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"To cut her off to and" didn
Posted on Tue, 16 Oct 2018
"To cut her off to and" didn't understand this line?
this is very angry! I hope you feel better now :0) It's like a speech out of Shakespeare
Read full commentPosted in Your Mother
PLEASE make this story of
Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018
PLEASE make this story of the month!
It's a wonderful read, thankyou so much for posting.
I'm so glad you have a cat friend :0) She is beautiful
Read full commentPosted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...
I'm not sure? It's the mark
Posted on Mon, 01 Oct 2018
I'm not sure? It's the mark of a good short story to reach a conclusion but leave the reader wanting to know what happens next :0)
However there's so much that could go deeper in your story, It's like you've shown one room perfectly, but...
Read full commentPosted in Winterkill (Part Two)
How I used to feel, painting,
Posted on Tue, 02 Oct 2018
How I used to feel, painting, there's this stream, or current, and the stream is the same for anyone who wants to make things, whether no one sees it or lots of people, it's the making that matters
I sympathise so much with the needing...
Read full commentPosted in 9 to 5
Thankyou for posting this! I
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Thankyou for posting this! I think it's brave to be so open about everything. I'm glad the diagnosis has helped. One of the children I worked with, his Dad refused to let him be diagnosed so he didn't get all the help he could have. I'm not sure...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
this is one of those you find
Posted on Sat, 08 Sep 2018
this is one of those you find new bits in each time. So far my favourites are
Despite all this I know even less (I miss being so sure what the right thing to do was when I was younger)
Disordered files...
Read full commentPosted in Feeling Confused about Time
beautiful and moving,
Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018
beautiful and moving, everything you describe seemed to be lit up
Read full commentPosted in Remnants
many clever lines in this,
Posted on Sat, 01 Sep 2018
many clever lines in this, particularly like the idea of hoovering up things wished unsaid! I know from my son talking to his friends online in chat writing how easy it is for things which if said with your voice would be known as a joke can seem...
Read full commentPosted in Healing or Provoking
this is so good, you have all
Posted on Wed, 29 Aug 2018
this is so good, you have all the fascinating busyness and movement, the equivalent of our day and night. I find swirling seaweed mesmerising so particularly liked the second verse as it reminds me of this dreamy feeling of seeing another world
Read full commentPosted in Inter-tidal life
This needs a bit of effort,
Posted on Fri, 24 Aug 2018
This needs a bit of effort, like opening a geode, then more and more bits start to sparkle
"snakes that lie in wait"
"To chase raw deliverance and
Shun the safety of the paved way"
"Both cowardly and brave
To...
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