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I like the idea of willows
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the idea of willows talking to the moon and hiding nests off moon pearly eggs :0)
Read full commentPosted in There is hope here
I like the waterfall "c"
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the waterfall "c" sounds, in cleft and cliff and crystal - you didn't need to say the sound as the sight words give it, really clever! The last line, every word seems stressed so it is full of the power of a mass of water.
The woods...
Read full commentPosted in Water-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest
beautiful Rhiannon, I
Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2012
beautiful Rhiannon, I particularly like how you use the form to build images then melt them away. Not just clever but creating emotional impact as well. I particularly like the last stanza with its vital surge in the middle like a wave and then...
Read full commentPosted in Poignant ice tribute to Titanic victims (Belfast, 21/10/12)
Luigi I have lost count of
Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020
Luigi I have lost count of the things I have learned from reading your poems. I am glad you got a cherry, you ARE wise, and witty also! No reflection necessary
Read full commentPosted in Reflected Glory
I could not look at the
Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020
I could not look at the pictures. You are so brave to have and made this strong message from them. Beautiful but still holding the horror
Read full commentPosted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
Usually I think of myself as
Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020
Usually I think of myself as clumsy and bad at maths, but you make me feel that subconciously even I must be an engineer :0) I have heard that it is basic jobs that need no "thinking" but involve handmovement we take for granted, that no AI will...
Read full commentPosted in Enablers for the special 10
wow Luigi, you are so full of
Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2019
wow Luigi, you are so full of fascinating information!
Read full commentPosted in Decameron (edited)
the movement in this is
Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2019
the movement in this is wonderful!
taut until
they are forced to evade the sprawled
gapes of nets and whales and
other monsters, snaps of beasts
that can flinch a school from unknowing
to frantic, that...
Read full commentPosted in Mackerel
love "fractures of storms"!
Posted on Sun, 29 Dec 2019
love "fractures of storms"!
Read full commentPosted in The bare bones of trees
I like how you allude to a
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019
I like how you allude to a controlling personality, the way in Maths there is only one right answer:
you have never lost your cold symmetry.
From a distance you appear gentler,
rounder, but closer up I endured
the...
Read full commentPosted in Decagon
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