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14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 480986 times
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362 of my 1,546 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 381 votes
JoAnne Stefanizzi
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"Halloween or Samhain"
Candles burning Dripping wax Jack-o'-lanterns Filled with snacks Darkened pathways Ghostly moon Trick-or-Treaters Coming soon Witches cackle Owls...
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"The Coffee House Spy" 5
Stacy turned from the window and holstered her gun as Brent walked back into the apartment. “Did you get the license plate?” she asked. “I framed a...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 5
Perfidia pulled into the parking area of the Arcane Gardens and Pet Rescue and stared at the nondescript building ahead with a skeptical eye. “It...
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"Anemoi" (wind gods- mythology)
Eurus owns the Eastern winds And all the autumn colors The Blazing trees Gold and red September’s Artful nature October nights Shortened days Through...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 4
Martha brought a plate of fresh baked brownies to the table and Perfidia breathed in the chocolate laced aroma. “I love brownies; and these are...
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Great start; it's a well
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022
Great start; it's a well structured and believable story, sad and realistic. Now I want to read the next chapter and see how they manage to keep the secret, and make ends meet.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 1
What an imagination you have
Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022
What an imagination you have Di-hard; this reads like Alice in wonderland. Strange goings on for Mary, Wong and a Quartermaster. I loved the surreal quality of the world you've created; it's like a Picasso in words.
Read full commentPosted in part 15
A dark and shivering poem; I
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022
A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...
Read full commentPosted in All Hallows Eve
A spectral and morose walk
Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022
A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.
Read full commentPosted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve
Chilling and so well
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Interesting snapshots into a
Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022
Interesting snapshots into a life.
Read full commentPosted in Here
Great story telling and your
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
Could a lawyer have helped
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there; I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.
Read full commentPosted in JEZ.
Beautiful words to bring to
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
Beautiful words to bring to mind a perfect moon lit night.
Read full commentPosted in the magical music of moonlight
Darkness vs. the light; the
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)
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