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I have 70 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 20627 times and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked.
28 of my 241 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 31 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

My stories

Cherry

Winter's Tale

In the dead of winter The winds do chill For this winter’s tale Of love and will... Fie on this day So bleak and cold I fear the battle Takes his...

The Volcanic Soul

The road is deeply rutted Where ancient footsteps fell The air above electrified With stories no voice will tell It’s been a long time coming The...

Sprinkles of Stardust

A child's wish Sparkles On firefly wings Moving on Moonbeams To places Unseen Where Twinkles of magic And Sprinkles of stardust In colorful hues Make...
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Step Confidently

The brambles should have deterred me But the sunshine weaving through beckoned me on What lie beyond? I couldn’t know But forward was the only option...
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Cherry

1944 (12miles south of Spa Belgium)

1944 The snow was thick but not as thick as what was piled in his boots. Foster broke from file and stepped against the slim trunk of a winter barren...

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28 of my comments have received 31 Great Feedback votes

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I liked the structure, the

Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019

I liked the structure, the way the words flowed to take you through the moment when everything changed form lovely to painful, like anytime in life when we are hit with something fearful we pray. In this poem, your prayer was answered.

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Posted in There's Something

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I found so many ways to

Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019

I found so many ways to interpret this, one, it sounds like a marvelous garden planted and protected, but two, I feel it is a soul that is planted and defended in that garden and will not venture beyond the wall to where it is not protected. I...

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Posted in I won't leave my Walled Garden

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I love that you respect all

Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019

I love that you respect all these animals as do I, and I know my dog is smarter than me because he tells me exactly what he wants( food, water, walk) and I listen every time.

Great rhyme and flow of this poem, I loved it and the cherries...

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Posted in I Talk To the Animals

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019

Hi Jenny,

Yes, I know we both wish they had written down those well loved recipes. I have ingredients but nothing of the measurements so her special touch, her loving touch, to all she did is lost to me.

Just as you'd said, the...

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Posted in Toss in a pinch of love

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I often wonder about the

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

I often wonder about the house I grew up in, now someone else's home...did we forget a picture? Leave behind a treasured trinket that fell into a floor board? Maybe a well loved house does capture some of our beloingings just to hold on to us as...

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Posted in change of address

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2019

Hi Jenny,

You take us along on these journeys to your past and we are all grateful travelers.

Your warm remembrances are lit with love and friendship. I really enjoyed the last line, truly fond memories. Thank you for sharing this...

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Posted in Meet Me On The Corner

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This is clearly written with

Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018

This is clearly written with true heartfelt devotion and is powerful in its conviction.

Christmas songs throughout the year- is a lovely thought and one I wish could be true too. For if we could keep the Christmas light in our hearts all...

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Posted in December Christmas Acrostic — 'L' [and previous]

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I had to look it up too

Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018

I had to look it up too (sough) great word to use in this image invoking poem. Loved it.

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Posted in storm cooking

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You've got it all covered

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2017

You've got it all covered here...so intelligently humorous and so very much what the world needs now. Intelligence and humor.

Loved it!...

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Posted in Thumbs Up on Sunday

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I had so much fun reading

Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2017

I had so much fun reading this-- to poop or to fly? - Is that the question? I found the poor penguines plight to be profound and prolific - for the way this old earth is being tortured and climate changed ....we may need to learn to fly too...no...

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Posted in Prodigious Piles of Penguin Poop

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