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I have 245 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 471421 times and 218 of my stories have been cherry picked.
362 of my 1,545 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 381 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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Cherry

"Willow's Missing Tail" 9

(Events from earlier that evening) “Sahara, get in here right now!” Daphne yelled in a tone that demanded immediate action and her voice reverberated...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 9

Brent had to shuffle his feet as fast as his character depiction would faithfully allow. He couldn’t break into a full run and stay undercover; it...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 8

Thies was about to reveal the location of Russ’s apartment contents when the sound of a knock filtered through the room but it hadn’t come from the...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 8

“It is a new twist knowing Daphne isn’t who I’d thought she was and is in fact, Perfidia’s cousin,” Avery recounted sourly as he sat down with a...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 7

Emily had fed Sir Harry his breakfast when they returned from their walk in the park and brewed a fresh pot of coffee. She’d just placed her filled...

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362 of my comments have received 381 Great Feedback votes

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Cannot imagine living through

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

Cannot imagine living through those feelings but so glad you came out the other side of that, but sorry you had to go through it at all.

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Posted in Nothing Concrete

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 This was beautifully read on

Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2023

 This was beautifully read on Saturday Paul and it is a beautiful read; I'm so glad you've posted it again here. It is well deserving of those golden cherries!

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Posted in A Requiem for One Man’s Life (Edited and Updated 2023)

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The concrete jungle and the

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

The concrete jungle and the open green pastures; nice depictions of the issues in both dwellings as the city does need more green space and the countryside could use more amenities; although, “their surroundings are real cool" -   Enjoyed this...

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Posted in "15 minute walk to nature for all" aim

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A nightmare; that's what this

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

A nightmare; that's what this felt like; a never ending dream of horror. Tragic, that she almost tasted freedom but failed in her attempt to flee.The ending is powerful in its looping her back to captivity.

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Posted in Nothing Concrete

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The beauty of nature will

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

The beauty of nature will awaken tired spirits. I loved this poem Jenny; it is so sweet and relaxing a read; perfect for a spring day!

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Posted in Relaxed Day In Summer

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Agree with Marandina; those

Posted on Wed, 29 Mar 2023

Agree with Marandina; those Victorian dolls gave me a Haunted Mansion vibe, but the dream sequence that moved your sleeping spirit along was woven well throught out your poem. Dreams are like that, mercurial, starting in one place and swiftly...

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Posted in Dreaming

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I've become a reader of

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

I've become a reader of ingredients on the food products too and it can be confusing; first off so many ingredients don’t even sound like food and cannot be all that good. I try too to eat healthy but it’s a challenge finding fair, priced healthy...

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Posted in It Is Good That I Am OK With It.

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A beautiful snapshot in time;

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

A beautiful snapshot in time; your outfit is pure sixties, and your reminiscence is just so much fun to read. The tween year, the first year of being a teen, it is that magical age, 13. Everything is sharp, crystallized and vivid; every morning...

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Posted in Part Of Something Special

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You capture in descriptive

Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023

You capture in descriptive verse, the free spirit of this god of wine and ecstasy. I enjoyed the fluid passages and poetic rhythm, like in this verse:

awakening ardent rapturous surrender; sustaining insatiable intoxication – harvesting...

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Posted in Charms Of Dionysus

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Movement, so beautifully done

Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023

Movement, so beautifully done in your words, taking us from the depth, the soil, the darkness to light, from the seed to the bloom; the emergence of spring. A lovely poem and one I will enjoy reading again.

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Posted in Persephone's first day

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