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I have 240 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 423389 times and 211 of my stories have been cherry picked.
355 of my 1,507 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 374 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 23

Perfidia walked down the stairs but stopped when she saw Jon; had he waited for her? “I told you I wouldn’t be long;” she shrugged, continuing down...
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"Silence"

War inside my head explodes with feelings of disbelief and despair, paralyzing me with debilitating sorrow a sorrow painted by my anger at the...
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Endings

In the days that follow, we will fall into a depression and battle stomach wrenching pain at the incomprehensible diagnosis and seeing the ravages of...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 22

There was just over an hour and a half left before sunset when the doorbell played Beethoven’s Für Elise. Perfidia’s eyes widened and she looked at...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 21

“Perfidia,” Martha said with an apologetic look as she entered the kitchen from the backdoor, “I’m sorry we couldn’t wait for you.” “I understand. It...
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355 of my comments have received 374 Great Feedback votes

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Unfortunately, the fight for

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

Unfortunately, the fight for freedom and our individual rights will never be completely over; it is eternal. We must forever make our voices heard, especially over the din of lies and the wiles of misdirecting foes.

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Posted in Phoenix 2030 (a dream)

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Thank you Di-Hard- I am

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Thank you Di-Hard- I am struggling to understand the why and feeling the guilt we'd missed something sooner, some sign that could have changed this outlook. It's a battle I am desprate for him to win and I'm hoping for a miracle.

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Posted in Endings

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he sounds like a

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

he sounds like a contradictory character- I enjoyed the flow of your definitions and how the final line defined them, 

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Posted in He Was

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I had a feeling the narrator

Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024

I had a feeling the narrator was ethereal but then you added human concerns and I wasn’t so sure. This well plotted tale led the reader deeper and deeper into the morbid awareness of the situation and seeing the events from the vantage point of...

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Posted in Ghost Story

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I was worried when that robot

Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024

I was worried when that robot, repair tech thought Vanessa might be abusing Spencer but then he did fix him, only he sent Vanessa from the room while he did it and he added some, unasked for, upgardes. It does make you wonder what those upgrades...

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Posted in Parcel for You..Part 39

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You are on to something here

Posted on Thu, 10 Oct 2024

You are on to something here Turlough and I agree; Legos are the best toy for the creative mind of a child. I have boxes and boxes of the magnificent colorful, little, building blocks. The first set we bought for my older son was when he was four...

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Posted in Wee Plastic Hats Off to Ole Kirk Christiansen!

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Hi Jenny; you’ve captured the

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024

Hi Jenny; you’ve captured the vitality of youthful days and the longing to relive it in your talented, poetic style. You bring the reader to a place of happy memories and youthful exuberance. The desire for a backward glance at those captured...

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Posted in Magic Of Youth

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Your house sounds adorable,

Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2024

Your house sounds adorable, and the perfect setting for a fairytale, wind and spiders included. Enjoyed reading this very much and do hope you write that wee journal and post it here soon. 

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Posted in Mind the Gap

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Extreme weather can provide

Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2024

Extreme weather can provide us with scary moments like the ones you had - I'm glad you survived them all and I agree, sunglasses in the glove box would be a good thing to have.

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Posted in "Brighter Than The Noon Day Sun."

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I love seeing fireflies and

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

I love seeing fireflies and enjoyed your poem about the magic they make us feel, just by turning on their light.

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Posted in Enchanted insects

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