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"Where to Diner"

By Penny4athought on Mon, 14 Apr 2025

“Can I get a refill?” Marvin held up his coffee cup for the waitress,” I have to admit it’s the best I’ve ever tasted.” “It’s percolated” the...

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 29

By Penny4athought on Fri, 11 Apr 2025

Martha stood by the tray of tea and scones shocked by what had just transpired. “Are you okay?” Dillon touched her arm and she turned to him with a...

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 28

By Penny4athought on Sun, 06 Apr 2025

Dillon stood in the kitchen doorway watching Martha blend tea with efficient movements. When she looked up he pushed away from the doorjamb and...

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 27

By Penny4athought on Mon, 24 Mar 2025

Jon entered the study and all eyes swung to him, all except Perfidia’s. She was standing across the room and pretending he wasnt there. Her recent...

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There is a winding script

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025

There is a winding script here that feels like a circular stairway up to a forbidden tower and the fear of what happens next is building. Will Danielle and Billy's paths cross? Is Danielle's nigtmare a prophesy? Is Billy a bird whisperer? Is the...

Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)

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This 2nd chapter enforces the

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

This 2nd chapter enforces the paranormal. I'm still guessing at what is behind Billy's specialness and looking forward to reading the next install to see where you are leading us, your unsuspecting readers....and the crows on the boy's arms lends...

Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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Thank you Insert-. I have

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Thank you Insert-. I have left this tale for awhile and coming back to it, I had hoped to do the characters justice. Your encouraging comment has made me hopeful I have.

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A perfect description of what

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

A perfect description of what a Friend should be in this Acrostic poem.

Posted in F R I E N D

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Swimmming through the sky-

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

Swimmming through the sky- now that would be lovely. Your imagery is dreamy and soothing in this poem Jenny. Enjoyed it very much.

Posted in Fragments Of Life

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Loved how it moved in seasons

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025

Loved how it moved in seasons, words creating images of heat and frost and defined the shortness of life. The final line about flowers as life's consort, for me, brought the thought of flowers on a grave, Beautifully written Marandina,.

Posted in After the Geese

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I agree with Jupitermoon,

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

I agree with Jupitermoon, your poem is powerful and heartfelt. The vivid word play, the mercurial pace of each line drives the message, and the message is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted in Wired Differently

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Loved the quick tempo, much

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Loved the quick tempo, much like the frantic pull to scroll,and the ending’s warning of consequence - brilliantly stated. Our brains are shrinking by the unnatural light of our mobiles as are our lives. We are losing the need for tangible...

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Great beginning...just the

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Great beginning...just the right amount of spooky intrigue and I love the title. Your depth of surroundings draws the reader in, it dimensional and your characters fill the space creating the reality of the tale. I'm not sure I like the idea of...

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What an honor your comment

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025

What an honor your comment was to read. Thank you Di-hard for letting me know how much you enjoyed this poem. It made my day.