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2263 of my comments have received 2358 Great Feedback votes

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I like how you wander in and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

I like how you wander in and out of the painting, and memory and conversation. And like the picture, the female seems to hold up the image of the male

 

No men really shine even if they insist

they are armoured in one hundred...

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happy tails, yes :0) Don't

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

happy tails, yes :0) Don't cry! If there is a Heaven he will be waiting to show you, that's what I hope

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Feel for you so much, still

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Feel for you so much, still miss my best friend after 20 years. You are doing all you can, making him happy and feel loved. Beautiful poem shows the strength and peace he has given you xxx

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Even though your thoughts are

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2020

Even though your thoughts are wrapped up in metaphors of birds these poems are so raw. I feel like I am getting to know your emotional state like seeing birds flick between leaves. It seems rude to read them

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I really admire the way  last

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020

I really admire the way  last words in the lines stand out, as with - wild, hurled, and the alliteration of wind and wild. I feel my throat opening like the sky as I read it, to make the long vowel sounds in my mind. Would be a great one to  hear...

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I had not heard of

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

I had not heard of "indwelling"  before. Having looked it up, it's a great word :0) There is a quiet, positive power in this:

"Not so bright to shine beyond

Nor enough to light the way

But an indwelling warmth 

To...

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Posted in Jar of Lights

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I like the details revealing

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

I like the details revealing age, of taking care, of themselves and of each other, the way he holds the glass of water till her fingers grip it is so tender, the way he has to manage his heart, what he can do. Finding music he knew on the radio....

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I love your walking poems,

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

I love your walking poems, with their breathing rhythm. But I love this too, the pause of it:

spitting drizzle – growing
heavier, but nearly back at car – see through
the cloudy veil a gleam of sunshine glowing

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I'm glad :0)

Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

I'm glad :0)

Yes, I always wanted to see one too, there was something magic about how you never do. Years later Mum's cat caught one, I was suprised how tiny it was! It didn't bite or scratch when I picked it up, just wriggled in a muscly...

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Posted in Underground

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I like this one very much.

Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

I like this one very much. Well, not like, because it is grim. Admire. The idea of earthworms being like memories in the tunnels of your mind and "uncoil of earthworms" is wonderful.

"thoughts concealed

until I forgot the existence...

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