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"Willow's Missing Tail" 1

By Penny4athought on Mon, 01 Aug 2022

Perfidia stepped out of the Heaven’s Brew café carrying her favorite cup of tea and humming along to the love song playing through her ear buds. Her...

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"The Coffee House Spy" 3

By Penny4athought on Mon, 01 Aug 2022

Emily locked her bedroom door, threw off her stained clothes and grabbed a pair of jeans and a yellow cotton top from her closet as she questioned...

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"The Coffee House Spy" 2

By Penny4athought on Sun, 24 Jul 2022

Emily walked Sir Harry up the five flights of stairs to her tiny one bedroom apartment while thinking unkind thoughts about the dog’s inconsiderate...

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"The Coffee House Spy"

By Penny4athought on Sat, 23 Jul 2022

Her favorite coffee shop was crowded with the morning rush of fellow caffeine addicts and Emily wasn’t in the mood to wait in the twenty person deep...

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So now we have the

Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022

So now we have the perspective from the older brother, adding layers to your story. I am curious to know where the mother has gone to and why she left her children to fend for them self. And how could she leave a four year old? That begs so many...

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 2

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Great start; it's a well

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

Great start; it's a well structured and believable story, sad and realistic. Now I want to read the next chapter and see how they manage to keep the secret, and make ends meet.

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 1

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What an imagination you have

Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022

What an imagination you have Di-hard; this reads like Alice in wonderland. Strange goings on for Mary, Wong and a Quartermaster. I loved the surreal quality of the world you've created; it's like a Picasso in words.

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A dark and shivering poem; I

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...

Posted in All Hallows Eve

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A spectral and morose walk

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.

Posted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve

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Chilling and so well

Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022

Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.

Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)

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Interesting snapshots into a

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

Interesting snapshots into a life.

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Great story telling and your

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...