28 of my comments have received 31 Great Feedback votes
I liked the structure, the
Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019
I liked the structure, the way the words flowed to take you through the moment when everything changed form lovely to painful, like anytime in life when we are hit with something fearful we pray. In this poem, your prayer was answered.
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Posted in There's Something
I found so many ways to
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
I found so many ways to interpret this, one, it sounds like a marvelous garden planted and protected, but two, I feel it is a soul that is planted and defended in that garden and will not venture beyond the wall to where it is not protected. I...Read full comment
Posted in I won't leave my Walled Garden
I love that you respect all
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
I love that you respect all these animals as do I, and I know my dog is smarter than me because he tells me exactly what he wants( food, water, walk) and I listen every time.
Great rhyme and flow of this poem, I loved it and the cherries...Read full comment
Posted in I Talk To the Animals
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
Yes, I know we both wish they had written down those well loved recipes. I have ingredients but nothing of the measurements so her special touch, her loving touch, to all she did is lost to me.
Just as you'd said, the...Read full comment
Posted in Toss in a pinch of love
I often wonder about the
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I often wonder about the house I grew up in, now someone else's home...did we forget a picture? Leave behind a treasured trinket that fell into a floor board? Maybe a well loved house does capture some of our beloingings just to hold on to us as...Read full comment
Posted in change of address
Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2019
You take us along on these journeys to your past and we are all grateful travelers.
Your warm remembrances are lit with love and friendship. I really enjoyed the last line, truly fond memories. Thank you for sharing this...Read full comment
Posted in Meet Me On The Corner
This is clearly written with
Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018
This is clearly written with true heartfelt devotion and is powerful in its conviction.
Christmas songs throughout the year- is a lovely thought and one I wish could be true too. For if we could keep the Christmas light in our hearts all...Read full comment
I had so much fun reading
Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2017
I had so much fun reading this-- to poop or to fly? - Is that the question? I found the poor penguines plight to be profound and prolific - for the way this old earth is being tortured and climate changed ....we may need to learn to fly too...no...Read full comment
Posted in Prodigious Piles of Penguin Poop