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I have 252 stories published in 15 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 566121 times and 229 of my stories have been cherry picked.
390 of my 1,585 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 415 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"The Coffee House Spy" 6

The sun was just climbing in the sky as Brent brewed a strong pot of coffee. He poured the dark brew into two hefty mugs and had just replaced the...
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"Halloween or Samhain"

Candles burning Dripping wax Jack-o'-lanterns Filled with snacks Darkened pathways Ghostly moon Trick-or-Treaters Coming soon Witches cackle Owls...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 5

Stacy turned from the window and holstered her gun as Brent walked back into the apartment. “Did you get the license plate?” she asked. “I framed a...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 5

Perfidia pulled into the parking area of the Arcane Gardens and Pet Rescue and stared at the nondescript building ahead with a skeptical eye. “It...
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"Anemoi" (wind gods- mythology)

Eurus owns the Eastern winds And all the autumn colors The Blazing trees Gold and red September’s Artful nature October nights Shortened days Through...
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390 of my comments have received 415 Great Feedback votes

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I've become a reader of

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

I've become a reader of ingredients on the food products too and it can be confusing; first off so many ingredients don’t even sound like food and cannot be all that good. I try too to eat healthy but it’s a challenge finding fair, priced healthy...

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Posted in It Is Good That I Am OK With It.

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A beautiful snapshot in time;

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

A beautiful snapshot in time; your outfit is pure sixties, and your reminiscence is just so much fun to read. The tween year, the first year of being a teen, it is that magical age, 13. Everything is sharp, crystallized and vivid; every morning...

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Posted in Part Of Something Special

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You capture in descriptive

Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023

You capture in descriptive verse, the free spirit of this god of wine and ecstasy. I enjoyed the fluid passages and poetic rhythm, like in this verse:

awakening ardent rapturous surrender; sustaining insatiable intoxication – harvesting...

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Posted in Charms Of Dionysus

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Movement, so beautifully done

Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023

Movement, so beautifully done in your words, taking us from the depth, the soil, the darkness to light, from the seed to the bloom; the emergence of spring. A lovely poem and one I will enjoy reading again.

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Posted in Persephone's first day

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The journey through grief is

Posted on Sat, 25 Feb 2023

The journey through grief is a personal one and you move through all the phases of loss in your autobiography. It is a story we all share at one time or another; the loss of someone precious in our life and how we learn to survive without them,...

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Posted in Beginning. By MarciaMarcia

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I like the determination to

Posted on Sat, 28 Jan 2023

I like the determination to keep an optimistic outlook in your poem and it's true; it is a choice we make to find the bright spot in our days, but it can be difficult to sustain when times are hard and the belief in a better day is hard to see. ...

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Posted in The Goodness In Us Makes Life Worth Living

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Unusual encounter indeed

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

Unusual encounter indeed Jenny. It is amazing that a swan would want to enter a confined space or a strange object, like a bus unless they’ve evolved and now understand it is a way to get around without flapping wings. Maybe the swans in that...

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Posted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus

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Yes that phrase, "Two

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023

Yes that phrase, "Two midnights in a jar," will never leave my mind and will forever be the perfect definition of darkness. Brilliant! Your poem flows effortlessly and packs a punch at the end. I loved it.

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Posted in You Know Who You Are But You Don't

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I had once been in that

Posted on Fri, 06 Jan 2023

I had once been in that position with my elderly dad, it is not easy for them to be away from family and all that is familiar to them; they will deteriorate quickly in a strange environment, like a hospital, or even a rehab. So I was happy to...

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Posted in Make A Wish.

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Moving story, showing the

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

Moving story, showing the plight of the children in an unstable marriage; you've highlighted it. How the oldest child had to become the parent and sort out the troubled marriage by forcing her father to admit his choice; very sad and all too true...

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Posted in Time solves everything

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