I think most can...
Read full commentPosted in The Muse
The healing spirit of animals
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
The healing spirit of animals on humans is well told in this sad tale of loss. Is there is a recognition of need from cat to human, or dog to human, or horse to human, or any animal that sees that broken piece within us? I think animals are far...
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)
I agree with all of the above
Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024
I agree with all of the above comments; this was a hoot to read. You create hysterical characters and make me laugh at their absurdity.
I logged onto my virtual therapist who helps me to process the stress of being such a...
Read full commentPosted in Make Millions in Two Minutes...
I enjoyed this poem with it’s
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
I enjoyed this poem with it’s revelry on New Year. A NEW YEAR, and I hope it is a ‘New Year’, not a recycled, down trodden, smack some lipstick on it old year...I connected with your poem’s optimism as I believe in the goodness within us...
Read full commentPosted in January Panorama
The melodic verses are
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...
Read full commentPosted in Sic Transit Gloria
A voice of a molecule,
Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024
A voice of a molecule, fascinating poem Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in Autobiography (but not mine!)
Autobiography of a water
Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024
Autobiography of a water droplet, a brilliant take on the water cycle and a well written poem. I enjoyed the journey and philosophical thoughts from the droplet.
Will that be my end?
Read full commentWell, if that plant’s eaten
I may be...
Posted in Autobiography (but not mine!)
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